VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[xXwankerXx]

I assure you, it's bullshit, just like other revelations before this. MC is not related to Lexi or Layla.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not one of them bois who want incest in this story. If Nyx doesn't want it, I respect her decision, but did you get to the part where Lexi tells him Santiago is her and her sister's dad right after the MC finally made a 9000+ IQ move and deduced the guy's his bio dad ?? Nyx admitted some haters already reported her for this stuff, that's why I'm asking.

And you should open your eyes.

And you should watch your mouth and manners, if you don't have anything constructive to add to this conversation. This isn't the first time you react like this to ppl who don't even reply to you, so I kindly ask you keep your opinions to yourself, if you don't know how to have a polite conversation on a fictional topic or just don't like what somebody posts.

But who knows what we will get...

Thought the same thing myself, and it's not me the one who's paranoid, but since she was already reported to Patreon for the big 'revelation' at the end of this update, a lil concern is warranted, I'd say.

Can I ask who did Ethan tried to blackmail? I don't mind spoilers

The blonde girl on the cover playing the guitar, Erynn, MC's childhood friend and LI. Ethan's a complete asshole who wants to pimp her out to all kinds of shady idiots or keep her for himself so he can spite the MC after he fucks her. So far, he's the most hated male character in the game, with the backstabbing idiot Zach coming close, so don't feel bad about taking your anger out on him. The dev even encourages you to go all out on him.

I thought, “Shit, he killed Ethan?” Because that is what “fatality” means. But no; Ethan gets up.

And frankly I wouldn’t mind seeing what might happen if the MC did kill Ethan. He’d be in the deepest shit, but still.

Yep, I wholeheartedly agree. Tho we can be a lil creative for once and throw him and Zach in some sort of a gladiator match to the death and see who the last idiot on his feet is at the end of it. The police can tell him a few things about all the benefits of being put in prison for life for murder and being too stupid for his own good as a 'reward' for winning.

 

[Dessolos]

You should play this update till the end and pay attention to the last 'revelation' lol. It's crazy how Nyx thinks she can pull off a stunt like that and also bullshit her way out of Patreon's 'holly' inquisition against fictional porn.

Nyx literally got approval by Patron from what i read, which is why as much as I like the cliffhanger to some extent it loses it's effect on me and feels like it's there for shock value.

 

[Maviarab]

And you should watch your mouth and manners, if you don't have anything constructive to add to this conversation.

You thought that was bad manners?

 

[Elduriel]

Don't get me wrong, I'm not one of them bois who want incest in this story. If Nyx doesn't want it, I respect her decision, but did you get to the part where Lexi tells him Santiago is her and her sister's dad right after the MC finally made a 9000+ IQ move and deduced the guy's his bio dad ?? Nyx admitted some haters already reported her for this stuff, that's why I'm asking.

of course I did. Still doesn't matter. She explicitly said there won't be incest. And Patreon would take her page down if there was. She actually is in contact with them (because of the reports etc.) and highlighted her plan for the future. That's how we know that what was said at the end of last episode wasn't the full story. If it was they'd suspend her patreon. I think this image is appropriate here

 

[xXwankerXx]

You thought that was bad manners?

Nah, I KNOW it can always be worse, but a reaction like that on a harmless fictional topic sounds ridiculous in this case, don't ya think ??

Nyx literally got approval by Patron from what i read

She actually is in contact with them (because of the reports etc.) and highlighted her plan for the future. That's how we know that what was said at the end of last episode wasn't the full story. If it was they'd suspend her patreon.

Ok. Guess I missed that part in all the recent comments posted in the thread, but I'm glad to hear it nonetheless, cuz I'm curious to see how things keep unfolding from now on and how the story ends.

 

[dolfe67]

Maybe a "surprise" incest is ok for patreon? Like a bad character raping a girl is ok? It's the "glorified practice" who is forbidden, from MC's pov.

It's such a shame if the game is spoiled by patreon's TOS...

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Whre do you put this in /game?

Yes, like every other patch, they go in the folder called "game", and overwrite when asked.

 

[Bad Wolf]

Alexis' mom needs a first name and surname

She already has a first name and a surname. Adriana Monroe. Right?

 

[LSC82]

About Adriana's last name (and first name), most probably random selected from patrons suggestions. Based on this post:

A Post from: Nyx

Alexis' mom needs a name

Hey,

Alexis' mom needs a first name and surname (her maiden name, it won't be the family name of Alexis). If you have any suggestions, please leave a comment.
I will create 2 polls (one for the first name, the other for the surname) in a few days with your ideas.

Thank you very much!

You must be registered to see the links

I'm not sure if any other names selected by patrons .

I think there was this other time where she asked for cool surnames, but simply suggestions and she was going to decide on which one herself.
And she had this idea for different surnames for mom and daughters ever since 2020, which means she has been planning some kind of trap for a long time.

She already has a first name and a surname. Adriana Monroe. Right?

2 things, first this post is from 2020.

Second, she is Adriana Moore not Monroe, her daughters are Monroe.

 

[Bad Wolf]

I think there was this other time where she asked for cool surnames, but simply suggestions and she was going to decide on which one herself.
And she had this idea for different surnames for mom and daughters ever since then.


2 things, first this post is from 2020.

Second, she is Adriana Moore not Monroe, her daughters are Monroe.

Yeah, I didn't click on the link to verify the date and my mistake on the last name. I know Alexis's so, eh.

 

[Impurity2937]

Oh, new update. Enough content to be worth checking out or just wait for the next one?

 

[Maviarab]

Oh, new update. Enough content to be worth checking out or just wait for the next one?

