VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Bombmaster]

MC says something differnt. “Mom wanted to come to visit me many times. But every time, I pretended to still be angry and that I didn’t want to see her. I used her as me scapegoat.” And with this behaviour, he didn't see his mother for 5 years. And don't forget that MC's parents were divorced.

Sure I'm just saying this behavior is absurd. No mother would allow it.
No kid would keep being jelly
And no father would allowed this bullshit either.

This part is obnoxious.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Fine the plot can't allow the girl to go the distance.

And a teenager can't really choose to not see his mother. She allowed that let's be reasonable with human interaction.

Oh no, I am on your side. I can show you my scars from the last text wall wars. I just wanted correct that bit.

AS I said before, she ambushed MC in his bed when she wanted, she could have done the same before.

So, MC is responsible of his action too, not only Erynn. He close the door to everyone (Emily, Erynn). He regrets for his behaviour and that's why says he is idiot.

He is, no question about it. Though in that situation in was on Erynn.

 

[Bombmaster]

he was there... who you think stole layla´s hoodie?
once he goes trough her trash and discovers the bloody linen
and he puts 2 and 2 together in regards to Layla v-card... so in roughly 25 years?
i mean unless some Elena tells him to try and make him back off...
and he will go rage on the MC... and that is how we will get a time skip of 6 months
the MC will be in a coma... Erynn will feel lonely and vulnerable and will end up giving into Ethan!
and he apologyses to her gifts her a new car a new home and a new ring with a diamond!
totally not because she will be 5 months pregnant when the MC wakes... and yeap...
she will gaslight him by not telling him she married Ethan over "reasons"
while holding her hand protectively over her belly!
Zach will be a castrati cause he tried his luck with Elena when she was comforting Layla
he discovers he as a liking for it and... and ... and he hires elena to be his dominatrix
and Elena discovers that she as a sadistic side and zach is just the dude...
i mean she also feels sort of guilty over telling Lucas what happened
but she keeps that to herself while trying to confort Layla who spends every day
in the hospital or at least visits everyday until the MC wakes up
while she is crying on iris busom when Iris kisses her lips
(whom she is now in a relationship with... yeap your original girlfriend is cucking you!)
she jumps the MC with joy when he wakes up only for the MC still confused to ask
MC: "who are you, miss? where is my mommy Emily? or daddy Andres?
MC: will Erynn be at my birthday miss? i´m turning 8 years old next weak!"
iris: oh fuck, he became a retarded!
Layla: wtf, you are 18 not turning 8, oh ffs!
MC: yeah... still better to be 8 instead of waking up with a massive headache
MC: only to find my girlfriend cucking me with my ex-girlfriend!
Iris: you are such an asshole i swear.
MC: and you look...
Iris: yes?
MC: older... how long was i out? 12 years at least i guess from all your wrinkles!
MC: and did you put on some weight Layla?
Layla: i am so happy you are awake and yet so pissed at you... i was feeling vulnerable!
MC: and the vultures swooped in to pick at the corpse of my love life?
*the door opens*
Emily: don´t talk to like that to your girlfriend who spent most of her time here!
MC: and iris was with her?
Emily: yes, she felt uncomfortable around the house!
MC: what does that mean?
Emily: me and John are getting married!
Iris: and we are gona have a little sister!
Emily: or brother young miss, behave!
MC: so i was cucked by my 1st girlfriend, my own sister, my former lover and one of my best friends!
Layla: it was just a kiss and... fuck so many people... i guess i am a whore indeed!
Iris: herm your 1st lover, checked! Girlfriend? lol dude you where just a side piece! sister? put a step on it!
Iris: and has for your best friend... dang dude, you really need Nathan,
Iris: if i am your best friend you fucked up along the way!
MC: so happy to see you Layla! i knew i made the right choice when i picked you, come here and let me kiss you!
*Layla aproaches the MC and slaps him across the face, spits on him and leaves
MC: wtf was that?
Iris: just be lucky Lexxi is not around...
Emily: yeahhh and i changed your school
MC: why?
Emily: Nikki called with the "woderfull" news i am gona be a grandmother!
Emily: even john is starting to call me a GILF!
MC: fucking hell, so lexxi and coach morgan want me dead?
Iris: pretty much!
MC: where is Erynn?
Iris: dude, she broke my heart, she married Ethan and is expecting her 1st child!
MC: fucking hell, NURSE NURSE NURSE PLEASE PUT ME BACK INTO A COMA, I DON´T WANT TO BE HERE ANYMORE **CRYING**

Thanks for the laugh sensei.
The discussion was turning serious.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Nikki called with the "woderfull" news i am gona be a grandmother!

