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This will make people happy, Joe. Also, a couple of suggestions for additions that I think might be reasonably simple to implement, but that would add significantly:You will enjoy the next release then.
1. Take a sharp blue pencil to the cluttered first four chapters. The best wordsmithing edits are often deletions...
2. Shortened versions of Susan or Ginny's scenes for one or more of the other main characters.
And in case nobody says it, thanks for engaging the community here.