Hello.
The samples made me come. I've a mixed opinion after trying it though.
The worldbuilding is limited but enough for a beginning.
The characters are very few and different.
The story is classic like said in the summary, maybe too classic to stand out from similar games.
The photos and gifs are well chosen.
As a game, this could become good but there are too many flaws to be attractive.
The story really needs something special to make the player wants to try.
The left bar is well made but there is no indication of other characters and their stats, which makes it difficult to know if they are corrupted enough.
When we are at the gym, the gif that is played is a woman. And it was so confusing that at some point I thought maybe the protagonist isn't male but female. You should add a little text like "While working out, you set your eyes on a girl next to you".
The portraits in a location aren't always accurate. For example, Alina is making breakfast on weekdays too though she isn't supposed to be there. Speaking of locations, depending where we are, there some rooms or places that are here but shouldn't or that aren't but should be. When we are at school, the gym is still there (at first, I thought it was the school's gym but no) and it even leads to an error if we try to go there (cf files). When we are at home, the doors of the girls' rooms are the same so you don't know if you're at the right place. I was confused at first when I left after the good night kiss with Alina and thought I was at Celeste's door. When we are in our room, what is specific to that room should be separated from other rooms because like that it seems like "Sleep till 8am", "Laptop" and "Options" are rooms available from MC's room.
It's not always obvious what we have to do to proceed further with a character. Who would have thought that we had to come home right after school to trigger a dialog with Alina to progress her storyline (because after school you work to pay the rent after she asked for). The same with how we can obtain the items or knowledge necessary (online or in store for now but maybe at school or at someone's house later on).
Speaking of the rent message, if you don't click on it, you'll never know. And even if you do it, the option is still there (though it disappear if you click on it a second time).
The english isn't always clear. There are also many spelling errors.
There's a broken image when joining the girls in the living room (cf files).
All in all, the game isn't bad. It just needs to be more polished.
Good continuation.