Introducing Future VN LIs (Feedback)

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Hey everyone! I've been working on this project, Wish You Were Here (working title) for a while now and wanted to introduce the main love interests/basic premise of the VN. Let me know what you think.

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The Main Love Interests: These will be the women that players can pursue solo relationships with.
(from L>R: Christie, Virginia, Jamie, Lucy, Kimmy, Bonnie)
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Secondary Love Interests: No solo relationships unfortunately, but most of them will be part of the harem at the end if you want to go that way. Lots of sex though. They are also important to the story in various ways.
(from L>R: Tawny, Maria, Agatha, Astrid, Paula, Susan, Charlie)
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*Some of the women aren't as traditionally attractive, thought it would be better to have a mix of different types of characters.
*The backgrounds and color grading aren't that great. I'm pretty bad at graphic design, but working on improving it as I go. If you know about any resources that would be very helpful.
*The lighting is pretty inconsistent, was trying out several different ones, quality isn't great either.

I'll try to update with single shots and their individual profiles later. Have a lot of info on them, but haven't had the time to compile it into a coherent format. Am working on the Title and planning out the routes/story specifics at the moment.
 

0ier 3D

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these milfs be looking

godspeed!
Thanks! Spent a lot of time dialing in their milfyness :p. Do you see any major errors/things wrong with their faces or skin?

*There are a lot more renders of Charlie (blonde, blue dress, stockings) and Lucy (the lifeguard) on my deviantart page, if you're interested in them
 

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Hey everyone! I've been working on this project, Wish You Were Here (working title) for a while now and wanted to introduce the main love interests/basic premise of the VN. Let me know what you think.

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The Main Love Interests: These will be the women that players can pursue solo relationships with.
(from L>R: Christie, Virginia, Jamie, Lucy, Kimmy, Bonnie)
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Secondary Love Interests: No solo relationships unfortunately, but most of them will be part of the harem at the end if you want to go that way. Lots of sex though. They are also important to the story in various ways.
(from L>R: Tawny, Maria, Agatha, Astrid, Paula, Susan, Charlie)
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*Some of the women aren't as traditionally attractive, thought it would be better to have a mix of different types of characters.
*The backgrounds and color grading aren't that great. I'm pretty bad at graphic design, but working on improving it as I go. If you know about any resources that would be very helpful.
*The lighting is pretty inconsistent, was trying out several different ones, quality isn't great either.

I'll try to update with single shots and their individual profiles later. Have a lot of info on them, but haven't had the time to compile it into a coherent format. Am working on the Title and planning out the routes/story specifics at the moment.
DUMMY THICC!!!!
 
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This give me Dr. Seuss vibes, the snout is a bit ugly. (I have it in real life slightly similar). Maybe it's my problem.
She's probably a lesbian, isn't it?


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This seems good, I'm not into that type of hair but is good to have different characters.

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Aww, she seems so cute!

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Great milf, it reminds me the scene from "Stranger Things" lol.

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She's cute, but maybe she has a face too doll-like, she looks made of plastic, but perhaps it's just the expression.

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Really nice, hostess vibes.

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Seems a slavic-grandma, great body.

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I like consuela, I won't mind some scenes where she start to scream something in spanish, lol.

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Beautiful, well done. Never seen a black woman as a nun in a porn game.

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Mh, there's something strange about this one, idk why. She's still quite good.

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Uh, she gives me "business boss" vives, very well done.

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Probably my favorite one, stunning milf.

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She routinely cheats on her husband. Her cheekbones are probably made by a plastic surgeon.

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Okay, really a great roster, great bodies. I'll be happy to play a game with these character.
 
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This give me Dr. Seuss vibes, the snout is a bit ugly. (I have it in real life slightly similar). Maybe it's my problem.
She's probably a lesbian, isn't it?


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This seems good, I'm not into that type of hair but is good to have different characters.

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Aww, she seems so cute!

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Great milf, it reminds me the scene from "Stranger Things" lol.

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She's cute, but maybe she has a face too doll-like, she looks made of plastic, but perhaps it's just the expression.

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Really nice, hostess vibes.

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Seems a slavic-grandma, great body.

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I like consuela, I won't mind some scenes where she start to scream something in spanish, lol.

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Beautiful, well done. Never seen a black woman as a nun in a porn game.

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Mh, there's something strange about this one, idk why. She's still quite good.

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Uh, she gives me "business boss" vives, very well done.

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Probably my favorite one, stunning milf.

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She routinely cheats on her husband. Her cheekbones are probably made by a plastic surgeon.

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Okay, really a great roster, great bodies. I'll be happy to play a game with these character.
Big thanks for the breakdown on your thoughts!
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The premise sounds pretty interesting. Also, it's not that it's entirely original but it seems to at least avoid some of the more common tropes I've been seeing way too much. "Loser in high school", "Tragic event and you start as a shell of a man", "Fresh and innocent 18 year old starting college".
 
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The premise sounds pretty interesting. Also, it's not that it's entirely original but it seems to at least avoid some of the more common tropes I've been seeing way too much. "Loser in high school", "Tragic event and you start as a shell of a man", "Fresh and innocent 18 year old starting college".
I did want something familiar, guy returning home after a long absence, but with darker themes. Like the world has moved on after the tragedy and everything is familiar, but also slightly unsettling. Sort of taking some of the tropes and shifting them forward by a few years. Wasn't actually sure if it was too basic and I'm not great with og stories :LOL: .

Thanks for your input!
 
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I did want something familiar, guy returning home after a long absence, but with darker themes. Like the world has moved on after the tragedy and everything is familiar, but also slightly unsettling. Sort of taking some of the tropes and shifting them forward by a few years. Wasn't actually sure if it was too basic and I'm not great with og stories :LOL: .

Thanks for your input!
Nah, I think it's still a fresh take. With stories like this, the premise is usually "time was frozen was for the MC" after a long absence and the world moved on without him.

I think it's interesting because the premise indicates that he was able to move on and live a new life as well. He won't be just "dyed" with his past in a sense and will bring whatever he's been doing since then to the table making an overall richer story.

I might be reading too much into it just based off a premise but that's my take.
 
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Hey, everyone! Sorry for the delay in updating the profiles. My internet got knocked out about a week ago. Got it back up in a few days and was playing catch up until now. The profile info is still pretty rough, I'll revisit it later to polish up the writing. Will probably update with their heights and measurements also while I work on scripting out the first chapter/working on my renpy skills.

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