I really like the idea of the "unsent" letter from Erynn that she had held on to, unsure of whether to send it or not. She then decides to give it to him and he reads for himself how much him leaving affected her. Perhaps we could even get a few renders showing a sad Erynn with Melissa and Lexi helping her through it.This would be a nice sweet memento
Things Nyx could do...
One last written but unsent letter.
A early draft from one of the letters, before she rewrote because of "mistakes"(having words crossed/traced over for effect).
Andres having not delivered one, he knew what would happen and decided to save it.
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100%, the "gotcha" would be sacrificing the story for a short term shock.
Yeah everyone saw this one coming... doesn't mean you have to come up with a different (much shittier)twist just to surprise people.
It's not only John-Erynn-Iris trio that we would be losing... but also a potential John-Melissa-Emily triangle.
And the MC dating another of John's daughters lol.
Focus on making the scene as emotional as possible instead of surprise effect (characters inside the story can still be surprised/shocked).
I also like your flashback idea... not bad.
Doesn't need to be very long.
Erynn starts writing a letter, Melissa comes in and says "writing another one?" and Erynn can express how sad she feels that she hasn't heard anything back yet... how she misses the little guy and wondered if she could/should've done something different.
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And a potential - ohshit - John-Melissa-MC triangle ... You'll be up against your surrogate papa. I'd bow out of that one for John.
100%, the "gotcha" would be sacrificing the story for a short term shock.
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Hows this for a gotcha Ethan is the MCs half brother 
Swwear if this happens I am done.
Swwear if this happens I am done.
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I love that erynn's mother and father are the people that encouraged him to get his sleeve.
So either ethan gets his phone stolen and ups the pressure on erryn or he finds out who john is and winds up doing something stupid/dangerous, regardless, next update is gonna be some trouble
So either ethan gets his phone stolen and ups the pressure on erryn or he finds out who john is and winds up doing something stupid/dangerous, regardless, next update is gonna be some trouble
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I can see Ethan finding out John is lying and something happens, Ethan already made the call for a background check.
Whether it's him getting roughed up or going the way of Rachel, it'll get real spicy.
Whether it's him getting roughed up or going the way of Rachel, it'll get real spicy.
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well iris made choice to start fucking mc not other way around and erynn banging we need to wait.
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I'm guessing most Melissa content will be confined to fantasies due to her daughter's relationship ( be it friend or lover) with the MC. Well, unless shes having lesbeen content with emily
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that's very possible besides john railing her since that'd be potential ntr.
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I wonder if he'd be into her with her current hairstyle though. He might have a thing for blondes
She is one of the main love interests, so she will get content eventually. Nyx says something specific needs to happen story wise before it offically starts moving forward.