VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[Topper69]

I don't get the purpose of that EP9. Nikki/Cara routes should be closed long before since long distance relationships are never going to work (it's common sense by now). Now they show up again to remember the MC to not fuck around other girls, wtf?

The flashback with Iris is amusing and shows clearly a flaw of the current game, the MC is shown from a point of view of a woman (obviously). I once thought it's a good thing in this game, but in EP9 it gets out of hand. At first he makes a picture of a bareboned girl in a park (which is Zach style wtf.), then let her bully him the whole next day to get fucked and losing virginity a day later. If this wouldn't be enough he gets ghosted for nearly a week by the girl who laid em first and he doesn't even think to go visit her instead of typing messages in a phone, again wtf..

Regarding the main plot there's not much development if there is a main plot at all. Erynn or any other MG does not get much and there's a big cliffhanger at the end. Zach is the standard idiot like always and get's even worse.
The MC is inconsistent at best, sometimes he acts like a sissy sometimes not.
I start to lose faith into Nyx. I will continue to support via Patreon but I'm a little bit disappointed.

 

[MrD812]

I don't get the purpose of that EP9. Nikki/Cara routes should be closed long before since long distance relationships are never going to work (it's common sense by now). Now they show up again to remember the MC to not fuck around other girls, wtf?

The flashback with Iris is amusing and shows clearly a flaw of the current game, the MC is shown from a point of view of a woman (obviously). I once thought it's a good thing in this game, but in EP9 it gets out of hand. At first he makes a picture of a bareboned girl in a park (which is Zach style wtf.), then let her bully him the whole next day to get fucked and losing virginity a day later. If this wouldn't be enough he gets ghosted for nearly a week by the girl who laid em first and he doesn't even think to go visit her instead of typing messages in a phone, again wtf..

Regarding the main plot there's not much development if there is a main plot at all. Erynn or any other MG does not get much and there's a big cliffhanger at the end. Zach is the standard idiot like always and get's even worse.
The MC is inconsistent at best, sometimes he acts like a sissy sometimes not.
I start to lose faith into Nyx. I will continue to support via Patreon but I'm a little bit disappointed.

Could not have said it better myself, Thank You~

 

[NewTricks]

Just a reminder to everybody on the board. You don't have to respond to every ridiculous comment. In fact, the more absurd a comment is the less likely it happens to be that it needs to be refuted or challenged. I call it the inverse property of relative credulity. If you bite down on troll bait don't be surprised to find a hook inside it. Just facepalm that shit if you must and move on with your day, secure in the knowledge that you have expressed your incredulity with the amount of brevity it deserves.

 

[nyrek]

Just a reminder to everybody on the board. You don't have to respond to every ridiculous comment. In fact, the more absurd a comment is the less likely it happens to be that it needs to be refuted or challenged. I call it the inverse property of relative credulity. If you bite down on troll bait don't be surprised to find a hook inside it. Just facepalm that shit if you must and move on with your day,

nah, that'd be too easy, and I'm too bored.
also he took a shot at melissa and I won't stand for it!

this one doesn't even feel like a troll. if he is trolling, he's doing a really bad job.
I mean, he did get replies and reacts, sure, but this is far from a real troll
take, for instance, warscared. that's a good troll. (don't get me wrong, I love his posts.)

 

[LSC82]

I don't get the purpose of that EP9. Nikki/Cara routes should be closed long before since long distance relationships are never going to work (it's common sense by now). Now they show up again to remember the MC to not fuck around other girls, wtf?

The flashback with Iris is amusing and shows clearly a flaw of the current game, the MC is shown from a point of view of a woman (obviously). I once thought it's a good thing in this game, but in EP9 it gets out of hand. At first he makes a picture of a bareboned girl in a park (which is Zach style wtf.), then let her bully him the whole next day to get fucked and losing virginity a day later. If this wouldn't be enough he gets ghosted for nearly a week by the girl who laid em first and he doesn't even think to go visit her instead of typing messages in a phone, again wtf..

Regarding the main plot there's not much development if there is a main plot at all. Erynn or any other MG does not get much and there's a big cliffhanger at the end. Zach is the standard idiot like always and get's even worse.
The MC is inconsistent at best, sometimes he acts like a sissy sometimes not.
I start to lose faith into Nyx. I will continue to support via Patreon but I'm a little bit disappointed.

