Hello guys,
first of all, thank you for your kind comments and valid criticism. I am glad, that you enjoy the game.
I rummaged through the comments quite a bit. I will try to answer as much as I can.
Yes, the dialogue needs improvement. I am always trying my best. But after reading your own text over and over again, you create some form of blindness for mistakes. :S
Currently, I am at a point in my game, where I try to explain a complex issue and it really took a long time to write it. I am still not quite satisfied with the end result. But I just can't do better. Sadly I am not that eloquent.
During sex scenes, it's even more difficult. Other games use a narrator to describe some scenes, but I don't like that very much. I am happier with dialogue only. Adding text to these scenes is quite hard. Dirty talk in my native language doesn't exactly translate that well into English.
Furthermore adding grunts and pants ain't easy too, that's why I often just write "mmmhhhm, hnngh, etc.". But that probably just sounds better in my head.
1. I don't own this thread. If a mod would like to improve it. I would happily send some renders their way.
2. Well, I enjoyed the Bioware games Kotor, Dragon Age, and Mass Effect a lot. And they are my inspirations. In my game, you are working towards different endings and some events will have different outcomes throughout the game. Currently, there are quite a few decisions that will open up or lock new content. Tho' the story path is linear, it widens from time to time, but will always merge again later.
3. Implementing this was quite difficult. The first problem was to find a fitting sound. I didn't wanna make the puzzle too hard, but not too easy as well. I added the puzzle because I didn't want people to think Thalna just got her new abilities handed over and didn't need to do anything for it.
Sorry about your ears. I tested the puzzle and had no problems with the sound. I always test the sound settings, especially to prevent something like this from happening. Sorry. :S
I always let my patrons decide which characters they would like to see in the unlockable scene. This time I even made a poll for the last sex scene. Thalna and Catha won both polls.
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If someone still has any questions ask away. But I won't spoil the plot of future updates.