VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Maviarab]

I simply dislike Eryyn because everything she says to the MC or the way she behaves around him proves that she still views him as a child or at best an emotional support teddy bear/ cuddly animal, not as a man. The MC is not seen as a grown Man in Erryn eyes, but as a sexless "emotional support" creature whom she hugs and weeps into during her times of hardship and crises, afterwards she goes hopping back to Ethan. Remember how she mentions Ethan during the conversation with Alexis? "oh and you seduced him and slept with him too?" she would not care about that shit if she was truly disgusted by Ethan, but she brought it up because she thought Alexis is again stealing another thing from her, this time her emotional support cuddly bear (MC). Anyone else thinks that?

No, i don't think that at all actually. She didn't "hopp" back to ethan, it's clear from her pov's she hates that guy. Her bringing that up with Lexi had nothing to do with ethan per se, just that erynn thought lexi slept with someone close (at that point her and ethan was fairly close) to her again.

I think it's perfectly clear that she has real feelings for the MC but to much has happened to her so she doesn't really now how to act around him (yet). That is why we follow Nyx's story and watches it unfold.

I would say she is (or appears to be) quite needy, however that is not neccessarily a bad thing per-se and certainly doesn't bother me. I personally like a little neediness from a woman myself at times.

However, missing the fact that in most likelihood, Ethan planted seeds about him and Alexis to Erynn in order to break their friendship. Ethan seems very much a domineering and controlling personality and would have not liked (or still doesn't) Erynn having a close relationhip with someone, regardless of who that person is and especially if that person also dislikes him and may try to 'poision Erynn's view' of him.

I don't know, Erryn reminds me of the type of women whom want to hoard a specific type of guy for emotional support/ sexless cuddling while having another type of guy for everything else basically. I think this applies to emily and andreas to some extent. Emily was a soon-to-be deadbeat mom with no future and a soon-to-be child to take of without any support, so she went to Andreas by necessity, while her heart belonged to the alpha chad Santi, despite he was a douche and did not own up to his mistakes.

Now...you are projecting your own hatred. A deadbeat soon-to-be mom? Deadbeat? She was 18 and in college...not some trailer trash common, low-class waster. As for Erynn...you really get that opinion from her? Really?.....Ffs....some people....I feel sorry for you for whichever woman hurt you.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Were there really that many comments hating on Erynn because of the job she is clearly forced into? Must have filtered those out subconsciously. How tf people do that after that scene with the phone call, where she is clearly distressed? Even if it's not prostitution, she is obviously in a position where she is exposed to crazy amount of harassment. And we don't even know if any of it is her fault. Assuming that escorting is something to be condemned. On a porn site

I mean I can understand having preference for your partners job, or deal breakers or whatever, but she was nothing but a good and caring friend since MC came back. He can at least be there for her as a friend.

She was also very endearing in her clumsy "possessive" attempts at flirting. This one has nothing to do with a possible seedy job, just wanted to put it out there.

Can't wait to learn her reasons, and there better not be any letters stained with an undercover agent's tears

People see what they wanna see i suppose........

But you are 100% correct!

 

[HornyyPussy]

I don't know, Erryn reminds me of the type of women whom want to hoard a specific type of guy for emotional support/ sexless cuddling while having another type of guy for everything else basically. I think this applies to emily and andreas to some extent. Emily was a soon-to-be deadbeat mom with no future and a soon-to-be child to take of without any support, so she went to Andreas by necessity, while her heart belonged to the alpha chad Santi, despite he was a douche and did not own up to his mistakes.

Huh! Interesting how people can take away such different things from the same scenes I haven't seen Erynn and Emily like that at all, well, as mavi said, erynn may be a bit needy but that's about it for me.

 

[Maviarab]

Were there really that many comments hating on Erynn because of the job she is clearly forced into? Must have filtered those out subconsciously. How tf people do that after that scene with the phone call, where she is clearly distressed? Even if it's not prostitution, she is obviously in a position where she is exposed to crazy amount of harassment. And we don't even know if any of it is her fault. Assuming that escorting is something to be condemned. On a porn site

Like I said in a previous post...world's full of hypocrites.

 

[Deleted member 207916]

Well, this is much more a romance novel than real life so....



