(I actually really enjoyed this.
I think it's very grindy, and I have NEVER been a fan of the fade-in over time where I can't read at my own pace. However, there's a simple joy in hunting, and I enjoy the sex scenes and approach with the women so far. It's pretty straightforward however in my opinion, it works.
What I think is a flaw right now? Is not telling me when content is reached for certain things. The demon lady tells me to keep getting favor and doing dark rituals, however I'm pretty sure whatever other spells I was supposed to have are not in this version.
Similar with the gang members, weed-selling is locked behind expensive prostitution, and that alone is fine, however... why do they run out of prostitutes? Not even a 'general' prostitute interaction after that? Seems kind of weird. And I'm fairly certain I can no longer progress and do more fun things with them and get in further with the local gang.
Two things I noticed however.
The 'sell your kid' option. It kinda pops up out of nowhere. It's a very useful money-maker, however... where do I know these human traffickers from? Why haven't I been using them to buy people myself? Or sell women who I'm bored with, for that matter? ... Personally, I'd probably keep it in for now until more methods of getting money are implemented in the game, however at some point, lock it behind something, like enough gang reputation, or another criminal element or the like.
Second, the Theater acting lessons. I only did them a couple of times, so perhaps I missed something, however they're 200 dollars for 1 Charisma, whereas if you mingle with the ladies, you can potentially gain a ton of charisma. Even at only one, it's 50 dollars instead of 200. So right now, the Theater doesn't seem to have a purpose, and is in fact a misleading money sink at first.
Again though, I really enjoyed this. I think there's plenty of fertile ground here and it's peeked my interest. What I personally hope to see is some kind of bondage and/or enslavement and training options with the women. Possibly selling them, possibly prostituting them out, keeping them as pets, etc. Methods for using them further, and of course, methods to be nice to them to. I like to play a villain, doesn't mean I can't have favorites. Of course the rest of the roster, asian, black, latina, to give us a good full spectrum. And potentially further individual characterization with the hunted women.
Those are my initial thoughts, however mainly? I wanted to let you know that I did in fact enjoy what you put out. And all my critiquing is from a place of desiring further improvement, because I want to see more of this. In any case, that's my peace for now, thank you.)