The developer could have delivered a sex scene with a willing Jennifer, but she could have begged to be fucked but begged for a condom.
She was only thinking about sex, nothing else... It is only after the third time (if I remember correctly) that the landlord tells her that he will creampie her that the risk of pregnancy comes across her head... What makes your alternative better than what is done ?
And in case you did not notice, the fact MC fears to be pregnant is important for the cliffhanger... I am ager to see what will happen there...
Now we get groping, kissing, groping, kissing ...
Done at the beginning of a sexual intercourse, it is called foreplay... A problem with that too ?
and then suddenly BOOM a fucking creampie where the female is begging for it. To fast and unrealistic.
Suddenly? define suddenly... You and me have not the same definition...
Before the actual creampie fuck, she is fucked on wall in two positions and in front of the mirror. I liked this latter idea : a way for the landlord to let MC see her true color according to him...
If your audience dislikes condoms, do a body shot where Jennifer is begging not to be cummed inside, then progress to her not carring anymore.
You did not understand the idea I think the dev had imho.
When she realized she is on pregnancy risk when her landlord told her he will creampie her, instead of listen to her reason which could have decrease her arousal, she submitted to the corruption that grows within her and that aroused her to this naughty idea to let him do so : that is how I understood the scene (it makes sense).
And in the case you grasped that, again, what makes yours better ? I saw your alternative a dozen of times in hentai stuff (female shy student fucked by her PE teacher begging him to not creampie her)
[...] why the developer needs to add subplots and more characters.
I disagree with your "this inability for gradual corruption" but you have a point about side characters... Until this update I had no idea why...
But now, thanks to the split in chapters, I think I know... I think the dev wanted to add as many side characters as possible he planned to be in the game asap to introduce them...
If I am right, in chapter 2, those side characters may started to be used (build their link to MC) rather than new to be introduced.
My opinion is simple for the v8 update - this is a pretty INCONSISTENT game in terms of CORRUPTION PROGRESSION.
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He does not know how to gradually increase tension and corruption with the main character, so he has to provide filler with other characters and resort to "her mind goes blank" bullshit when it's time for something big to happen.
Here I have the proof you don't remember the previous updates or you don't care about them... You must dislike them but they are important to understand what's going on for MC in this update and in the game.... Sadly for you...
She does not start this update with zero corruption : all previous updates led her
to be tempted to have sex with the coffee shop owner and the landlord because her boyfriend refused to have sex with her and she became an easy prey for both men because she has low self confidence.
Her self confidence not only is low but even dropped more because she had the feeling she did not manage to convince her boyfriend to have sex with her : after their date, she had the feeling she failed, she was almost fucked by the landlord as a result...
Another point to not underestimate : MC and her boyfriend are in a long distance relationship : usually a doom for love.
However, I concede without problem that a lot of important points for the story are sometimes drowned in fillers so far. I hope the dev to improve that.