VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Dessolos]

She is now number 3 for me after this update

haah exact same as me it was Nikki in 3rd but now Val took her her spot. So for me Erynn , Alexis , Val

 

[Tremonia]

she had issues way before Zane, I find Erynn to be an antagonist in this story. "i want" "I need" only better after Mc returns She the pretty girl that goes for the bad guy and the good one is friend zone forever. but she want him to fix it. and even blames him for leaving. Hinting if he did not leave it all would have been different. total BS.

Wow, you really didn't understand anything about the Erynn character in the game. I don't know why, and to be honest I don't care, but you should really play this game again and read more carefully. Also a little bit of knowledge about traumas could be helpful.

 

[byaaahh]

Zane can't be the teacher, or there are two Zanes

The model Zane pulled out because his nose got fucked up, unless he lied to go catch some waves.

 

[Dessolos]

she had issues way before Zane, I find Erynn to be an antagonist in this story. "i want" "I need" only better after Mc returns She the pretty girl that goes for the bad guy and the good one is friend zone forever. but she want him to fix it. and even blames him for leaving. Hinting if he did not leave it all would have been different. total BS.

I mean I don't think it's unreasonable to blame the MC at all because the MC is the one that handled the situation worst in my opinion. Yeah Erynn handled it bad to but by not letting her explain or talk and ghost her for 5 years is much worst. Then Ethan changes and fakes being nice for a time and Erynn loses almost all her friend because of him. Not to mention the blackmail. I don't think it's unreasonable at all that she may secretly blames the MC at all to some small degree, It 100% would of been different if he never left there is no question about that but to what degree is the question. But I do think it's a bit of a stretch to say she had issues before Zane we don't know enough about Erynn when she was young.

 

[Justaphase]

My guess is that it has to be that Ethan and Zane set this up, Zane is possible another model and based on the title its him, and should he work for the same company. The question did Ethan set it up together with Zane.

I don't see that most girls need to be a gf to have sex, but why when he is single she still isn't willing. remember no matter the reason when Mc originally confessed she walked away not knowing how to answer but knowing he would as the question still she never gave an answer to MC then or now.
He did get a different girl but it still fit the story i wanted explain and no need to be rude.

I don't believe that Zane was involved in setting up the sex tape, he likely isn't even aware of it. My guess is that Ethan overheard or managed to get information as to his plans for a date with Erynn and then setup a camera with the plan to blackmail her with it and here we are.
Most girls do indeed prefer to be in a relationship before taking that step, despite what porn and the media would make you believe. As for his original confession, she was embarrassed, the MC put her on the spot with Lexi and Ethan right there. It was the wrong place and the wrong time, that's on the MC not Erynn.

 

[jadepaladin]

she had issues way before Zane, I find Erynn to be an antagonist in this story. "i want" "I need" only better after Mc returns She the pretty girl that goes for the bad guy and the good one is friend zone forever. but she want him to fix it. and even blames him for leaving. Hinting if he did not leave it all would have been different. total BS.

I'm convinced we're reading different stories. Erynn my not be my favorite but this is the weirdest take I've read for her on this forum and there are some crazy ideas in here. You're trolling right?

 

[MightbeSomeone]

haah exact same as me it was Nikki in 3rd but now Val took her her spot. So for me Erynn , Alexis , Val

Same order for me

 

[jadepaladin]

Zane can't be the teacher, or there are two Zanes

The model Zane pulled out because his nose got fucked up, unless he lied to go catch some waves.

We don't know the male teacher yet, right? Only that his last name is Donovan or something like that? Why can't it be Zane Donovan? The nose thing should have gotten some chatter at school but I think they were on spring break in that period? It'll be telling if Layla or someone mentions it after getting back into the school routine.

 

[Justaphase]

Zane can't be the teacher, or there are two Zanes

The model Zane pulled out because his nose got fucked up, unless he lied to go catch some waves.

No, I think that he will be revealed as Zane Donovan. He is doing an internship at the school. Erynn's "surprise" for the MC is that she is also going to be doing an internship at the school. Which will be rather interesting, to say the least.
As for the busted nose, who knows? I just think that Nyx wanted to tease an "Is it or isn't it the same Zane?" without revealing him that early.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

I don't believe that Zane was involved in setting up the sex tape, he likely isn't even aware of it. My guess is that Ethan overheard or managed to get information as to his plans for a date with Erynn and then setup a camera with the plan to blackmail her with it and here we are.
Most girls do indeed prefer to be in a relationship before taking that step, despite what porn and the media would make you believe. As for his original confession, she was embarrassed, the MC put her on the spot with Lexi and Ethan right there. It was the wrong place and the wrong time, that's on the MC not Erynn.

