My one problem at the beginning was that I found and still find that news report a bit unbelievable.
It seemed to be an attempt at serious investigative journalism, and neither the writing nor the presentation held up to any standards. It just felt clumsy and awkward.
Thankfully, this seems to be the only fluke of that kind, the story itself, while being sensationalistic and filled with many convenient deus ex machinae (I counted at least 4 or 5 in the existing chapters), is quite well written.
Characters are somewhat believable, which is not exactly common in this type of game, and even stuff others criticized I find quite believable. Like Isabella thinking Zeus is dead, when he is just drugged.
Given the circumstances, I thought her not catching that he was still breathing was something that could very well happen. I mean, she was clearly panicking and completely emotional. Drugs can also slow down your metabolism so much, that the breathing can be quite flat and not much movement of the chest area will be seen. She might have just felt for a pulse, didn't find it, and was then convinced the dog was a goner.
One thing I didn't particularly like, is the MC is quite the MarySue. He can fight, he is super smart, and women are just automatically drawn to him.
The problem is, he doesn't act particularly smart, and you wonder a bit why someone who seems like a bit of a doofus is so attractive to women.
Unless they know how loaded he is.
I actually find it kind of limiting story-telling wise, if the MC is too strong, not to mention that flawed characters are more interesting.
And no, I don't consider having a breakdown after your fiancé dies as something weak. That is a devastating thing to happen.
Visually the game is fine, the renders are okay and set up nicely enough.
In addition, the girls have quite diverse looks and body types, even if there is a strong emphasis on blonde ladies.
While I appreciate that diversity, I admit, someone like Alex is a bit too thin and for my tastes also could have slightly bigger tits, but I think it's fine to have something for everyone.
It's definitely a good thing that, so far, the characters aren't just the usual tired 10 daz models we've seen in dozens of games by now, without alterations, except for age and breast size (and while I love them boobies, I can also appreciate that so far the game keeps away from ridiculously large ones)
I mean, I know most of the models, but I'm not tired of them, like I am of some others.
As for writing and story, there is definitely room for improvement, maybe the MC could be a bit less capable at everything and not so conveniently have someone at hand who can help with whatever kind of problem he has at that moment.
That's certainly not like it works in real life.