VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Raziel_8]

Though now that you bring it up, I think it's funny how the MC literally loses his shit at Alexis, cancels their date and makes her cry when she says his backward hat looked douchey, but he seems perfectly cool with Nikki ripping up Erynn's gift.

I mean, the MC looks just dumb with that hat. Also when were they in fashion...some 20 years ago with the idiots that wanted to be the cool kids and wannabe rapper, i would have been more bothered if Alexis (and Emily) wouldn't have said that it looks dumb.

But the whole scene to be angry about her comment feels just so out of place and made you feel really stupit.
I wouldn't even choose this if want to piss off Alexis (and i have fun doing that).
Was likely the worst written scene in the game so far.

The John is everything the MC was supposed to be, cool, winning his fights and inside Melissa

Yeah, wouldn't be surprised at all if John is the one which get's the happy ending with a Emily/Melissa throuple, while the MC fails miserably with Layla/Elena

 

[LSC82]

hmmm... nah I think it can go on for quite a while still, but more than anything, it needs to have a solid plan moving forward... right now it feels a bit aimless.

Like, again, take the beach scene, it's a MASSIVE wasted opportunity, that scene could've and should've led to a lot of longtime coming confrontations between the characters... I mean, the game is called "Intertwined" for a reason, right? the beach scene had a ton of potential to really start moving things forward within the various PTs, whether it's on the Erynn PT, the Alexis one(s), the Tori one, the Iris one, the Val one, etc... heck, just the lack of interaction between MC & his rival is a wasted opportunity.

So in the end, while I didn't think this update was bad or short by anymeans, it did feel rushed and truncated... so that's the tpye of thing the game needs to avoid going forward... that and some other writing issues. When you have so much branching you need to be careful and have an air tight plan, otherwise this is what happens and the game starts feeling like the Alexis & Layla show, where the other branches/PTs start feeling not worth the time.

And I dunno, maybe it's just me, but I think that could become an issue.

This update was good, actually pretty incredible if you are a Layla fan, decent if you are Erynn or Iris (provided you got the beach scene).
Like someone said a few pages back, this game needs to start solving the problems it has setup rather than dropping more issues on our heads...

The beach scene feels like a waste, first because it's unreasonably gated(a scene with so many LIs, tied to a single girl), second because no matter what you do there things remain status quo, it doesn't move things in any significant way...
To actually break status quo you need to act like a total douche in a dumb scene that comes, literally, 3 minutes after leaving the beach... so that was a wasted opportunity, passed on the perfect opportunity for conflict only to add it later in a hamfisted way.

 

[Dessolos]

This update was good, actually pretty incredible if you are a Layla fan, decent if you are Erynn or Iris (provided you got the beach scene).
Like someone said a few pages back, this game needs to start solving the problems it has setup rather than dropping more issues on our heads...

The beach scene feels like a waste, first because it's unreasonably gated, second because no matter what you do there things remain status quo, it doesn't move things in any significant way...
To actually break status quo you need to act like a total douche in a dumb scene that comes, literally, 3 minutes after leaving the beach... so that was a wasted opportunity, passed on the perfect opportunity for conflict only to add it later in a hamfisted way.

Yeah I agree at first i was really disappointed after playimng solo Erynn with how it ended but after playing Lexi I calmed down and was more or less happy , still need to play start to finish Layla tho havent done that one yet as I always saw her as friend over LI

 

[Bombmaster]

I can guarantee you that were the roles reversed this most certainly would be seen as controlling. Not only that but it would probably be plastered all over TikTok.

I don't mind, makes the character feels alive and luckily you can just end the relationship.

Trying to clean and sanitize everyone makes the medium boring as a TV show catering to this same people you cited.

 

[xXwankerXx]

Alexis and Laylas father is the basketball legend guy, not showing him is just red herring

If you mean Navarro, the sports agent, then yes, it could be a possibility, but considering how nice he acted toward the MC when they talked at Dylan's bar and the fact that the MC felt "nervous" when he saw Navarro at the track and field competition, I'd say he's MC's real dad.

I hope Nyx writes that scene. John and MC bio dad meeting or MC bio dad walks in while John and Emily are banging.

Would be funny AF to see that happen. I'd also love to see Melissa pop up too, for the lolz. Imagine how that conversation's gonna play out.

I bet that choice will determine if he gets with Mel or Emily in the future.

Melissa is obviously the best choice here, for obvious reasons.

 

[Elduriel]

Alexis and Laylas father is the basketball legend guy, not showing him is just red herring

well he is most certainly not a pro or ex-pro basketball player... Lexi or Layla (don't remember which) told MC he played in college but didn't go pro after for some reason

 

[Bombmaster]

I agree with you about Erynn feeling more like the main LI. But she isnt boring to me but everyone has different taste. I enjoy the wholesome scenes where you are just hanging out / the playful scenes with Alexis and Erynn more than when you have sex with Alexis. So because of that I find them equally good tho I do think Erynn is more playful than Alexis. Yeah I'm probably one of the rare few that has Erynn as their #1 LI across all AVN's but my top 4 are basically all tied only very minior things make me choose 1 over than the other.