 

[Gewrgios]

Sure I'm just saying this behavior is absurd. No mother would allow it.
No kid would keep being jelly
And no father would allowed this bullshit either.

This part is obnoxious.

And we should not forget that is a pc game story. Nyx writes whatever she wants.

 

[Bombmaster]

And we should not forget that is a pc game story. Nyx writes whatever she wants.

Yeah, she deliberately made some creative choices... And my beef is mostly with Erynn as now is pretty clear.
You can avoid most girls, Not Erynn no....

 

[jllkfsdj]

And her redemption arc is you helping make right her mistakes. Boy this girl is emotionally expensive to romance.

This.

Monetarily expensive prolly too. She just screams "high mainentance woman!" xD

Defenestrator.for.traitor dude, I would bet Lexi is cheaper to support, lmao. Not only does she NOT look like she spends most of her time in a spa or hair salon or any other grooming station, she also has a regular job next to her studies (major that is profitable and will get her a good job that won't be sabotaged by her side employment like being an escort) and looks like a good, hardworking, humble girl despite her parents being filthy rich. And while she of course does makeup she doesn't make herself look like a porcelain doll, the only thing really noticable is the kohl around her eyes (which I really dig cause she's got gorgeous eyes). Sure, Erynn makes a lot of money as a model prolly, but we can see from her lifestyle that she spends most of it on luxuries and her body and clothes. They say that a woman can make a millionaire (or a beggar) out of a billionaire, but I think Lexi is one of the gals that would pull her weight in marriage, both in income earning as well as chores and other shit. And as having a job that makes her a "working stiff" there is far less chance of her being uppity or haughty, compared to a model.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

This.

Monetarily expensive prolly too. She just screams "high mainentance woman!" xD

Defenestrator.for.traitor dude, I would bet Lexi is cheaper to support, lmao. Not only does she NOT look like she spends most of her time in a spa or hair salon or any other grooming station, she also has a regular job next to her studies (major that is profitable and will get her a good job that won't be sabotaged by her side employment like being an escort) and looks like a good, hardworking, humble girl despite her parents being filthy rich. And while she of course does makeup she doesn't make herself look like a porcelain doll, the only thing really noticable is the kohl around her eyes (which I really dig cause she's got gorgeous eyes). Sure, Erynn makes a lot of money as a model prolly, but we can see from her lifestyle that she spends most of it on luxuries and her body and clothes. They say that a woman can make a millionaire (or a beggar) out of a billionaire, but I think Lexi is one of the gals that would pull her weight in marriage, both in income earning as well as chores and other shit. And as having a job that makes her a "working stiff" there is far less chance of her being uppity or haughty, compared to a model.

Sound reasonable but none of them can come close to my lovely Nikki. She even sniffed Erynn on that shirt and rip it apart. As far as i'm concerned, she knows what she is doing. Also if it's not red herring from Nyx, we are expecting.

 

[jllkfsdj]

Sound reasonable but none of them can come close to my lovely Nikki. She even sniffed Erynn on that shirt and rip it apart. As far as i'm concerned, she knows what she is doing. Also if it's not red herring from Nyx, we are expecting.

Yeah, I honestly don't know how I feel about that scene. Sure, I hated that shirt and her little demonstration of territoriality was cute and endearing (on the verge of throwing up a red flag lmao - she's strong enough to knock you out if you even look at another girl in the future ), but it was still a gift from someone else. xD

I really liked Nikki (and damn, dat booty!). BUT she came in too late, Lexi already governed my heart. Nikki and Layla are battling it out for second place or rather first place in a universe where Lexi doesn't exist.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Yeah, I honestly don't know how I feel about that scene. Sure, I hated that shirt and her little demonstration of territoriality was cute and endearing (on the verge of throwing up a red flag lmao - she's strong enough to knock you out if you even look at another girl in the future ), but it was still a gift from someone else. xD

I really liked Nikki (and damn, dat booty!). BUT she came in too late, Lexi already governed my heart. Nikki and Layla are battling it out for second place or rather first place in a universe where Lexi doesn't exist.

Oh no it was a total red flag if you ask me but one or two red flag was not a big problem with what she brings. Also her explanation was reasonable and come the fuck on, does Erynn really have a taste in fashion, how is she a model if she can even think that thing was wearable? Oh right sorry, modelling agency belongs to her lifelong friend's father.