Personally I'm quite fond of Mavi He tells it like he sees it and doesn't apologize for it, something I respect. Can he be an uncompromising ass sometimes? Oh absolutely!! But that just adds to his charm

I can tolerate some honest crazinies and even to corect me if i'm wrong. But to go all hostile and agressive without given reason or provocation no thanks. I get the point that he tells things as he sees it and i tell them as well. The guy simply doesn't get it that there's bigger world besides him and that others have their opinions on matter. He doesn't know what the word "Theory" means, he doesn't try to read whole comment and later on he makes partial conclusion without reading the full sentence. I wouldn't be surprised if he's just a kid and doesn't know how world works and that other peoples have their on views on certain matters. And being non apologetic, well he can be like that to his parents not me. If his parents failed him that's not my problem its his. He started to pick up fights like some kid, probably hormones. 16YO in my country are just like that. I know that i can be wrong, i can make a mistake for sure, i can be anoying for sure. I tell things as i see 'em. If you agree with me cool, not agree with me also cool. That's what he aperently deosn't get.

 

[bosp]

Maybe it's not for them but to distract the other players who'll be looking at her instead of concentrating on the game.
Plenty of possibilities.

Aye, it's a possibility too.

Looking forward to seeing how you will pull it off in the end

 

[DA22]

I would say she is (or appears to be) quite needy, however that is not neccessarily a bad thing per-se and certainly doesn't bother me. I personally like a little neediness from a woman myself at times.

However, missing the fact that in most likelihood, Ethan planted seeds about him and Alexis to Erynn in order to break their friendship. Ethan seems very much a domineering and controlling personality and would have not liked (or still doesn't) Erynn having a close relationhip with someone, regardless of who that person is and especially if that person also dislikes him and may try to 'poision Erynn's view' of him.


Now...you are projecting your own hatred. A deadbeat soon-to-be mom? Deadbeat? She was 18 and in college...not some trailer trash common, low-class waster. As for Erynn...you really get that opinion from her? Really?.....Ffs....some people....I feel sorry for you for whichever woman hurt you.

Well let us not condemn Emily of being trailer trash or such. At least from Andreas looking back upon that relationship you could not really blame him if he felt he was and always has been her at best second choice and only in the picture cause Emily had a child and needed a father and possibly an extra income. Whether he is right or not, only Emily knows for sure though

Edit: To be fair though and what most people now shitting on Emily seem to forget is the fact our MC suffered two trauma's. the first trauma was the divorce because he had in his eyes a perfect childhood with loving parents. Now that is not a description I would expect if Emily had not cared for Andres and had only been with him for the kid or money. So it looks that Andres may well have won over time what he wanted most and due to his own issues and a stupid move from Emily lost it all.

 

[Sngo]

Yeah Andres taking Emily despite she is pregnent from some other man clearly is not something many would do.
I also found his reaction/temper at the park more than understandable, most men would have a similiar reaction, if not worse, when the women u love tells u she is pregnant by some douchebag. The same goes for women if u would tell them u have knocked up some slut...i would like to see the one which takes that information without throwing a fit (or something else).

Maybe choosing the public park for such a sensible talk is also not the best idea...

Honestly even with the shit Andres pulled at his last scene, i still find him more sympathetic than Emily.
Just that last talk where she said how she meet Santi in secret for several times, i mean come on Andres takes her when she 18 and pregnant from someone else, he raises MC like his own son and Emily don't think that he maybe has a right to be involved in this talk about his son...followed by her comment about how she will always love Santi for knocking her up, but doesn't give a shit about Andres which is the man & father which was there for her and her son all the time...she really takes the cake in this update (just to stay polite), for me she is nearly as likeable as Ethan.

I mean even the MC is doubtful if she ever loved Andres.



Pretty much this, i wouldn't go so far as giving u the lighter...but i wouldn't care either.

Also Erynn the best looking girl ?? Nikki beats her with ease and Cara, Lyla & Gabi are easily on the same level as Erynn imo.

I had think the same thing, everyone pointing fingers to andres but no one saying that a walk in the park isn't a place to bring on that topic and he's reaction was more than reasonable.

If it was the opposite no one would say a crap about it and even would call the guy a bastard.

Like people in my country say "2 weights 2 measures".

He may be pulling some shit right now but even after all that he was more parent than Emily.
And the way that Emily doesn't care even a bit about andres really seems she just used him to have support to raise her son with the douche, that tells a lot about how little she is.

At the beggining i had some interest in her but after the fit she throws and blurt out that about andres when mc catch her with melissa and now this update she really is meeting erryn in the complete bottom of my list.