It felt fillerish, Nikki/Cara drop by at random just so people don't forget they exist.
How passive the MC is in getting dates is a big flaw, we have to wait for girls to randomly show up at our door instead of chasing who we want, it leads to pacing issues.

On the hair front, i prefer long, i think Iris looks much better with long hair, doesn't change who she is as a person but makes her more attractive(to me), still i understand there are some dummies out there who prefer short hair and they deserve something for them too.
I feel like Tori would look better with natural black hair instead of that blonde she has going on, but again matter of taste.

 

[Dalish]

It felt fillerish, Nikki/Cara drop by at random just so people don't forget they exist.
How passive the MC is in getting dates is a big flaw, we have to wait for girls to randomly show up at our door instead of chasing who we want, it leads to pacing issues.

On the hair front, i prefer long, i think Iris looks much better with long hair, doesn't change who she is as a person but makes her more attractive(to me), still i understand there are some dummies out there who prefer short hair and they deserve something for them too.
I feel like Tori would look better with natural black hair instead of that blonde she has going on, but again matter of taste.

I like Iris short hair also as much as her long hair. She's still cute af. Not all women call pull it off though.

 

[nyrek]

there are some dummies out there who prefer short hair

come on, there was no need for that

the thing about short hair is... not every chick can pull it off. but the ones who can... daayuuuuuum

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I like Iris short hair also as much as her long hair. She's still cute af. Not all women call pull it off though.

yeah, this. I liked iris with short hair and got used to her like that for the past few months. this whole long hair flashback thingy... nah, ain't working for me

 

[LSC82]

I like Iris short hair also as much as her long hair. She's still cute af. Not all women call pull it off though.

I think you should get your eyes checked but fair enough .

come on, there was no need for that

the thing about short hair is... not every chick can pull it off. but the ones who can... daayuuuuuum

The dummies part i meant as a joke, sorry if it didn't come through.

 

[nyrek]

I think you should get your eyes checked but fair enough .



The dummies part i meant as a joke, sorry if it didn't come through.

don't worry, I understood it, I just played along

 

[MrD812]

I must have missed the part where Erynn locked herself away in a convent waiting for the MC to return. Oh, wait...

She moved on, had intimate relationships (and would probably still be in one if she hadn't also kicked her highschool love to the kurb at the behest of Ethan)

Just for the record, we only know of one ---> her HS BF Zane
She didn't kick him to the curb.
Zane dumped Erynn when Ethan blackmailed Erynn(with the sex-tape) into going with Ethan to the prom.
NOT her BF Zane.

 

[MrD812]

The biggest mystery in this game is why Erynn doesn't have sex with the MC. She says she is in love with him. And she is not a virgin. Is it because Zane is someone that the MC had a fight with? Or it could be because of her relationship with Alexis. Everything leads to the belief that they were/are sexually involved. And that would be the reason that almost made her end the relationship with Alexis when Ethan lied saying that Alexis had sex with him. But that loses a bit of meaning when we see Alexis and Erynn fighting for the love of the MC. So it all comes back to Zane's character. Zane could be Ethan's friend or his brother. And that explains why Ethan knows about Zane's meeting with Erynn. This mystery will only be revealed in the next chapters. The other mystery that will be revealed in the next chapters is whether Valeria is Gabi's daughter. If this is true. She is Navarro's daughter. Which makes her Alexis and Layla's half-sister. Because Navarro is Gabi's husband. And everything indicates that he is also Adriana's husband. And how everything in this game is intertwined. As the name of the game says. Navarro may be the MC's father. This makes the MC half-brother to Alexis and Layla and possibly also half-brother to Valeria. And there is a possibility that John is Erynn's father. Melissa said the guy who got her pregnant is tall, athletic, blond and tattooed. In other words, everything leads us to believe that she was talking about John. In other words, Erynn could be Iris's half-sister. One thing that is already clear is that Lakeyn is Alexis and Layla's cousin. But another thing some players didn't realize is that Lakeyn could be Iris' ex-girlfriend or her friend. Lakeyn when he met the MC was going to the park. And that's what made the MC want to go to the park. And in the park he met Iris.

First and foremost.

Apologies, i didn't read all of Your "block'of'text".
No disrespect intended.

The 'no sex with Erynn' part is Entirely on Nyx.

Twice her and MC Almost have sex:

1) after MC punches Ethans Lights out when caught slapping Erynn.
2) in MC's room playing on the computer(Emily kinda/sorta cock blocks that from happening).