 

[Maviarab]

Defenestrator.for.traitor & Bombmaster If you guys think you'd ever let your 16yo daughter...travel across the country...on her own...to maybe stay with someone not even related to you...You're more fucking delusional than I first thought.

Defenestrator.for.traitor For once, we agree that Nikki is the best girl

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

@Defenestrator.for.traitor & @Bombmaster If you guys think you'd ever let your 16yo daughter...travel across the country...on her own...to maybe stay with someone not even related to you...You're more fucking delusional than I first thought.

She does not have a father though. Huh! I won! Shit, she does not have a father.

@Defenestrator.for.traitor For once, we agree that Nikki is the best girl

Yey, we are on the same trench again.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

ACTUALLY GIRLS DO THAT ALL THE TIME!
they tell their friends their boyfriends are shit in bed
that they have really smelly small dicks and smell bad during sex
and dress them up with bow-tie´s and pink shirts
so that other girls do not try to steal their men
its both an acknowledgement that they like you enough to try and keep you
and ofc their own insecurities that you can piss outside the little boys pot
which considering how much of a pig i have been all my life...

We have not crossed paths same type of girls, I am afraid. My share boost me to her friends, then bashed me in private because how close I became with her friends. As if she was not the one who forced me to do that.

they are not wrong, a man will fuck if he can get away with it

Guilty as charged, man. I am genuinely ashamed of that. I walked in that trap mindlessly.

 

[Bombmaster]

Defenestrator.for.traitor & Bombmaster If you guys think you'd ever let your 16yo daughter...travel across the country...on her own...to maybe stay with someone not even related to you...You're more fucking delusional than I first thought.

Defenestrator.for.traitor For once, we agree that Nikki is the best girl

As you mentioned me let me answer.
If i had a daughter and being the same situation(Without the plot drama that fathers always gone)
I myself could take her there. And if you think you can keep a 16yrs in a leash. boy you gonna be happy in the future.
Maybe you were sheltered as fuck, who knows, Delusional oof that is cringe.

 

[lukas7533]

This game has a problem, not choosing Nikky is physically impossible

 

[jllkfsdj]

Oh no it was a total red flag if you ask me but one or two red flag was not a big problem with what she brings. Also her explanation was reasonable and come the fuck on, does Erynn really have a taste in fashion, how is she a model if she can even think that thing was wearable? Oh right sorry, modelling agency belongs to her lifelong friend's father.

I mean, yeah, that shirt was godawful, it deserved to be trashed. It literally made my eyes bleed. My blockage is that it's a gift and I was raised to respect and appreciate gifts, lol. xD

Nikki... cute but crazy?

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Nikki... cute but crazy?

Just like what I love.

I mean, yeah, that shirt was godawful, it deserved to be trashed. It literally made my eyes bleed. My blockage is that it's a gift and I was raised to respect and appreciate gifts, lol. xD

Well it was not gifted to Nikki and MC tried everything to defend that shirt, what do you want him to do more? If you ask me it was a perfect loophole to well deserved end for that eyesore.

 

[jllkfsdj]

Just like what I love.


Well it was not gifted to Nikki and MC tried everything to defend that shirt, what do you want him to do more? If you ask me it was a perfect loophole to well deserved end for that eyesore.

I just wish there was more content for Nikki because as it is right now if you try to be loyal to her it's a very lonely and boring (and short) game.

And for reasons already mentioned, it's a VERY good idea to stay loyal! xD

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

I just wish there was more content for Nikki because as it is right now if you try to be loyal to her it's a very lonely and boring (and short) game.

And for reasons already mentioned, it's a VERY good idea to stay loyal! xD

Yeah definitely, I can see her tear a new one to MC if she ever catches him. I was even surprised she gave MC some time to handle his relationships. I thought she would go on murder spree.

Btw, I am kinda sad for her sister. She got sidelined so bad, I don't even remember her name. Carrie, Cassie something like that. Poor girl.

 

[jllkfsdj]

Yeah definitely, I can see her tear a new one to MC if she ever catches him. I was even surprised she gave MC some time to handle his relationships. I thought she would go on murder spree.

Btw, I am kinda sad for her sister. She got sidelined so bad, I don't even remember her name. Carrie, Cassie something like that. Poor girl.

Cara, yeah. Poor girl, she needs a loving and supportive mate much more than Nikki. Nikki can easily survive and thrive on her own, but Cara would merely vegetate.