VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Tremonia]

The fact that this is not a harem game is just heart breaking.

No, it's not. There're plenty really good harem games here which are enjoyable because the story is made for a harem. If this story would go down this path it would destroy the whole game.

 

[Just Jericho]

The fact that this is not a harem game is just heart breaking.

Any game is a harem game with enough saves and a little imagination!

 

[MaliPizdek]

Erynn sex tape please

 

[JoeAngel]

The fact that this is not a harem game is just heart breaking.

I don't agree with you I mean It's Silly I got a lot Of Games with harem ending But it's still silly it's Like
MC:hey Baby Your My Girlfriend
The Other Girl : wtf What About Me
MC :Your My Girlfriend That I want To see Nude now
3 Girl : What ABOUT ME DID YOU FORGET ME
MC : Your My Bitch I love You So Much Your ALL my Girls
(Me Watching This With Smile While thinking WTF is wrong With this Girls xD lol Jut For Gallary To Open Let's Have ALL)

 

[JoeAngel]

No, it's not. There're plenty really good harem games here which are enjoyable because the story is made for a harem. If this story would go down this path it would destroy the whole game.

Once in a Life Time
One Of the Best

 

[Tremonia]

Erynn sex tape please

Here:

 

[JoeAngel]

Remember that one time when a dude was so upset that Erynn didn't save her virginity for the MC even when he was gone for five years that he rage quit and deleted Intertwined? He complained that Erynn was "unfaithful" to MC, even though the dude she banged was her boyfriend at the time.

I guess for some folks, any whiff of an LI having sex with someone other than the MC counts as "NTR" even though that man is a boyfriend or husband.

I don't agree with him it's Not Ntr It's Just Sad that she didn't Save it For the one And all
And ofc This ONE
we All want it to be The MC

 

[Nurikabe]

Here:

View attachment 2774839

Dude, you just re-triggered everyone!
I already want to kill this ass. And if the guy she was with knew it was being filmed, I want to cut off his junk and feed it to Ethan. I'm feeling generous so, I will leave it at that.

 

[JoeAngel]

Here:

View attachment 2774839

That scene Was Heart breaking I kinda Felt rage and sad but I got Smile when John Show up

 

[greenjf]

I

That scene Was Heart breaking I kinda Felt rage and sad but I got Smile when John Show up

I always have Val show up. I guess I treat her too nice, I can't stand that idiot that's supposed to be our friend.

 

[XdeynamiX]

Here:

View attachment 2774839

Nice one

 

[Elduriel]

Dude, you just re-triggered everyone!
I already want to kill this ass. And if the guy she was with knew it was being filmed, I want to cut off his junk and feed it to Ethan. I'm feeling generous so, I will leave it at that.

and then cut off Ethans and feed that to Zach for good measure

 

[JoeAngel]

I thought to myself Let's do Some Analyze Characters

 

[NebulousShooter]

It's not a path i would favor in my "main" playthrough, but it's certainly something daring to explore in alternative runs.
Wether because of attachment to the character or fear of the "WE ARE GETTING CUCKED(despite this being easily avoidable)" crowd, she went for vanilla.

I feel like this isn't the only example where personal attachment to the characters may have hurt the story, things like Layla taking being ditched for her sister without any issues felt weird and detached, Nyx can write better than this, i know, i've seen it... maybe comes from not wanting to see her characters looking like a crazy emotional mess that some players will make fun of.
For all the teasing that things will go balistic if these girls find out about each other, there's awful little fireworks.

I will also say that despite this game giving you the option to be a manwhore that flirts with every girl in town, it doesn't do it well.
When you are with a girl the game defaults to you caring deeply about this girl and not to "i want to get laid, and i will lie and deceive for it".
The sloooooow burns(and how patient our guy always is with it) aren't suited to a guy that just wants to sleep around.



The fact that Nyx herself says, "i'm not happy with this scene, it's gonna be released in this state anyways and i will change it at later date" makes it sound like poor planning, maybe re-address this now, do the necessary nips and tucks before releasing?
Not to mention she already hinted that there's one specific occurance on the MC-Erynn-Alexis triangle that she means to change from past chapters, and she said that after she had just released a reboot version...

For the enormous amount of 'Layla is jealous' shots in the game, I would have assumed a yandere-eque possible path, but she seems ok with just taking it after a while which is just sad, since she seems like good people.

 

[JoeAngel]

Gabi deserves more strength
And would be cool to Analyze the male characters

you mean the Mc Or Zack ? xD lol
it would be easy to give them Titles
Let's start with the bad
Ethan (THE BULLY PUSSY)
Zack (THE SD&SB{SMALL DICK & SMALL BRAIN}) Or (THE PIG SHIT)
John (THE BIKER LION)
MC Father (THE HUNTER SEDUCER)
MC I would say That up to every player how he play and go with option
and about Gabi I didn't see her play any sport and also her body say that she's not into sport other wise she would be like Lexi mom or even the Mc mother or Melissa

 

[MaliPizdek]

Here:

View attachment 2774839

I saw that but we don't see what MC sees, right? And who is that ex bf, any pics of him?

 

[JoeAngel]

I saw that but we don't see what MC sees, right? And who is that ex bf, any pics of him?

will for me i don't want to see what the Mc sees if you put in your mind you will understand why you can't look at friend the same way you used to

 

[valbitterb]

 

[cxx]

not gonna happen.

 

[LSC82]

For the enormous amount of 'Layla is jealous' shots in the game, I would have assumed a yandere-eque possible path, but she seems ok with just taking it after a while which is just sad, since she seems like good people.

Yup, everything we knew about her pointed in this direction, young, a little immature, (likely) first love, crazy possessive and jealous... perfect recipe for a emotional storm.
Yet, she gets the news that the guy she's been obssessing about is ending things with her... and it's because of her sister of all people!!!!

She gets the news, is a little sad, but moves on rather quickly... immediately becomes good friends with the guy that just broke her heart and is very supportive of him with his sister, she's too much of a good sport for me to buy it.

Funny enough, she flies off the handle and doesn't wanna talk to Alexis or the MC(and keeps this up for a few days at least) if you choose to reveal you banged Alexis in the pizza place date
That's more in line with the previously established character, and honestly more relatable and endearing, characters showing passion and emotion in even in a break up is what it's all about.
No one plays these things to see prople be reasonable and logical.