VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Intimate Relations [v1.0] [PTOLEMY]

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.30...

This visual novel/game uses a mix of different choice mechanics which is creative... But it also has more of that overused Family Sex stuff...

The visuals of the characters are pretty good, not perfect, but close... The backdrops are a mix of unique/creative and ones we've all seen a million times in other VN/games...

The script is pretty spot on, as I don't remember seeing any spelling/grammar errors... The plot doesn't seem to have a main protagonist, as you get different types of choices for at least 3 of the main characters... The father, daughter, and wife (she is the daughters step-mother)... The story's main plot involves the husband and wife having marriage problems, and the daughter having feelings for her father (of course)... The daughter is a university student and a intern at her fathers company, and the wife doesn't seem to have a job that I noticed... There are lots of other characters also involved...

Now, depending on choices the sub-plots can go all types of different ways, which will also effect the main plot for the character/s... It's sort of a complex system, made up of choices directed to hidden stats, mixed with your typical story based choices... So it can play out in various ways, yet still pretty much stick to the main plot, with small/medium variances...

I personally went bold choices for the daughter, bold for the father, and timid for the wife... Which you can tell there are story differences, because I've played this game before several months ago... Now, there are lots of other characters that come into play in this VN/game, and the severity of their involvement depends on all the choices made... Now, as a warning, this VN/game does have a tiny amount of cock blocking, which I detest in more ways then one... There is also avoidable NTR (perhaps with the exception of the father daughter getting together -no intercourse- behind the wife's back, unsure if that is avoidable)... But it isn't horrible or over stressing at all, as this VN/game doesn't involve melodrama, and I hope it stays that way...

Overall, this VN/Game is pretty well put together, with a decent balance between story and the erotic/adult scenes... And I'm a fan of balance in these things... Thus far this VN/Game shows good promise, and I hope it keeps going at the pace it already is going... The story has enough depth and meaning, even though it involves so many characters... It is obviously still in the middle of production, so we have plenty more future content to look forward to... Will I revisit this one? Sure, once it gets a couple more content patches under it's belt...

I just finished version 0.30 and am completely hooked. The story is captivating and has a great buildup that delivers just enough to keep you hooked but not so much that it loses its weight. Good, fun humor, beautiful renders and interesting characters. I'm definitely keeping an eye out for this project going forward.

Played through latest version and I'm hooked. Most games I end up skipping and barely reading any dialog. I read every word of dialog in this game.

Ptolemy has created another masterpiece. Nice steady pace to the story along with a bit of humor.

As much as I didn't like Dana's escapades, I like this one a lot. Masterfully written, there aren't many games where I really take my time to read the dialog, but here all characters have a personality, are faulty humans, neither good, nor bad and it shows in their converstaion and behaviour. I am looking forward to the future updates, thank you for this masterpiece!

Version 0.25: I like graphics, I like history and having multiple choices at certain times. However I do not see any change in the course of the game, whether I choose red or blue. This regret is compensated by a deviance that appears gradually and subtly in the characters. As TheMann421 says: they are not "dumb and completly slut". It makes this game more realistic than many other games. Despite some bugs, which I'm sure, quickly corrected, it is a neat and promising job that offers PTOLEMY.

Another promising game from PTOLEMY.

Played through the most recent version (0.25) and I thoroughly enjoyed it. There is a lot of story to go with, but not much in terms of sexual content yet (but there is some).

This is a more realistic Inc game where the character's aren't dumb or complete sluts so you have to build up to it properly. There do seem to be multiple paths, however, the most recent update did not provide much in terms of any changes to the paths, not sure if that's because I had already set the path or if it was just an intermediate update (0.20 > 0.25 rather than 0.20 > 0.3)

I like how much story there is for this early as games should really be released in true "story chapters" like this is.

CGs are fantastic as usual from PTOLEMY. I'll definitely keep a close eye on this one.

the quality of this game is top notch, I like the decision making as well as the art style. the story is pacing at a reasonable pace but also keeps the player interested. looking forward to seeing how the story progresses in further updates.

Excellent VN because of story and the originality, Art is also very good.

