VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14] [Nyx]

[Dessolos]

The Erynn letter scene for me this update was incredible. It really showed how much the MC leaving hurt and affected her. The MC's return letter all of these years later I hope is as heartfelt and emotional. The episode 3 remake was also great for Erynn and their reunion at the club, then her place after. Much better than the original IMO.

I can't wait for letter tbh. I'm kind of hoping in the letter the MC writes back to Erynn he ask Erynn to be his girlfriend officially and tells her how he feels finally. Also this is me being selfish I kind of hope we get the option to listen to or not listen to Mel and Emily's wishes. Cause I kind of want to say fuck it I want to be the one tell Erynn about her father.

I might have to replay that part of the game now just to see the remake was gonna wait till later but now you made me curious

I have a Val save, but while I like Erynn she's just a sometimes slightly too clingy friend to me. I don't have a save with her.

Yeah for me I never really saw her as clingy because I love all those playful moments but for someone that doesn't love her character like I do I can see how she would seem that way. Just when I try to think of how she is clingy hard for me to think of any scenes cause my bias and how much I like those moments that probably are where she comes across as clingy

Edit : actually I think I might have saw Layla as a bit clingy too my first time at the start might be why I dont like her as much. Can't remember

 

[Justaphase]

I can't wait for letter tbh. I'm kind of hoping in the letter the MC writes back to Erynn he ask Erynn to be his girlfriend officially and tells her how he feels finally. Also this is me being selfish I kind of hope we get the option to listen to or not listen to Mel and Emily's wishes. Cause I kind of want to say fuck it I want to be the one tell Erynn about her father.

I might have to replay that part of the game now just to see the remake was gonna wait till later but now you made me curious

I think that the girlfriend official needs to be in person, maybe with the same kind of flower at the same tree? But he can still tell her how much he loves her, how sorry he is and how he doesn't want to be away from her ever again.

 

[Dessolos]

I think that the girlfriend official needs to be in person, maybe with the same kind of flower at the same tree? But he can still tell her how much he loves her, how sorry he is and how he doesn't want to be away from her ever again.

Well how I see the scene in my mind unless he actually gonna have Mel give her the letter or something. I imagine him actually giving her the letter in person and maybe reading both together. But yeah if he doesn't give it to her in person or she reads it when alone I agree should be done another way.

 

[Jarulf]

Yeah for me I never really saw her as clingy because I love all those playful moments but for someone that doesn't love her character like I do I can see how she would seem that way. Just when I try to think of how she is clingy hard for me to think of any scenes cause my bias and how much I like those moments that probably are where she comes across as clingy

it is pretty revealing though, how differently we can interpret the same scenes based on what we like. I don't mind Layla being a bit clingy for example, that's just sweet. With Erynn, it might also be that the whole Nathan situation sticks to her a bit for me, I think that is the least interesting part of the game and bordering on actually making the game worse.

 

[LSC82]

I cockblocked him once with Emily, I'll do it again with Mel

Nice

I didn't really find her cute until this update if im being honest. maybe once or twice in the past. Erynn was always the cute one for me with how playful she is or just moments like this. Yeah I know not really meant to be a cute moment but I find this one kind of cute and funny also scary haha.

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Tho Val is just as cute for me.

I think Layla is adorable, just so much fun to be around and see what she does, her mistakes, her faces... just adorable.
Val is a lot more "oneupsmanship" when they are together.
Erynn despite being slightly older, reverts to a big child when it's just her and the MC, also very cute and sweet.
She's just so happy playing with him, like the poster thing, she just can't wait.

I have a Val save, but while I like Erynn she's just a sometimes slightly too clingy friend to me. I don't have a save with her.

She does get needy and clingy.
Because of the history she has with the MC, i think she attaches too much into this relationship, she doesn't think about anything else.

it is pretty revealing though, how differently we can interpret the same scenes based on what we like. I don't mind Layla being a bit clingy for example, that's just sweet. With Erynn, it might also be that the whole Nathan situation sticks to her a bit for me, I think that is the least interesting part of the game and bordering on actually making the game worse.

They both get clingy, Layla because she's completely inexperienced, this is her first relationship.
Erynn because of her past history with the guy.
Sometimes one style may go down better with you than the other.