Yeah bro, the writing made Lexi about sex and fixation in Mc. Problem is she changed and the Dev probably without "balls" pun intended stopped her progression.
If the case for Lexi was a sexual beast and totally submissive to her desire.

She needed to do more, almost to much during sex. In a way to make Mc starstruck with her willingness to pleasure him.

Because they made her this way. Don't do a 180 and then kick the ball rolling with Erynn sweet and caring. Obviously the drama would be a division about love and passion. he could be attracted to both in different styles. But alas, just my point.


And for the dude talking about shit sex scenes, bro this game is for the drama. The sex is a spice. Not the main dish.

 

[Canto Forte]

Just like any spice ever immagined, IT GOES INTO THE MAIN DISH BEFORE DEVOURING IT!

the writing made Lexi about sex and fixation in Mc

The sex is a spice

the main dish

lEXI IS ALL ABOUT CASUAL SEX THEN THE DATING AND THEN THE SERIOUS MEET HER MAMA AND HER SIS - OBVIOUS PROGRESSION TO MARRIAGE - GO MARRY, GAMER!

 

[Bombmaster]

Just like any spice ever immagined, IT GOES INTO THE MAIN DISH BEFORE DEVOURING IT!




lEXI IS ALL ABOUT CASUAL SEX THEN THE DATING AND THEN THE SERIOUS MEET HER MAMA AND HER SIS - OBVIOUS PROGRESSION TO MARRIAGE - GO MARRY, GAMER!

Chuckle. Well if marriage is end game for Lexi she better start sucking more dick and confidently say, no other girl is kinky like me.

 

[anonnyscouse]

Guy definitely likes having fun without giving a shit about the consequences. John is out there to spread the seed... I mean, the love as much as he can. After all the hints dropped so far, I'm convinced he's Erynn's mystery bio dad and she and Iris are half-sisters. Wouldn't make sense if they weren't. My q is, who the fuck is that Navarro dude ?? Is he MC's bio dad or Alexis and Layla's ?? Considering how rich they are, I'd say it's the latter, but who's the guy in Gabi's pic we saw in her bedroom ??



Yeah, John's a cool guy. Don't know how serious it's gonna be between them, but I let Emiliy date him in all my playthroughs just coz he was a real dad figure to the MC when he dated Iris and to piss off MC's bio dad.



Nyx is too much of a drama queen and likes to add a lot of it even where it isn't needed. I understand not having the possibility to go for Melissa on an Erynn solo or Erynn - Lexi path, but on all of them is plain ridiculous. As long as they keep it a secret, they can fuck like rabbits and the MC can bust as many nuts in her pussy as he wants without anyone having anything to bitch about, and even if Erynn and Emily would still do it for 'the plot', they should understand that Melissa's a grown ass attractive woman who also needs love and... dick, like all women do. The MC doesn't have to marry her or make Erynn call him daddy, if she don't want to, he just needs to fuck her brains out as much as he and we fans want.

I agree about John. As for your other questions: Navarro could be Val's dad, Alexis and Layla's dad is that basketball dude (I've forgotten his name), I think the picture in Gabi's room is Santi (MC's bio dad) as it suits Nyx's drama to have MC fuck his dad's wife and it avoids blood incest for Patreon.

 

[Sephiroth_85]

Just like any spice ever immagined, IT GOES INTO THE MAIN DISH BEFORE DEVOURING IT!




lEXI IS ALL ABOUT CASUAL SEX THEN THE DATING AND THEN THE SERIOUS MEET HER MAMA AND HER SIS - OBVIOUS PROGRESSION TO MARRIAGE - GO MARRY, GAMER!

In a romantic game like this marriage is the goal. If u're for corruption and hardcore I suggest u to play other games

 

[Exiled97]

How to get Elena/Erynn/Valeria paths without cheating?

 

[anonnyscouse]

How to get Elena/Erynn/Valeria paths without cheating?

Getting Erynn path without cheating is easy, just friendzone the other girls and concentrate on taking the options to get close to her. Both Elena and Val require you to get close to Layla first I think, you can friendzone Layla after getting onto the Val path though, Elena you have to be on the Layla path though, no route to her without Layla.

 

[Just Jericho]

I mean, the MC looks just dumb with that hat. Also when were they in fashion...

I mean it could have been worse. At least he didn't wear one of those stupid flat-bill hats resting at the top of head like one of these idiots:

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Those flatbills might have been one of the best practical jokes in history because no one ever told them how stupid it looked.

 

[Just Jericho]

Getting Erynn path without cheating is easy, just friendzone the other girls and concentrate on taking the options to get close to her. Both Elena and Val require you to get close to Layla first I think, you can friendzone Layla after getting onto the Val path though, Elena you have to be on the Layla path though, no route to her without Layla.

Not for Val. You don't have to be on any paths to start chasing Val.

Elena though? Classic landmine character like Rena in Acting Lessons or Holly in LoF.

 

[Elduriel]

Not for Val. You don't have to be on any paths to start chasing Val.

