VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[Canto Forte]

Nobody is keeping her tied up to some hand on her bum, gamers.
Nobody is making her go do this or go do that.
It is in her own head and she is not sharing her monstrous thought process with anyone.

Here are my thoughts after this last update...

First of all, I'm already very anxious for the next one. NyxValeria has done such an amazing job, and she surely deservers more patrons (10k, at least!).

An update full of drama, and I love it! My favorite girls are Alexis (obvious reasons!), Layla and Nikki. Somehow I can't fall for Erynn...

It would be great to have some actual fun with Melissa, and Lakeyn definitely has to show up again soon!

I'm thinking of giving a shot at Cara's path....I like her, but when I had to choose between her and Nikki, it was a no brainer!

And...why do I have the impression that Alexis is the girl at the plane at the end of the update? =P

Its still set-up. And its a clear indication of where the plot was heading. Which directly contradicts your "making shit up as she goes along and altering the story accordingly" narrative.

someone ask me a question, my english is bad so i lose some things in the game writing.
is Erynn a prostitute?

we don‘t know this

the scene that she calls Mc and is interrupted by a stranger, it seemed to me that she is

Interesting you see a woman doing something against her will ...
and she is immediately a prostitute ?

we don't know exactly what she's doing
only Nyx knows the real answer to that

everything else is conjecture

A woman you see fondled, teased, touched and all but fingered while she stays there and takes it,
regardless of her crying or not, you need to cross off your bucket list. Unless you punch her assailant
and rescue her like a white knight on your high horse!
Remember how MC takes beating after beating for gurls he is not even interested or friendly with.
Where is that hulking MC when his beau Eyrin needs him the most? He got neutered or smth ???

 

[OutOfAshes]

Nobody is keeping her tied up to some hand on her bum, gamers.
Nobody is making her go do this or go do that.
It is in her own head and she is not sharing her monstrous thought process with anyone.







A woman you see fondled, teased, touched and all but fingered while she stays there and takes it,
regardless of her crying or not, you need to cross off your bucket list. Unless you punch her assailant
and rescue her like a white knight on your high horse!
Remember how MC takes beating after beating for gurls he is not even interested or friendly with.
Where is that hulking MC when his beau Eyrin needs him the most? He got neutered or smth ???

the mc don‘t know it at this point that Erynn needs him so bad
she didn‘t tell hin anything about this

 

[Canto Forte]

She cried and creeped in his arms, they shared her bed to sleep and be close.

the mc don‘t know it at this point that Erynn needs him so bad
she didn‘t tell hin anything about this

How many invitations does he need? He got her flowers and a present, out of nowhere money.
He waited on her at her job.
Where does this MC get his love pointers?
How many nudges does he need?

 

[Weasel_Face]

I have no idea what she is doing or supposed to do, also no idea if she is still being groomed for whatever is planned or it is already happening for a while. Only Nyx knows that for a reason.

Only thing I know is that phonecall, that she is dressed for the nightlife in an extremely sexy dress and not in baggy trousers and shirt to look as unattractive as possible and that that guy feels he has the right to put his hand on her ass and that Erryn might not agree with that based on her reaction, but does not stop him or decks him either. All the rest is just assumptions. Now also for a stripper or modelling job she needs to be sexy on stage, not for going to the place. Fact she is dressed so sexy might mean nothing, but it is kinda interesting.

I wish Erryn would just go away, way too much drama with her and why when MC met her while she was suspiciously with douchebag yet again (and again, and again) why did MC not bring up the phone call or why she blew him off and met Ethan instead? I'm tired of her secrets & lies and just wanna "opt out"!

I'm on team Nikki and the rest of them can go play in traffic.

 

[Ursus4321]

I think that almost all of us will agree. Nyx is playing an extraordinary game that keeps us all expectant. Thanks Nyx and congratulations on your game

 

[rob7278]

Wow - lots of great content in this last update!

It's hard to pick my favorite girl, there are so many smoking hot girls.
I think Erynn when her hair is styled is my top choice. Then there is a 3 way tie for 2nd favorite between Lexi, Nikki and Cara. Oh and Elena is pretty hot too and well also Layla is pretty cute. And Adrianna, the principal, is pretty hot as well. Crap and Gabi, the Spanish teacher is sexy as hell.

Man - Andres sure turned out to be a total douche.
And I'm going to guess that Mr. Navarro will end up being the MC real dad - and maybe he will end up being married to Adrianna or something, which would really throw a grenade into the MC life. As then Lexi and Layla would be the MC halfsisters. Oh wait - Santi couldn't be Lexi and Layla's dad, because Lexi is older than MC and Layla is the same age. As far as we could tell from flashbacks - Santi didn't have a daughter already when he was with Emily. Although I still believe Mr. Navarro will turn out to be Santi Navarro - the MC real dad. Melissa told the MC that he looked like Santi and they did look kind of alike when they were show next to each other in the bar.

I really hope that Erynn doesn't end up being an escort, even if she is somehow forced to do it. But it kind of looks like that will be the case.

 

[OutOfAshes]

She cried and creeped in his arms, they shared her bed to sleep and be close.


How many invitations does he need? He got her flowers and a present, out of nowhere money.
He waited on her at her job.
Where does this MC get his love pointers?
How many nudges does he need?

