- Aug 5, 2016
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After being warned this was basically a story and not a game, I was enjoying the opening. Dumbledore getting the crazy requests from the girls was fun, as was the plot to have our MC become the temporary headmaster in an actual effort to have him removed. That's interesting. I'm down for bad fan-fiction with pictures sometimes.
Then having a headmaster who can do literally jack shit is boring as fuck though. The goddamn headmaster can't deduct points from students? What fucking brain-dead idiocy is that? Teachers, who are under the headmaster, won't even use his name? Put those cunts on leave since I'm sure firing would require the board. Or just make their lives hell. That we play a completely powerless pussy (despite him showing magical power to Snape) is just lazy because the authors wanted to make Witch Trainer 2 and don't fucking know how to do it in a narratively consistent way. You can't give the MC the top position in the school and then just tell us "nope, you're just a little powerless bitch lol."
Also, the framing story is not needed and seems to just distract from the rest of it. Just make us some pervert accepting the head nurse position as the opening and drop the cell mess.
Then having a headmaster who can do literally jack shit is boring as fuck though. The goddamn headmaster can't deduct points from students? What fucking brain-dead idiocy is that? Teachers, who are under the headmaster, won't even use his name? Put those cunts on leave since I'm sure firing would require the board. Or just make their lives hell. That we play a completely powerless pussy (despite him showing magical power to Snape) is just lazy because the authors wanted to make Witch Trainer 2 and don't fucking know how to do it in a narratively consistent way. You can't give the MC the top position in the school and then just tell us "nope, you're just a little powerless bitch lol."
Also, the framing story is not needed and seems to just distract from the rest of it. Just make us some pervert accepting the head nurse position as the opening and drop the cell mess.