MrD812

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I don't know if this was an error or intentional but it seemed kind of strange at the time.

When Nikki hugs you from behind and you can choose how to handle the situation. I chose to tell her that I was in a relationship. After this she backs off and leaves you alone. BUT if you sleep on the sofa and pull her towards you the rest of the game plays out as though you never told her anything. She never mentions your relationship again and everything plays out as though Nikki and the MC are together. Is this an error or does Nikki just not care that the MC has a GF?
You have solid points from perspective with this all here.
Others i know personally have pointed out to me specific scenarios not unlike what You've stated here.
Obvious inconsistencies may be a plan or motive Nyx has, i can only guess.

Unless it's just blatant oversight, tooo many things going on.
Things start getting left undone, overlooked, incomplete, loose-ends never sorted, ect ect ect.
Erynn's path is riddled with these inconsistencies.

Almost as if, an editor took a writers story and butchered it.
Leaving things not like what happens in actual life or as some ppl say, "not like IRL".
Can speculate all we want, wait and see or .... not ever find out 'why'.

Ball is in Nyx court on 'why' or 'WTF is the deal'.
Would not advise to hold Your breath on it and that applies to us all.
 

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You have solid points from perspective with this all here.
Others i know personally have pointed out to me specific scenarios not unlike what You've stated here.
Obvious inconsistencies may be a plan or motive Nyx has, i can only guess.

Unless it's just blatant oversight, tooo many things going on.
Things start getting left undone, overlooked, incomplete, loose-ends never sorted, ect ect ect.
Erynn's path is riddled with these inconsistencies.

Almost as if, an editor took a writers story and butchered it.
Leaving things not like what happens in actual life or as some ppl say, "not like IRL".
Can speculate all we want, wait and see or .... not ever find out 'why'.

Ball is in Nyx court on 'why' or 'WTF is the deal'.
Would not advise to hold Your breath on it and that applies to us all.
its probably connected with Nyx inability to put somethings into the story!

Like Alexis attraction to the MC, she had to redo several parts in ep.1 by making Lexi notice the MC outside of Laykin´s tattoo parlour!

i did a research in my company database and i found 2 Erynn´s and 1 Laykin... it seems north American north side of the midwest so basically german america.... but considering the amount of germans my company works with if that was the situation i should have had 5-10 times more germans showing up with such names! so right place of origin but probably from Norway or sweaden!

This game is more about crème brûlée than chocolate.
it was but not anymore, Nyx lost her teeth when she refused to kill Nikki by an unnatural overdose of iron to her organism (or what we call in my country being ran down by a 2 ton vehicle)!

perhaps with Erynn she will do it for some paths if you had no interest in her she will go into coma in the hospital while if you did you searched more closely and harder and found her before hypothermia and the subsequent coma set in... really coma? well it suits well with the soap opera motive of the series!
 

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its probably connected with Nyx inability to put somethings into the story!

Like Alexis attraction to the MC, she had to redo several parts in ep.1 by making Lexi notice the MC outside of Laykin´s tattoo parlour!

i did a research in my company database and i found 2 Erynn´s and 1 Laykin... it seems north American north side of the midwest so basically german america.... but considering the amount of germans my company works with if that was the situation i should have had 5-10 times more germans showing up with such names! so right place of origin but probably from Norway or sweaden!
Areas do seem like she's 'shooting from the hip' with things that are just......
NOT going to happen the way they do in this VN.
You know very well what i'm on about.

As for Erynn's and Laykin's.
Have known countless Erynn's but NOT ONE, who spells her name the same as this-->Erynn
Have never met, seen or known of a Laykin that i recall off-hand.... till reading this AVN.
 

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Areas do seem like she's 'shooting from the hip' with things that are just......
NOT going to happen the way they do in this VN.
You know very well what i'm on about.

As for Erynn's and Laykin's.
Have known countless Erynn's but NOT ONE, who spells her name the same as this-->Erynn
Have never met, seen or known of a Laykin that i recall off-hand.... till reading this AVN.
I'm with you on the Erynn name but I did goto to HS with a Laykin but it was spelled Laykyn but I guess is pronounced the same way? She was Swedish if that makes any diff.
 