He gave her a flower when he was 13....
After that they had no contact for 5 years...
He bought her stockings as compensation for her torn pantyhose

and yes he picked her up at the university

not really invitations in my eyes

 

[Aion_Abyss]

Erynn, Emily, Melissa, and Lakeyn are best girls.

Layla, Cara and Nikki come in at a close second.

Wish this was a harem game.

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

For me Erynn, Nikki and Layla are the best girls and my favourite is Nikki.

 

[DA22]

I wish Erryn would just go away, way too much drama with her and why when MC met her while she was suspiciously with douchebag yet again (and again, and again) why did MC not bring up the phone call or why she blew him off and met Ethan instead? I'm tired of her secrets & lies and just wanna "opt out"!

I'm on team Nikki and the rest of them can go play in traffic.

Yeah for me personally she also shows way too many red flags, stupid choices and drama to easily go for as a LI and be able to ever have a nice relaxing life with her after. That is not even considering MC's trauma's with her, that even if based on misconceptions will not be immediately gone even when the misconceptions are and the Ethan in her life choice she made will still be there and we still have to find the exact fallout of that and if connected to her current situation. For myself I do not foresee a happy ending with Erryn for MC, beyond helping her out of the shit she got herself in. Well Nyx can try to convince me different.

For now I hate it more that she also blocks Alexis path with her antics and tears her apart emotionally without any right. Great friend.

 

[Dentynhometal]

i think Erryn works in that Club as a Stripper in the VIP Area to affort the Apartment she has and don´t wants anyone to find out about this.
but somehow this ethan found out and blackmails her now to do modelling for him.

well she somehow told that the appartment is quite expensive and i doubt that she can affort that appartment with part time moddeling after school.

she thought (i wish i could) when Melissa told her she should focus on school and Modelling can come later.

and the scene after erryns phone call could play out in many ways.that scene after the call was too short to know what happend after the ass groping from that old guy.for all we know she could have slaped him in the face shortly after or yelled at the old fart or something.

and of course erryn would or could wear expensive dresses she is moddeling and sometimes models wear expensive dresses to show clothes to some old fart costumers

i think that whole beeing an hooker,prostitute,escort or an elite escort girl thing is nonsense it not fits in the game.
that does not mean that there could not be some Pervs or old farts groping modells or she must do some "Special" Stripping sessions in the VIP room mixed with some modell show or something as part of the blackmailing.

interesting I hadn’t seen from that point, and from what has been shown so far it’s more consistent with the game’s narrative

 

[Dentynhometal]

I'm on team Nikki and the rest of them can go play in traffic.

For me Nikko or Layla

 

[Deleted member 207916]

May favs are

1. Nikki/Erynn

2. Mellisa

3. Layla

 

[OutOfAshes]

May favs are

1. Nikki/Erynn

2. Mellisa

3. Layla

Dylan/Lakeyn

Layla
Valeria

 

[Maviarab]

Pretty ballsy of you to assume this hasn't been the original intent. I mean, shit, we had Andres punching and cheating way before now if we chose MC to not get with Nikki or Cara.

Patronizing a creator on the intent/creation process of her own work is not a good look, my dude.

Pretty ballsy to assume the opposite too.

So done with this thread.

 

[OutOfAshes]

Pretty ballsy to assume the opposite too.

So done with this thread.

no funny posts more from you ?

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Pretty ballsy to assume the opposite too.

So done with this thread.

I didn't assume the opposite, though. I don't know Nyx' original intent, and so I didn't make a statement for either side of the argument. That was my point. I was condemning the act of telling a creator what their own intent is, as if lokoper knew better than Nyx.

And I showed how he was incorrect in the specific example he was going on about by providing proof.

I dunno why that ticked you off so much.

 

[Maviarab]

I didn't assume the opposite, though. I don't know Nyx' original intent, and so I didn't make a statement for either side of the argument. That was my point. I was condemning the act of telling a creator what their own intent is, as if lokoper knew better than Nyx.

And I showed how he was incorrect in the specific example he was going on about by providing proof.

I dunno why that ticked you off so much.

Hey sorry Fappy...was supposed to have quoted the guy you were debating with (assuming he knows Nyx's intent), not yourself.

Accept my apologies.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Hey sorry Fappy...was supposed to have quoted the guy you were debating with (assuming he knows Nyx's intent), not yourself.

Accept my apologies.

Ah, gotcha. Its all good. No worries, my dude.

 

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i think Erryn works in that Club as a Stripper in the VIP Area to affort the Apartment she has and don´t wants anyone to find out about this.
but somehow this ethan found out and blackmails her now to do modelling for him.

well she somehow told that the appartment is quite expensive and i doubt that she can affort that appartment with part time moddeling after school.

she thought (i wish i could) when Melissa told her she should focus on school and Modelling can come later.

and the scene after erryns phone call could play out in many ways.that scene after the call was too short to know what happend after the ass groping from that old guy.for all we know she could have slaped him in the face shortly after or yelled at the old fart or something.

and of course erryn would or could wear expensive dresses she is moddeling and sometimes models wear expensive dresses to show clothes to some old fart costumers

i think that whole beeing an hooker,prostitute,escort or an elite escort girl thing is nonsense it not fits in the game.
that does not mean that there could not be some Pervs or old farts groping modells or she must do some "Special" Stripping sessions in the VIP room mixed with some modell show or something as part of the blackmailing.

But why would she be stripper, only to have an aparment? She could stay at home or dorm like Lexi.