And yes if the mc had not run away he would have been erynns date to her prom and her life long love. But he was too young to really see what was going on.

 

[byaaahh]

We don't know the male teacher yet, right? Only that his last name is Donovan or something like that? Why can't it be Zane Donovan? The nose thing should have gotten some chatter at school but I think they were on spring break in that period? It'll be telling if Layla or someone mentions it after getting back into the school routine.

Yeah, but you run into Mr Donovan on Val's path and there is nothing wrong with his face.

So either it's not Zane, or he lied to drop out the photoshoot.

 

[jadepaladin]

Yeah, but you run into Mr Donovan on Val's path and there is nothing wrong with his face.

So either it's not Zane, or he lied to drop out the photoshoot.

Yeah good point. Back to drawing board. I used to think Zane was Ethan's other goon, the one that isn't Julian (or whatever his name is).

 

[Dessolos]

No, I think that he will be revealed as Zane Donovan. He is doing an internship at the school. Erynn's "surprise" for the MC is that she is also going to be doing an internship at the school. Which will be rather interesting, to say the least.
As for the busted nose, who knows? I just think that Nyx wanted to tease an "Is it or isn't the same Zane?" without revealing him that early.

oh man I feel like I need to replay the beach scene. I forgot Erynn even mentioned she has a surprise for the MC

 

[byaaahh]

oh man I feel like I need to replay the beach scene. I forgot Erynn even mentioned she has a surprise for the MC

She almost gave him the surprise on the beach, she nearly held his hand

 

[Justaphase]

oh man I feel like I need to replay the beach scene. I forgot Erynn even mentioned she has a surprise for the MC

How is the MC going to feel seeing Erynn and Zane working together and "reconnected"? He is already feeling pretty jealous of the fact that Zane was Erynn's first. Plus he's one good looking dude, with all of the girls swooning over him. He's the male Gabi at the school.
I do wonder why he told his friend that Val is "off limits" when his friend was drooling over how hot she is after the beach date.

 

[Tremonia]

Zane can't be the teacher, or there are two Zanes

Are you kidding us? Just play the Erynn beach date and the Valeria date. It's Mr. Donovan who approaches Erynn at her car. We know his name is Zane from the beach date with Nikki. He's also the brother of Brooke, but you're maybe right there're two Zane's. But Mr. Donovan is Erynn's ex Zane and he's maybe not modelling, even if I personally think he does and there's only this one Zane in the game.

 

[MagicMan753]

Yeah, I am excited for Erynn to be at the school, cause that means even more of her, which i love, since she is my fav.

And maybe we can be naughty and get detention with Erynn.

 

[byaaahh]

Are you kidding us? Just play the Erynn beach date and the Valeria date. It's Mr. Donovan who approaches Erynn at her car. We know his name is Zane from the beach date with Nikki. He's also the brother of Brooke, but you're maybe right there're two Zane's. But Mr. Donovan is Erynn's ex Zane and he's maybe not modelling, even if I personally think he does and there's only this one Zane in the game.

If it is the model who pulled out of the photoshoot (probably is, look at him), he's showing zero signs of damage while you're on Val's date.

So why forego a paycheque?

 

[Dessolos]

How is the MC going to feel seeing Erynn and Zane working together and "reconnected"? He is already feeling pretty jealous of the fact that Zane was Erynn's first. Plus he's one good looking dude, with all of the girls swooning over him. He's the male Gabi at the school.
I do wonder why he told his friend that Val is "off limits" when his friend is drooling over her after the beach date.

if the surprise is what you think it is gonna amazing if we go into class and see Erynn helping out as the math teacher haha. I dont think the MC is gonna pass that class if that is the case just saying. I'm not sure how he is gonna handle the whole Zane thing tho cause yeah he is gonna be jealous but then I think the MC is gonna know he can trust Erynn and nothing is gonna happen unless he ends up being another Ethan. I think the MC might be more protective than jealous around Zane when it comes to Erynn because he is involved with the sex tape he might not fully trust he isn't involved.

But yeah the Val thing makes me curious , at first I thought might be because he knows she is a student but not sure anymore I think it' something else.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

Erynn has done more than hold his hand

and i think ethan is in deep deep shit. He is messing with people with ties to famous athletes, actresses ect . The world will come crashing down on him and there is no way his dad will support him and destroy his agency.