One person is making this? That's really a huge respect for this, especially making a story with so many connections, must have taken ages to write this already. I would guess many things are done just to fit in the drama and such. If this would be written too realistic, it would be all over already or too boring.Art is good, has some outstanding work and leaves little room for improvmants.
Concept on a huge scale is Awsome.
But, MC makes to many pussyfoot/unrealistic choices/actions(as well as others..Priorities, huge mistakes Nyx poorly wrote into the characters).
Some things can be overlooked and yet some, cannot.
Alot of work for one person, gotta give Nyx props for that!
Val is really beautiful! Sad she comes in this late but I hope for more content for her.im just here for val and elena at this point
No, not actual.. If this would be written too realistic, it would be all over already or too boring.
Just how can one be so wrong on everything he says lol, you might be skipping through the game a little too much buddy.I dont see any deeper relation between Erynn and MC at the beginning. And there was no sign that Erynn had a crush on him as a young boy. Just the opposite. Erynn was a teenager and the MC a young boy who got bullied by Erynns boyfriend and Alexis was the one who comforted him when he was crying. And Erynn was in a relationship with Ethan while Alexis was single.
Alexis remembers him, he barely remembers her.In comparison, the MC and Alexis barely remember one another.
For these very Valid reasons.this is the thing that bothers me the most
you can choose to bang alexis on a school night or that's it, she's gone. for someone who knows a lot about MC and knowing her best friend thinks the world of you, you'd think she'd:
a) go after MC either a bit more romantically - at least not fuck him in a plane the moment she meets him
b) or put in a bit more effort - not cutting all ties after you didn't wanna bang her once
well, of course, if she would opt to fuck her best friend over to start with.
and then, on the other side of the LI spectrum, you have erynn, who's supposed to be this super romantic story in MCs life, generally looking like THE one for the MC... and her story is complete crap. she's not there. she loves you but she's not showing it at all (only moment she does is iirc she kisses MC when he's sleeping). whenever I play the game and do anything erynn related, I just feel pushed away by all the bullshit.
all of the reasons above are probably why I've started sticking to layla more and more whenever I'm bored and go for another playthrough. but, again, I'm not playing this for sex scenes.
o.m.g i can't stand the way she's made or even her ways of thinking ... i try my ass off not to get involved with herErynn
to be sure...yes i agree with Alexis actions because i take the relationship between Erynn and MC more like brother and sister at that time.Question i asked is one of Yes/No.
Ya' still did not get it, no biggy.
Advice, many things You will see if looked for.
Will not point them all out in the VN for You atm and ... they been addressed already in several posts here.
My very best reguards to You, Good Luck!
Granted, things may very for You 'if'.to be sure...yes i agree with Alexis actions because i take the relationship between Erynn and MC more like brother and sister at that time.
You are right but for me Erynn and MC are more like brother and sister because i never saw a 15 Year old girl having a crush on a 2-3 Year younger boy. Just opposite is reality. And in my opinion the story on Alexis path is the most finalized and best integrated one until end of chapter 9. I assume that in Chapter 10 we will have the chance to introduce Iris to Erynn and that will may be the most realistic situation since Erynn may will avoid relationships with men after Ethan.Just how can one be so wrong on everything he says lol, you might be skipping through the game a little too much buddy.
Erynn was never Ethan's GF, currently he's attempting to blackmail her into having sex with him, that doesn't sound very ex-BF like...
And at that point in time Erynn was single(she had a boyfriend later who was a different guy named Zane).
When Ethan bullies the MC Erynn fights him.
Both girls went searching for him after the flower incident, by pure chance Alexis runs into him, while Erynn can't find him.
In terms of connection... Erynn has written letters to the MC, tried to reach him and has pinned for his return for years.
The MC on his end wrote a love song about Erynn.
In comparison, the MC and Alexis barely remember one another.
we have to wait and see if she is ok FirstYou are right but for me Erynn and MC are more like brother and sister because i never saw a 15 Year old girl having a crush on a 2-3 Year younger boy. Just opposite is reality. And in my opinion the story on Alexis path is the most finalized and best integrated one until end of chapter 9. I assume that in Chapter 10 we will have the chance to introduce Iris to Erynn and that will may be the most realistic situation since Erynn may will avoid relationships with men after Ethan.
Just for the reccord, when i was 12 my GF was 19.You are right but for me Erynn and MC are more like brother and sister because i never saw a 15 Year old girl having a crush on a 2-3 Year younger boy. Just opposite is reality. And in my opinion the story on Alexis path is the most finalized and best integrated one until end of chapter 9. I assume that in Chapter 10 we will have the chance to introduce Iris to Erynn and that will may be the most realistic situation since Erynn may will avoid relationships with men after Ethan.
The Alexis is path is a girl being a horrible backstabbing friend and manipulative "almost" girlfriend.You are right but for me Erynn and MC are more like brother and sister because i never saw a 15 Year old girl having a crush on a 2-3 Year younger boy. Just opposite is reality. And in my opinion the story on Alexis path is the most finalized and best integrated one until end of chapter 9. I assume that in Chapter 10 we will have the chance to introduce Iris to Erynn and that will may be the most realistic situation since Erynn may will avoid relationships with men after Ethan.