Unless on an Erynn save...leave till next update.

 

[луна]

About Adriana's last name (and first name), most probably random selected from patrons suggestions. Based on this post:

A Post from: Nyx

Alexis' mom needs a name

Hey,

Alexis' mom needs a first name and surname (her maiden name, it won't be the family name of Alexis). If you have any suggestions, please leave a comment.
I will create 2 polls (one for the first name, the other for the surname) in a few days with your ideas.

Thank you very much!

You must be registered to see the links

I'm not sure if any other names selected by patrons .

Sage Monroe

 

[Elduriel]

The only...single contencious thing in this VN (which I'm still utterly fucking amazed she got away with)...is her showing literal animated chi1d p0rn, because the MC is very definitely under 18 (Iris would 19/20 in the first flashback sex scene MC is 16).

Iris should be 18 there no? She is still in high school at the time

 

[Maviarab]

Iris should be 18 there no? She is still in high school at the time

She can't be. She in college with Lexi...sharing a dorm room. Makes her same age as Lexi and Erynn and they are three years older than the MC (approx). MC has no tattoo...they dated for '2 years' (dialogue in the game)...he just turned 18 before returning back home to Emily. Makes the MC 16 when he met Iris, going on 17 possibly and Iris 19 going on 20 (as we don't know exact dates of birth...though we have to assume the MC was born after Feb...otherwise if was pre December, he'd be in the next year higher of school..meaning he'd have already left high school and be in college himself.). Have to remember, all this takes place (present time) literally 2 to 3 months before they leave high school. Another case of Nyx trying to fudge the rules of high school kids being in 'school'.

Regardless, that still makes the MC a legal minor which even with an animated scene, is a serious, serious no no. People (and Nyx) can fudge this scene however they like, unfortunately the dialogue presented in the game proves the MC is under 18.

 

[Bad Wolf]

Iris should be 18 there no? She is still in high school at the time

I think Iris was 17 and MC was 16, maybe 17.

She can't be. She in college with Lexi...sharing a dorm room. Makes her same age as Lexi and Erynn and they are three years olfer than the MC (approx). MC has no tattoo...thye dated for '2 years' (dialogue in the game)...he just turned 18 before returning back home to Emily. Makes the MC 16 when he met Iris, going on 17 possibly and Iris 19 going on 20 (as we don't know exact dates of birth...though we have to assume the MC was born after Feb...otherwise if was pre December, he'd be in the next year higher of school..meaning he'd have already left high school and be in college himself.). Have to remember, all this takes place (present time) literally 2 to 3 months before they leave high school. Another case of Nyx trying to fudge the rules of high school kids being in 'school'.

Regardless, that still makes the MC a legal minor which even with an animated scene, is a serious, serious no no.

Or I'm wrong.

 

[Elduriel]

She can't be. She in college with Lexi...sharing a dorm room. Makes her same age as Lexi and Erynn and they are three years older than the MC (approx). MC has no tattoo...they dated for '2 years' (dialogue in the game)...he just turned 18 before returning back home to Emily. Makes the MC 16 when he met Iris, going on 17 possibly and Iris 19 going on 20 (as we don't know exact dates of birth...though we have to assume the MC was born after Feb...otherwise if was pre December, he'd be in the next year higher of school..meaning he'd have already left high school and be in college himself.). Have to remember, all this takes place (present time) literally 2 to 3 months before they leave high school. Another case of Nyx trying to fudge the rules of high school kids being in 'school'.

Regardless, that still makes the MC a legal minor which even with an animated scene, is a serious, serious no no. People (and Nyx) can fudge this scene however they like, unfortunately the dialogue presented in the game proves the MC is under 18.

hmm that still doesn't add up... Lexi is 20, going from the conversation with her mom. Presumably she is the same age as Erynn and Iris. That flashback was like 2 years ago? So that would make her 18 at the time. Being 19/20 and still in highschool is unlikely. But I agree, doesn't really matter in the grand scheme of things, that scene would have taken down other games, not sure how she managed it.

 

[cxx]

I think Iris was 17 and MC was 16, maybe 17.

she was over 18 at that time and mc was 16 maybe 15. no specific ages given otherwise patreon would throw fit and boot nyx.

 

[Maviarab]

hmm that still doesn't add up... Lexi is 20, going from the conversation with her mom. Presumably she is the same age as Erynn and Iris. That flashback was like 2 years ago? So that would make her 18 at the time. Being 19/20 and still in highschool is unlikely. But I agree, doesn't really matter in the grand scheme of things, that scene would have taken down other games, not sure how she managed it.

Yeah it's a weird one for sure.

I mean don't get me wrong, I have no issues with the scene and love young Iris (far more than present day Iris)....but...*shakes head*...blows my mind how 1. it's still in the VN and 2. How she not been arrrested for it.

she was over 18 at that time and mc was 16 maybe 15. no specific ages given otherwise patreon would throw fit and boot nyx.

Specific ages are irelevent. They also are irelevent to patreon. We know how old the MC is on the plane. He says himself..dated for 2 years. No matter how you spin it...the dialogue itself proves he's a minor.

 

[cxx]

Yeah it's a weird one for sure.

I mean don't get me wrong, I have no issues with the scene and love young Iris (far more than present day Iris)....but...*shakes head*...blows my mind how 1. it's still in the VN and 2. How she not been arrrested for it.


Specific ages are irelevent. They also are irelevent to patreon. We know how old the MC is on the plane. He says himself..dated for 2 years. No matter how you spin it...the dialogue itself proves he's a minor.

yes we know he was minor at that time but there's big diff in rl if has sex with 15 years old or is partner 16 years old.