WirelessDemon
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I like the idea! (and obviously I'll have to fuck with the story some xD )hey,so i've decided to try something,i've made an edit and given it a backstory as to how the edit happened,i thought it might be fun to try and explain how it came to be instead of just posting it as is,if you all like it enough then i'll post more backstories with edits,if not,well i'll just post the edits,anyway,here's the story and edit.
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"now,what's this ?"
as the headmaster of hogwarts,you have access to every single part of the school,including the chamber of secrets where,one day,you find a hidden book full of forbidden spells,one of which is a spell that wipes a person's mind completely and puts them under the caster's full control,an irreversable spell called controllus maximus.
after mastering the spell by practising on various staff members,you decide to try it out on someone who you could get more use out of,you rack your brain to try and figure out just who to use it on,who you could realistically take control of who nobody would bat an eye at if they 'dissapeared',then it hits you.
"luna lovegood,perfect"
later that day,you make your way to the dorms of ravenclaw,using alohomora to unlock her room door,once inside,a shocked luna,upon seeing you,opens her mouth to try and say something,but you simply say,having allready closed the door.
"controllus maximus !"
luna's eyes go blank,and her mind starts to dissapear,she tries her hardest to try and fight against it,but despite her struggles,her mind goes away fast,leaving her completely under your full control.
"luna,can you hear me ?"
"yes....master..."
"good,good"
luna was your's,and now you can finally take your prize-what will you do with her first ? View attachment 483449
very good,very good indeed,what i wouldnt give to have luna under my controlAn image that ShadowSamurai posted made me want to try my hand at creating my own. So here it is Luna the hypnotized Harem Girl.
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I'd say you could for 100 Galleons an hour, but I'm not sharing her.very good,very good indeed,what i wouldnt give to have luna under my control
i mean,that's completely fair,i wouldnt let anyone touch my prized luna either.I'd say you could for 100 Galleons an hour, but I'm not sharing her.
I'll gladly rent out Hermione, Susan and Daphne, but Luna and Ginny are mine.![]()
I'll give you the Friends and Family discount.i mean,that's completely fair,i wouldnt let anyone touch my prized luna either.
that being said,i'd happily rent daphne out from you,but i best get some loyalty benefits heh.
sounds good to me,and you,of course,will get 70% off all your drinks when you come to my tavern.I'll give you the Friends and Family discount.
not only does she no longer look mildly annoyed,she looks like she'd be a great money maker at my tavern,just saying.I mean.... I'd like a "Sweet Alabama" - deal on that!!
I'll rent me some Hermionie, Ginny and a side-dish of Ron for the night!!
Ginny's totally down for some of that, just look at her! Totally down for some Alabama-style debauchery!
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