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I'm with you on the Erynn name but I did goto to HS with a Laykin but it was spelled Laykyn but I guess is pronounced the same way? She was Swedish if that makes any diff.
Woe Hey Now, what was that Laykyn like?!?!
Sorry if that's to personal.
Was she anything like the one in this VN?
 

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She was cool I guess, we ran in different circles but the few times I talked to her she was pretty out going.
NICE, somehow i could picture someone with that name being unique indeed!!!
Appreciate You sharing, sincerely.
Thank You~(y)
 
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How do Valeria lick MC face?
I did nothing wrong, reject all girls at first sight and she still blame me for something.
You must have missed some of her approval scenes. Dont do anything that Zach would do like look at her phone when you know it made her unconformable to look at her ass shots. (as nice as it is.) TBH Val is the only reason I'm still playing this lol.
 
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Tori is an underrated character. I think she gets overlooked because players dislike her for being a mean slutty bitch, but she's a well written mean slutty bitch, and that makes her one of the better characters in the game. She's quite different from the main girls, fills her current role in the story very well, and has the potential to create several differnt paths in the future.

Tori is an unabashed maneater and everyone knows it. I love how Zach (the biggest horndog in the game) is disgusted by your choice of Tori if you choose her for your answer of which girl is the hottest.

Zach: "Tori? What the hell... She isn't bad looking, I give you that. But just her reputation alone."
MC: "I know, but somehow, I don't know what exactly it is. She turns me on."
Zach: "There is something majorly wrong with you dude."
MC: "Ha ha."

and a bit later...

MC: "I think she's put a spell on me or something. I can't get her out of my head."
Zach: "There's clearly something wrong up there."

This is one of my favourite conversations in the game. It was perfect because it exactly mirrored my feeling towards Tori. There was none of the "deep down she's a nice person" foolishness. Instead, it was the classic scenario where you know something is a bad idea, but do it anyways because it's just too tempting.

There was a moment where Tori was enjoying the way the main character was kissing her neck, and she suddenly got a shocked/frightened look on her face before making him stop and saying "No-no-no... We're not doing that. You're here to eat my pussy and fuck me. That's it." That could be a set up for some sort of a melt the heart of the ice queen path with Tori in the future, but it's unlikely many players would be interested in a Tori relationship unless there was some sort of a redemption arc for her first.

A redemption arc would be a hard sell, but it could happen if she did something like help get rid of Lucas or help take down Ethan. Tori doesn't seem to be overly cruel to anyone, at least not to a cartoonishly ridiculous level that would make a redemption arc impossibly stupid. Tori is a fairly realistic mean girl antagonist, rather than an absurd characiture that you can find in another game. She hasn't blackmailed anyone into getting naked so she could push them out into the streets, tasered anyone in the throat until they passed out, or attempted to rape anyone while they were tied to a chair. She did spread some sort of hurtful rumour about Layla in the past, and she will pretend not to know you the day after you hook up. That's about it so far.

Another possible route we could see in the future would be one where Tori starts to fall for the MC, and then he dumps her after Layla tells him a sob story about how mean Tori was to her in the past. Hooking up with Tori and her hot cheerleader friend Jasmine just to rub it in Darryl's face is another thing that could happen, and probably the most likely path as it's already set up well. And even if she just stayed the slutty bitch she is now, and didn't have any big character arcs, I would still enjoy having her in the game.
 

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Last little update before I'll leave for my vacation.

Basically working on the last Cara Saturday scene. I've put in a nice little secret in that scene which will be revealed in a later episode. There's also a hint in another scene. I'm interested if someone will figure it out beforehand. It's not Cara related.

I was thinking about the Sunday scenes and I'm on the fence if I'll move up another scene from a future episode into that day. It would fit and it would progress the story a bit faster. It's an important and longer scene, meaning the episode will be even larger. I have a few days to think about it.

I won't be working on new renders for the next week or two but I'll take my laptop with me to do some rewrites, coding and post-render work on the images when I find time.

That's it for now. You'll hear from me once I'm back.
 
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