Personally i'm a sucker for both their stories, they resonate with me.

The Ethan(not Nathan) part should've been over long ago, i agree.

The Erynn letter scene for me this update was incredible. It really showed how much the MC leaving hurt and affected her. The MC's return letter all of these years later I hope is as heartfelt and emotional. The episode 3 remake was also great for Erynn and their reunion at the club, then her place after. Much better than the original IMO.

Out of reactions, but 'ill be sure to comeback and give this a heart once i'm "free".

I agree 100%, this scene was so touching and heartfelt.
Gives me a lot expectation for the return letter, it can(should) be a crucial moment of their relationship.
Can't fluff that one, needs to be emotional and heartfelt too.
I've been waiting since forever for the MC to stop dancing around the issue and open up with Erynn, this could be it.

 

[MagicMan753]

I honestly don't know.

But it doesn't end by Chapter 14. I don't know if she ever mentioned a particular chapter number like 17, 18 or 20?

I think it ends by summer break? Other people in the thread might have the answers. Justaphase LSC82

Yeah, I think it's pretty much end of school year, but even then, I don't think we are done, cause I know it's been mentioned or talked about Intertwined 2, focusing on college. So even when this done, we might not be done.

 

[Dessolos]

it is pretty revealing though, how differently we can interpret the same scenes based on what we like. I don't mind Layla being a bit clingy for example, that's just sweet. With Erynn, it might also be that the whole Nathan situation sticks to her a bit for me, I think that is the least interesting part of the game and bordering on actually making the game worse.

im mixed on the Ethan thing I like it and don't at the same time. I like it for the trauma it brings to Erynn because I like it when my MC is there for his LI to help them or whatever or just really there for them. For the most part I felt like it works for the slow burn too but then yeah it's also at a point it's bringing the game's story down to much where it needs to be resolved so we can have the rest of the game going on dates.

 

[Jarulf]

Yeah, I think it's pretty much end of school year, but even then, I don't think we are done, cause I know it's been mentioned or talked about Intertwined 2, focusing on college. So even when this done, we might not be done.

If she has good ideas for fun plots. then I'm all for season 2. But if not, I think I'd prefer a new game. (that's not school)

 

[cxx]

If she has good ideas for fun plots. then I'm all for season 2. But if not, I think I'd prefer a new game. (that's not school)

all new girls,no slexi, val, leyla, erynn, etc

 

[Dessolos]

If she has good ideas for fun plots. then I'm all for season 2. But if not, I think I'd prefer a new game. (that's not school)

Yeah I think if we are a new MC and we don't really get to spend time with the old LI from this game I might prefer a new game too but part of me wants Intertwined 2 more because I kind of want to spend more time and see these characters. I think Ive seen Nyx say she isn't sure if it's gonna be Intertwined 2 or a new game first. But I think she wants to do Intertwined 2 at some point.

 

[Jarulf]

im mixed on the Ethan thing I like it and don't at the same time. I like it for the trauma it brings to Erynn because I like it when my MC is there for his LI to help them or whatever. For the most part I felt like it works for the slow burn too but then yeah it's also at a point it's bringing the game's story down to much where it needs to be resolved so we can have the rest of the game going on dates.

I really don't like it and think it's the weakest part of the game. Ethan and Zach are simply just too disagreeable to be interesting as enemies, I really wish Nyx had come up with some more interesting drama for Erynn. I love the game, don't get wrong, but I play through those parts as quickly as I can.

 

[Dessolos]

I really don't like it and think it's the weakest part of the game. Ethan and Zach are simply just too disagreeable to be interesting as enemies, I really wish Nyx had come up with some more interesting drama for Erynn. I love the game, don't get wrong, but I play through those parts as quickly as I can.

oh don't get me wrong I don't like it either other than at the start of it it all. Pretty much I liked it up to the point we do a photoshoot with her then after that it felt like it wasn't really going anywhere for me. I just like what it brought to the realtionship since I do like being there for my LI especially when they are going through some stuff. I thought the Ethan stuff while shitty did enable for some good scenes between Erynn and the MC. Like when he saved her from Ethan in the ally spending the night in her apartment , and going on the photoshoot date.