There isn't a single MC. There are 3 ! The father, the daughter, and the new wife.
We can see scenes from each character perspectives, with their own thoughts, and the player make choices for these 3 characters and not only the father. You are directing the 3 characters at the same time and not choosing one.
Play it, and you will understand, it's a very original way

The story in itself is also mature with protagonists with personalities.

really excellent

really like this game and i hope it gets better.. story is good for me just a lack of options but you dont really notice is that much. art is good wish it had some animation and for god sake i hope the dev puts more focus on this game instead of being a side project

Version 0.45 "Fap per played time" Rating only 2/5

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"Fap per played time" only rates how good the game is at giving you a good FAP. doesnt matter how good the art, gameplay, renders, model, Sound, writing, Story or anything like that is, if the game is good at giving you good and multiple faps in a decent amount of gametime, it will get a good rating, eles not. i rate games like this because in the end, i mainly play adult games for good faps...nothing eles
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quick edit 0.45 stars went from 2 to 4:
game has more content now with many fapable scenes. but i have to say, it feels like kelly and the mc changed their personality too fast, but it's just something small. hot fapable game.

edit quick 0.30 update with Spoilers: so the game now has sex scenes, mainly with the wife. there are ntr Scenes where the wife fucks another dude, but they are optional and avoidable. there are some hot Scenes between kelly and the dad, but no "sex" Scenes yet. still not sure if there is a route where kelly will fuck another dude besides the mc, but for now not (Overall no sex Scenes with kelly). there is a woman the mc can get together that is also optional, with her (doc) also no real sex Scenes yet. game now has more important choices to make, and i Play with 5 different save files to try and get all the imgs.
but game will stay on only 2 stars for now, since i still haven't gotten any fap out of it...


*original Review for older Version 0.15:
*has loads of potential, will probably be a 4-5 "Fap per played time" Rating in future.


played through the game 2 times (1 good and 2 Moral style) over 2 days (not sure how much gametime, but there is quiet a lot of Content, just not much sex Content) and got all Scenes (checked cg after)=!! 0 !! good faps

reason i gave it 2 stars and not 1 (normally 0 GOOD faps=1 stars) is because Kelly's model was SO FUCKING SEXY (big brother lisa model but better, and better character). there were some Scenes with her where i almost forced a fap, but didnt since there arent really any good Scenes with her yet, just rdm pics where she Looks sexy.

i did enjoy playing through the game, it was a chill easy time (besides the lack of fap). kelly carries this game hard with her model, but i also like her character. i dont care about the mum, bitch character and not the best face imo. kellys friend is ok, and with a good Scene im sure she is able to give you a good fap.

MC (dad) is really good imo. like his character, model and writing quiet a bit.

gameplay whatever. "sex" Scenes are fap friendly and pretty good. for some reason i did really like the main Story about the mc and kelly (didnt like mum's Story since i just dont like her face/model/character). but again, the daughter and her look 100% carry this game.

so the game has potential once there are more sex Scenes with kelly.



on a side note, something that has nothing to to with the current Rating and Review:

i have a Feeling the mum will start fucking other guys in future (besides mc), so People who dont like that should probably stay away (i dont really care, since i didnt like the mum anyway). BUT i can also see kelly fucking other guys in future besides her dad, which would obv be a boner killer for me since i dont like to share my Girls, and i would obv give it 1 stars since i wouldnt be able to get a good fap out of this game. doenst matter if its optional or not for me, im weird like that i guess.


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Other high rated "Fap per played time" games:
-Milf's Villa
-The Family Secret
-My New Roommate
-Dreams of Desire
-GATE:The Opening
-House Party
-Pandora 1&2
-The Gift Reloaded

Good "Fap per played time" games, that aren't on the same level as the ones i mentioned because of lack of fap or too much grind:
-Road trip
-Kristies revenge
-Big brother
-Man of the house
-Summertime saga
-My legacy
-Adventures of Willy D
-Beach Party(terrible sex Scene gameplay, not fap friendly)
-The Artifact

An interesting erotic/porn story with some good looking characters. The scenario of the two first chapters were well written enough to cause curiosity. That's pretty rare with thes kind of games developped by amateurs. Congrats.