Elena though? Classic landmine character like Rena in Acting Lessons or Holly in LoF.

ya, good job going after Elena, now half the cast will hate yo ass including her

 

[xXwankerXx]

she isnt boring to me but everyone has different taste.

I know Erynn's path is one big blue ball tease fest so far, but ppl shouldn't forget that she went through a lot of tough shit bcz of that dickhead Ethan and his 'clients', she only had sex with one guy, who turned out to be a scumbag too like Ethan, AND she doesn't want to risk losing MC's friendship. I'm also a lil annoyed with all the teasing that doesn't lead to spicier stuff, but until they deal with the idiot Ethan and the blackmail, Erynn probably won't get a single sex scene.

It's why I think Nyx removed a slut like Rachel way too soon. I may be in the minority on this, but having a few MILFs and curvy women with big asses we could occasionally hook up and have rough sex with would be a welcomed change of pace. I also wouldn't say no to fucking Ethan's mom, sis and/or GF, if he had one lol, in front of him as payback for what he did to Erynn while she goes to town on his ass with a strap-on. Maybe even a double anal penetration with Lexi's help while the MC records the disturbing scene so the blackmail wouldn't be a problem anymore ??

ake the beach scene, it's a MASSIVE wasted opportunity, that scene could've and should've led to a lot of longtime coming confrontations between the characters

Agreed. The beach and club scenes were too awkward and cringe for my taste. If Nyx doesn't use oppurtunities like that as build up for a 3some or a 4some with the MC and the girls, it doesn't make sense. Who the fuck thinks it's a good idea to hang out with their ex and their GF/BF, especially since they never officially broke up ?? Same goes for the childhood crush... it was plain obvious that Erynn was jealous and wanted to be in Alexis' place, but that ain't anything a 3some/4some can't fix.

as it suits Nyx's drama to have MC fuck his dad's wife and it avoids blood incest for Patreon.

It's still incest, or stepcest, to be exact, coz she becomes his step-mom by default, and PUSSYtreon is against that too. It's the reason why I'm so curious to see how she deals with this revelation, you know ??

 

[Canto Forte]

ppl also know SHE HUMMILIATED MC ON HIS VERY BIRTHDAY BY SIDING WITH ETHAN.
ppl also know SHE REDUCED HER TIME WITH MC TO A MINIMUM THAT DISHEARTENED MC.
ppl also know SHE CHOSE TO BE MOST OF HER TIME WITH LEXI AND ETHAN BUT NOT MC.
ppl also know SHE BASICALLY CALLED MC A DUMB LITTLE KID WHILE SHE GREW UP INTO ETHAN.

ppl shouldn't forget that she went through a lot of tough shit bcz of that dickhead Ethan and his 'clients', she only had sex with one guy, who turned out to be a scumbag like Ethan too, AND she doesn't want to risk losing MC's friendship.

Grown up people WILL JUST REMIND HER SHE CHOSE HER NEW FRIENDS OVER MC,
so MC moved on ... TO BEING TOSSED OUT BY his MUM, TOSSED OUT BY his DAD and
RUNNING AWAY from his mom INTO LIFE ON THE STREET ... where Eyrin found him and took him in.

Now Eyrin is his savior, they should start anew, drown all sorrow in their water under theat
bridge and commence a man and a woman connection the way adults do.

 

[Acsuka]

I still haven't figured out why so many people humiliate Alex/Nikki in every shape...Of course you have the right to dislike her, but you always do it in public...Don't say that because it was the original story...I don't care whatever it was, that's what we got and we have to accept it. This story would be poorer if you got the original version...I'm glad that the girls stayed in the story...A lot of people like Alex/Nikki (me too), and if you're on a faithful path with him, why shouldn't marriage be the end goal...On the beach, Alex tells her that she wants this...If you love her, why not give her this? It is really possible to make a version of this game where you chase several girls at the same time (for more sex). This only saves you time because of the individual routes... Yes, I'm interested in each girl's route, but they all have their own solo route (with the exception of Layla/Elena, you can't separate them, and maybe you don't need to) But overall, you miss out on a lot of content... We know, how do these usually end...You'll be crying broken balls on Emily's shoulder and the fun is over... Sure it's fun while it lasts, but it pays off?...If anyone wants to play this game romantically, I'm not trolling, I'm quiet I'll stay...Why is there so much tension in many players that just because they don't like a character they call her a whore...I like all the girls in this game, some more and some less...But none of them are sluts! I still have a lot of thoughts in my head, but I'm already talking a lot...
I didn't mean to offend anyone, I'm just saying what I think is wrong in a civilized forum... Thank you (sorry my English is not my native language)

 

[MrD812]

Yeah I agree at first i was really disappointed after playimng solo Erynn with how it ended but after playing Lexi I calmed down and was more or less happy , still need to play start to finish Layla tho havent done that one yet as I always saw her as friend over LI

Don't expect anything logical or any sound relationship-dynamics with Nyx's writing, You'll have no buyers-remorse.
Treat it as the author has next to no viable relationship experiences outside of a B-Movie/Soap Opera/Anime Cartoon.
Expect nothing believable, You wont be disappointed.

It's That Simple, Enjoy!