- Jun 13, 2017
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Not only a spellchecker, but flat out a writer. I get it, it's smut. But Warhams smut can be good, and the writing here is barely adequate. On the level of "painful to read at length" .Cool art but you should definitely get a spell checker of sorts.
Art's great, dev should drop down at the Warhams smut thread in /aco/ and recruit a writer or two. Even the intro lacks the proper Warhammer ... "ambience"? C'mon, every beginning should at least echo the traditional
"IT IS THE 41st MILLENNIUM. FOR MORE THAN A HUNDRED CENTURIES THE EMPEROR HAS SAT IMMOBILE ON THE GOLDEN THRONE OF EARTH...." etcetera
Before he gets laywer-drop-pod'ed to death, of course.