If you concede a cheat button becomes available.Thanks, will try to find some tips.
If you concede a cheat button becomes available.Thanks, will try to find some tips.
Thats why i said more then some pointers and some tips are pretty hard on everyones skill who could help you in this forum. Not only is the price a huge one but to actually find a writer that knows about game developing and rewrite stuff inside the code or knows stuff about programming at all while still not charging a fortune to do so should be an impossible task.A professional editor for the amount of text is 10k, a real rework from a professional writer is way beyond that. The issue with people offering free help, even as a professional writer, they have far less game experience or programming etc. You have to work with text that sits within code, every time someone offers to help, and see's the code and flow... they bomb hard.
While I can and will go back and revisit the previous texts, having people tell me to do it while progressing the story is unrealistic. People thinking that I am against critiques are completely wrong, it's just so much to take in all at once. Look how many pages in this thread since release. I am but a mere human, sorry.
Time versus development, I can't even explain the amount of tasks I take on plus holding a full time job. I don't mind suggestions, the problem is I have to go in and do a lot of the work. I started to rework chapter 4, the flow of the game is horrible right now. The core of the game needs a rework to full flesh everything out without breaking it further.Thats why i said more then some pointers and some tips are pretty hard on everyones skill who could help you in this forum. Not only is the price a huge one but to actually find a writer that knows about game developing and rewrite stuff inside the code or knows stuff about programming at all while still not charging a fortune to do so should be an impossible task.
Of course its unrealistic to want you to do all that while still working on the game but what i learned from this forum or gaming in general is that ppl demand (not want) stuff yesterday and get mad as fuck if you dont deliver. So pleasing the demand of gamers is an impossible task.
I didnt mean to offend you and maybe i did, if so i apologize of course but to me it appeard that way that you are not interested in critique. Sorry about that as well.
Maybe we could arrange a suggestion thread or if that is not up to the rules of the forum a kind of formattin of the text so you could check on suggestions alone while not reading through the entire thread/forum to adress them. Just an idea.
If you've guessed the burnished color three times in a row you've see as much as you're goin to see in the minigame. Apparently if you buy the $1000 bathwater from the magazine and throw it on her you get to see her tits but my game is bugged to where i cant grad papers so I havent verified that yet.Question, Is there anything new with Daphne? I mean i have 50 streak guessing her underwear... I Saw all her undies yet
You are correct for the most part.Its actually pretty hard for a pro writer to help here.
I dont know who else is a professional writer in this forum aside from me but to actually work on this game (story wise) would cost the dev a pretty penny which i highly doubt the dev team would pay to actually rise this story to something lets say more substantial.