Is it ethical to have a pregnant woman swallow your cum?

[lancelotdulak]

Threads like this make me 100% certain 99% of you have never had sex

 

[Chalker]

Threads like this make me 100% certain 99% of you have never had sex

the fact that you think having sex is an achievement says more about you than it does about anyone else in this thread.

 

[tanstaafl]

I think it's more ethical to have your pregnant wife swallow my cum. Get some biodiversity going in that diet.

 

[hakarlman]

What you presented is the most one-dimensional and superficial back and forth to come to this forum.

Yes, that short scenario was supposed to be one-dimensional. I wanted to keep it short, to get to the cum eating point. Making it multi-dimensional would turn it into a wall of text, and given the context, that would be stupid, lol.

You wrote the 'protagonist' to act like a belligerent drunkard who talks like a frat bro. The argument I made up and won while in the shower had more merit to them than what you wrote.

I interpret this as you not picking that dialogue option. So your argument is that the writing is bad, but my counter argument is that option doesn't suit your roleplay, so you wouldn't pick it.

But if you genuinely think the writing is bad, can you just point out the writing problems?

No, your polls are so crude and nonsensical that they're meme tier,

How are they nonsensical?

but your story writing is so much worse.

I want to believe you, but you're unable to make a proper case to support your argument. I really, really want to believe you. I don't think you understand just how much I want to believe you, lol.

 

[Count Morado]

the fact that you think having sex is an achievement says more about you than it does about anyone else in this thread.

Well, no. Anyone can pay for a prostitute. However, having a long-term meaningful physically intimate relationship with another adult is. Though they said it in different terms, I believe that is what they were implying... and to a point, I agree with them (not 99% - but I would say at least a sizeable portion).

 

[Chalker]

Yes, that short scenario was supposed to be one-dimensional. I wanted to keep it short, to get to the cum eating point. Making it multi-dimensional would turn it into a wall of text, and given the context, that would be stupid, lol.



I interpret this as you not picking that dialogue option. So your argument is that the writing is bad, but my counter argument is that option doesn't suit your roleplay, so you wouldn't pick it.

But if you genuinely think the writing is bad, can you just point out the writing problems?



How are they nonsensical?



I want to believe you, but you're unable to make a proper case to support your argument. I really, really want to believe you. I don't think you understand just how much I want to believe you, lol.

If you cannot see how that dialogue is not the most unnatural and cringe-inducing thing ever than all hope for you is lost.

 

[Chalker]

Well, no. Anyone can pay for a prostitute. However, having a long-term meaningful physically intimate relationship with another adult is. Though they said it in different terms, I believe that is what they were implying... and to a point, I agree with them (not 99% - but I would say at least a sizeable portion).

shut up stinky sunflower

 

[tanstaafl]

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If you cannot see how that dialogue is not the most unnatural and cringe-inducing thing ever than all hope for you is lost.

If you cannot see that the dialogue was written in about 12 seconds to convey a point and instead focus on the literary merit of said dialogue then your pedantry knows no bounds.

 

[Count Morado]

If you cannot see that the dialogue was written in about 12 seconds to convey a point and instead focus on the literary merit of said dialogue then your pedantry knows no bounds.

No, I think you are unaware of Hakarlman's reputation. Whether it was 12 seconds or 12 years - they honestly believe they wrote engaging dialogue that creates a scene of tension (both short and long term) with rising conflict, climax, and resolution.

 

[Chalker]

If you cannot see that the dialogue was written in about 12 seconds to convey a point and instead focus on the literary merit of said dialogue then your pedantry knows no bounds.

If someone can't write a basic exchange without making it read like it was written by a 14-year-old who just discovered Wattpad, then that's a problem.
And if you think that was an average or even above-average dialogue, then you need a shovel to unbury the bar you've set so low.

 

[tanstaafl]

If someone can't write a basic exchange without making it read like it was written by a 14-year-old who just discovered Wattpad, then that's a problem.
And if you think that was an average or even above-average dialogue, then you need a shovel to unbury the bar you've set so low.

I didn't even read the dialogue, but your focus on it's merit annoyed me anyway. Where does that leave us?

Edit: I read the bit after it and saw that it was basically just a sarcasm shot and didn't bother. Just so you know. I figured it wouldn't be worth it.

 

[hakarlman]

shut up stinky sunflower

When you're not trolling, you can actually provide decent information, sometimes.

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If you cannot see how that dialogue is not the most unnatural and cringe-inducing thing ever than all hope for you is lost.

Just curious do you like Harem, but hate NTR and sharing?

 

[Chalker]

Just curious do you like Harem,

Yes*
*hefty amount of nuance

but hate NTR and sharing?

Yes

 

[hakarlman]

No, I think you are unaware of Hakarlman's reputation. Whether it was 12 seconds or 12 years - they honestly believe they wrote engaging dialogue that creates a scene of tension (both short and long term) with rising conflict, climax, and resolution.

You claim I believe I wrote engaging dialogue, but in actuality, the only thing I believe is that I wrote something, and
and like you said, it didn't have a rising conflict or resolution, I only shared a single possible climax. The goal was to create tension, like you said.

Are you saying that the only problem with my writing was the lack of a rising conflict and resolution? If so, that's good news, because I didn't have time to add those parts. But did you notice any other problems? If you could be ruthlessly honest with your feedback, that'd be helpful, because I want to gauge my writing skills when on a time limit; in this case I wrote that in under 90 seconds.

 

[Count Morado]

You claim I believe I wrote engaging dialogue, but in actuality, the only thing I believe is that I wrote something, and
and like you said, it didn't have a rising conflict or resolution, I only shared a single possible climax. The goal was to create tension, like you said.

Are you saying that the only problem with my writing was the lack of a rising conflict and resolution? If so, that's good news, because I didn't have time to add those parts. But did you notice any other problems? If you could be ruthlessly honest with your feedback, that'd be helpful, because I want to gauge my writing skills when on a time limit; in this case I wrote that in under 90 seconds.

I said and implied no such thing. Should you read into anything beyond what I specifically wrote is your problem, not mine. I could go into depth and detail at the atrocity of not only that dialogue but other attempts at storytelling, scene descriptions and the like from your foray into sharing your polling fetish with the F95 public; however, I am also aware that nothing I type here will persuade you down a different path or seek greater understanding and ways to improve your meager skillset in character and story development.

 

[ZTex]

Probably, but why let ethics get in the way of a good nut ?

 

[hakarlman]

I said and implied no such thing. Should you read into anything beyond what I specifically wrote is your problem, not mine. I could go into depth and detail at the atrocity of not only that dialogue but other attempts at storytelling, scene descriptions and the like from your foray into sharing your polling fetish with the F95 public;

I believe you when you say there's a writing problem, but if you don't explain the problem, then it won't help me or anyone else who visits this thread.

however, I am also aware that nothing I type here will persuade you down a different path or seek greater understanding and ways to improve your meager skillset in character and story development.

You got me all wrong. I would gladly listen to you. I don't care about being right, I only want to try and find what's right.

 

[Trickstar]

Think about it, if she does and digests your spunk she is technically feeding the baby nut, and that's pretty fucked up.
What are your opinions?

It's okay if you are having a daughter as then it is just preparing them for the world but if you are having a song then that just means your gay by default for having sex with your pregnant wife.

 

[Chalker]

It's okay if you are having a daughter as then it is just preparing them for the world but if you are having a song then that just means your gay by default for having sex with your pregnant wife.

i-is it gay when we have sex?

 

[Trickstar]

i-is it gay when we have sex?

Yes