Well for me Nikki and Alexis are well above Erynn.
Cara is really pretty and that cuteness can overshadow erynn with ease.
Erryn may be in equal looks terms with Helen, Layla and Gabi, but if we had personality on that equation Layla and Helen get well above her.

 

[Deleted member 2093814]

Damn there`s so much salt in this thread. Relax. Take a breather. Walk away and go for a shit or something

You got people being pissed because someone likes such and such a LI and hates others...others pissed and giving moral lectures `cos they be on high horses...fuck me.
It`s just a game lads.

I`ve dumped a few LI this update for what could seem shallow reasons but that`s because I know the hard choice is going to come up at some point...so, sorry Erryn/Alexis/Layla but Nikki is hot wifey material so far and a LOT less drama than the others as yet (Until Nyx drops a bomb)

 

[Bailz]

Like I said in a previous post...world's full of hypocrites.

aww Mavi seems you been making some new friends while i've been away it just warms my heart to see it

 

[HornyyPussy]

aww Mavi seems you been making some new friends while i've been away it just warms my heart to see it

Well, he's working hard at it

 

[bosp]

1. How old are you?
2. Do you know what a Geisha is? (real term, not the modern one). Still incredibly popular in Japan btw. Not to be confused with a courtesan.
3. Plenty of women work as a 'hostess' designed to help men relax, drink, spend money, open their mouths to information. Yes some let/are required to allow men to get handsy at times...they are not escorts, hookers and do not indulge in sex with clients. There are there as eye candy and to serve specific purposes.

Please educate yourself to what actually does happen in the real world. You know the old saying....better to let people think you're a fool....

Oh man, I am too old for real-life to hold many secrets if any at all. I've seen and experienced a lot.
People like to hold to half-truths to paint the world in brighter colors than it actually is.


I know what a Geisha is.
I know what "hostesses" do, in almost all cases much more than their "official" job description entails and they all know what is really required of them.

Let us be realistic and say what actually does happen in the real world without any tinted glasses with flowers on top.

I share your sentiment about Erryn's plot so I will disregard the condescending tone of your comment, you feel hurt and I understand that but it's just a VN.
I like her and I would have no problem hooking with her regardless of the plot twist Nyx decides to use.

 

[MV_1999]

Downloaded the new update yesterday, but didn't have time to play then. Today I played it, actually twice (2 different paths). I think this game becomes more interesting with each update.
Also took me like 2 hours to read the comments here from yeaterday and today. When I started reading there were 326 pages and now there are 329, you people write a lot.

 

[Adamu_]

I don't know, Erryn reminds me of the type of women whom want to hoard a specific type of guy for emotional support/ sexless cuddling while having another type of guy for everything else basically. I think this applies to emily and andreas to some extent. Emily was a soon-to-be deadbeat mom with no future and a soon-to-be child to take care of without any support, so she went to Andreas by necessity, while her heart belonged to the alpha chad Santi, despite he was a douche and did not own up to his mistakes.

Erynn literally kissed MC when he was sleeping and joked about getting married. I doubt it was her "stringing him along", no dev here would make a friendzone simulator, not even Nyx the emotional dominatrix.

As for Emily, "deadbeat mom with no future" part made me The rest... Ah, well, I can honestly kinda see why someone would think that. It happens, and it always is a sad sight to see. In Emily's case it can be supported by her "explanation" dialogue with the MC, to an extent. On the other hand, nothing she did should have come as a surprise to Andres, unless he was completely blinded by hormones.

 

[DA22]

Erynn literally kissed MC when he was sleeping and joked about getting married. I doubt it was her "stringing him along", no dev here would make a friendzone simulator, not even Nyx the emotional dominatrix.

As for Emily, "deadbeat mom with no future" part made me The rest... Ah, well, I can honestly kinda see why someone would think that. It happens, and it always is a sad sight to see. In Emily's case it can be supported by her "explanation" dialogue with the MC, to an extent. On the other hand, nothing she did should have come as a surprise to Andres, unless he was completely blinded by hormones.

I think that is the problem, that Andres did see it. Always had some doubt over her loving him as much as he did her and that is why he exploded as he did when Emily went talking to Santiago behind his back and by doing so destroyed everything he had build up with her in the last 10 years. Serious blunder from Emily who should have known better and due to lack of trust from Andres the bitter end of their relation since he could never overcome his own doubts.