May have been other times it could have happen but again, that's ALL on Nyx.

 

[MrD812]

One thing the developer will have to explain properly is the fact that Erynn didn't go to the MC's house on other days while the MC was still her neighbor. Because the MC didn't move cities the same day he confessed his love for her and thought she laughed at him.

Erynn was not Afraid.
He refused to see or talk with Erynn.
Read everything, will be helpful.

 

[brunor88]

Erynn was not Afraid.
He refused to see or talk with Erynn.
Read everything, will be helpful.

Erynn was not Afraid.
He refused to see or talk with Erynn.
Read everything, will be helpful.

That part of the game I had forgotten. But if you look at the forum. A user has already shown me where I was wrong in my thinking.

 

[MrD812]

That part of the game I had forgotten. But if you look at the forum. A user has already shown me where I was wrong in my thinking.

Your choice, read what is in the VN or not.

It's there, see for Yourself.

 

[brunor88]

Your choice, read what is in the VN or not.

It's there, see for Yourself.

I read. But the problem is that I have to wait for the developer to release new chapters. And I play other games. So it's natural to forget things about the game.

 

[MrD812]

The only scene i got where you after pretty much following the Layla path backs off suddenly is for Alexis, you get 3 options, break up Layla, same thing with Alexis and lie to both of them(doesn't turn out so well lol).
Nothing in relation to Nikki, other than looks of jealousy.


Good points about Nikki, i'll add another thing for her:
She's been through this already, having to deal with her sister having the same feelings for the MC... other girls that she doesn't even know?
That's nothing, she will throw her hat in the ring regardless.


Erynn is hesitant to open up due to past experiences, that's why (i believe) she wants the perfect romantic "made for each other" experience rather than just jump the MCs bones out of hornyness.
There's definitely some stalling (i feel like Nyx wants to finish telling her story before "allowing" sex), the MC could've already invited her to do something, but it is what it is, the game doesn't allow us to invite her to a restaurant/movie/whatever and have a light hearted date with her.
The why didn't they talk ever, is kinda explained in the story that he was behaving like a dick, she tried but he was purposefully avoiding her... not a great explanation how he managed to avoid her for a month(must be great at sneaking huh) but yeah, that's how the game explained.

The mom scenes seem to be down to sense of humor of the dev, Nyx keeps getting asked about incest, "will the mom be on the menu?" and she's taking a piss.
Honestly, given how far along the game already is, it would be a brutal 180 for her to go from normal mom to "porn logic" mom now.

We've only seen Layla/Alexis dad from the back, never his face, he has the same black hair as Navarro but there's not much else to go on...
Navarro is with 99,9% certainty married to Gabi after what we hear from Gabi at the sports event.
Even for this game legalized poligamy would be a major stretch... we see that Gabi is in fact married not just a side thing for Navarro(she has her own side thing in fact lol).
And Principal Moore also lives with her husband, i'd say her husband can maybe be brother or cousin to Navarro, but not Navarro himself.
That would make Layla/Alexis our cousins... but maybe that's a "crossable" incest line, someone more informed on Patreon rules can clarify this.

Gabi and Val... remains to be seen, maybe 10 years apart sisters, fits better than mom in my opinion.

And i'm a big supporter of the John>Erynn idea (with Iris as a bonus).

Nyx has alot of potential in the VN that goes neglected from many respected points of view.
Erynn is paramount within that perspective.
But again, that's all on Nyx in what direction she chooses and blatantly does not.

 

[MrD812]

I read. But the problem is that I have to wait to release new chapters. And I play other games. So it's natural to forget things about the game.

I hear ya on the busy part BIG time.
Easy to forget things but it's all there.
Go back and refresh so You know beyond any shadow of doubt.

 

[brunor88]

My Top 10 sexy girls
1- Nikki
2- Gabi
3- Valeria
4- Erynn
5-Cara
6- Emily
7- Layla
8-Elena
9- Melissa
10- Brooke
My Top 3 ugly bitches
1-Tori
2-Tori
3-And Tori

 

[Dalish]

My Top 10 sexy girls
1- Nikki
2- Gabi
3- Valeria
4- Erynn
5-Cara
6- Emily
7- Layla
8-Elena
9- Melissa
10- Brooke
My Top 3 ugly bitches
1-Tori
2-Tori
3-And Tori

We'll see if Val jumps up your list when she finally gets some scenes lol

 

[gabrixp1]

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