 

[Jarulf]

Yeah I think if we are a new MC and we don't really get to spend time with the old LI from this game I might prefer a new game too but part of me wants Intertwined 2 more because I kind of want to spend more time and see these characters. I think Ive seen Nyx say she isn't sure if it's gonna be Intertwined 2 or a new game first. But I think she wants to do Intertwined 2 at some point.

It would be fun to follow the gang a few more years, absolutely, but a new game might feel fresher and perhaps allow Nyx to tell other stories. Guess we'll see in time.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

I didn't really find her cute until this update if im being honest. maybe once or twice in the past. Erynn was always the cute one for me

Tho Val is just as cute for me.

 

[anonnyscouse]

Intertwined 2 will lean into all the things Nyx has been teasing but pulling away from, only one female character from Intertwined will return and she's the sister of the new protagonist who we'll find out that the protagonist has been obsessing over. It'll be set up as a harem game with the protagonist thinking he can get every girl, but then it turns into an NTR game with the protagonist's new best friend either stealing the girls for himself or turnimg them into prostitutes to make him money because he says the protagonist owes him for the disfiguring injuries he suffered at the end of Intertwined 1.

 

[Jarulf]

oh don't get me wrong I don't like it either other than at the start of it it all. Pretty much I liked it up to the point we do a photoshoot with her then after that it felt like it wasn't really going anywhere for me. I just like what it brought to the realtionship since I do like being there for my LI especially when they are going through some stuff. I thought the Ethan stuff while shitty did enable for some good scenes between Erynn and the MC. Like when he saved her from Ethan in the ally spending the night in her apartment , and going on the photoshoot date.

I absolutely get what you're saying. We want to be there for our girl, you want to save Erynn's life and I want Layla to pass her Spanish tests. It's nice to be the hero.
I don't think it's the blackmail as such that I hate, shit like that happens (and may those who do it burn forever in hell), I'm just not happy with how Zach and Ethan are caricatures of evil guys. It's not necessarily the plot itself I mind, but how it's written. It's just boring, and being that, I don't feel as much for Erynn as I should. Idk, I have trouble explaining this.

 

[Elduriel]

I absolutely get what you're saying. We want to be there for our girl, you want to save Erynn's life and I want Layla to pass her Spanish tests. It's nice to be the hero.
I don't think it's the blackmail as such that I hate, shit like that happens (and may those who do it burn forever in hell), I'm just not happy with how Zach and Ethan are caricatures of evil guys. It's not necessarily the plot itself I mind, but how it's written. It's just boring, and being that, I don't feel as much for Erynn as I should. Idk, I have trouble explaining this.

it could have been a decent (still a bit overused) plot device, if it hadn't been milked for literal years at this point. Now it's just indeed boring.

 

[LSC82]

it could have been a decent (still a bit overused) plot device, if it hadn't been milked for literal years at this point. Now it's just indeed boring.

Amen.
And it ends up to slowing down progression of the Erynn relationship.

 

[mike12013]

She loves to tease things, mess with people, she won't put incest, but keeps showing Emily topless(or more) and creating awkward situations with her son.
And she decided to tease NTR guys too, with the fake Erynn.
Emily-John also made various groups of people furious.

She's a top tier troll honestly

Zach and Ethan are caricatures of evil guys

That was my main complaint with the game tbh. I like how everything progresses, I made a comment in another thread that playing that game from the perspective of a new player offers a complete different perspective to waiting six months or whatever for an update.

Zach is deep enough to be somewhat compelling (A deeply insecure immature idiot but hides behind fake confidence, Ethan prayed on that and offered him a bunch of stuff he wanted and cause he's not that smart he fell right for it) , but Ethan is just pure evil, and that's a bit.. flat. The only motivation that's shown is he wants to fuck Erynn, nothing about having Erynn wrapped around his finger would do well for his career or making money, nothing that even slightly redeems him or offers depth, he's just an evil dude for the sake of being evil.

 

[gymnopedies]

A week has passed and no one has had the courtesy to upload the game? And they just spoil the party for everyone else with their spoilers? What bad people they are.