 

[Sancho1969]

That's a modded code and is incorrect. You don't get points for peeking.

No..it doesn't. Sure you haven't overwittten the game folder...done something else unusual...installed mod...looking at pre-reworked code?

From unmodded, fresh install of update 0.06:

    scene 783 with Dissolve(1)
    menu:
        "Peek":
            scene 784 with Dissolve(1)
            mc "{i}(Wow... I've known her for so long and this is the first time I've seen her naked...){/i}"
            scene black with Dissolve(1)
            transform moveup:
                xalign 0.5 yalign 1.0
                linear 5.0 yalign 0.0
            show 785 at moveup
            pause 7
            mc "{i}(I know this is wrong but... Damn. She's so gorgeous.){/i}"
            scene 786 with Dissolve(1)
            mc "{i}(What would've happened between us if I didn't leave?){/i}"
            mc "{i}(Maybe... I can find out now?){/i}"
            menu:
                "Go back":
                    $ Erynn_Week1_ShowerJoin = False
                    mc "{i}(Better not. Don't want to risk our friendship for my curiosity.){/i}"
                    jump erynnmeet2
                "Join her":
                    $ Erynn_Week1_ShowerJoin = True
                    $ Erynn_Points -= 4

I am so sorry for wasting both of your time. My bad, I realized after you pointed it out that I had dumped a mod on top of the scripts. Again, my sincerest apologies as I don't normally make these kind of mistakes in posts. Thank you both and kindest regards.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

I think that is the problem, that Andres did see it. Always had some doubt over her loving him as much as he did her and that is why he exploded as he did when Emily went talking to Santiago behind his back and by doing so destroyed everything he had build up with her in the last 10 years. Serious blunder from Emily who should have known better and due to lack of trust from Andres the bitter end of their relation since he could never overcome his own doubts.

Just want to point out. We don't actually know that Emily went behind Andres' back. All we know is that she started talking to Santi, and Andres started escalating fights out of jealousy. She could have been up front with Andres from the start, for all we know. It wouldn't change Andres' having suspicions and then acting out, since its his wife having one on one time with her former lover.

Thats a possible scenario, too. Although I don't really favour it, since it kind of just shits on Andres further. Man's a bit of a cunt, but he's still the guy who set aside his pride to support Emily and MC.

 

[bosp]

Well, this is much more a romance novel than real life so....

Heh, hence I put that sentence first, this is indeed a VN.

Personally I'm quite fond of Mavi He tells it like he sees it and doesn't apologize for it, something I respect. Can he be an uncompromising ass sometimes? Oh absolutely!! But that just adds to his charm

Mavi is a good fellow, he just got overly emotional about some things being said here, nothing more to it.

 

[Deleted member 207916]

Just want to point out. We don't actually know that Emily went behind Andres' back. All we know is that she started talking to Santi, and Andres started escalating fight out of jealousy. She could have been up front with Andres from the start, for all we know. It wouldn't change Andres' having suspicions and then acting out, since its his wife having one on one time with her former lover.

Thats a possible scenario, too. Although I don't really favour it, since it kind of just shits on Andres further. Man's a bit of a cunt, but he's still the guy who set aside his pride to support Emily and MC.

That's what i had tolled regarding Andres. He swallowed his pride, he supported Emily and MC, even tho he wasn't his own. Later on after Emily started meeting up with Santiago because of their kid Andres went full jealous. Thru that jealousy he cheated others and in climax he hited MC.

 

[DA22]

Just want to point out. We don't actually know that Emily went behind Andres' back. All we know is that she started talking to Santi, and Andres started escalating fights out of jealousy. She could have been up front with Andres from the start, for all we know. It wouldn't change Andres' having suspicions and then acting out, since its his wife having one on one time with her former lover.

Thats a possible scenario, too. Although I don't really favour it, since it kind of just shits on Andres further. Man's a bit of a cunt, but he's still the guy who set aside his pride to support Emily and MC.

Fair enough. Yeah his reaction was wrong and cost him a lot, same for Emily and MC. Still Emily should have been wiser and stayed away from Santi, especially knowing how Andres felt about him. She was in a relation with Andres after all so some slight taking into account his sensitivities would not have been wrong. Emily was selfish there for her own reasons. Bit the same as the Ethan and Erryn situation, it would likely have felt way less of a betrayal for MC if Erryn had preferred someone else as Ethan over him, the guy that actually abused him.