VN Ren'Py It's a Bit Sudden, but Now I Have a Brown Elven Girlfriend [v0.02] [S3 Digital]

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Shipfan66

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Mar 24, 2019
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Looks interesting, gonna give it a try. I think I liked the original "dark elf" title better, but after reading some of these comments I can see why it got changed, so there's that. Looks like something I'd enjoy, so I'll jsut have a go at it. ;) Best of luck to ya Dev, I'll keep an eye on ya!
 

HUNUTAN

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Jan 18, 2019
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Well, despite the plot taken out of thin air, literally. The scenes look quite good, and the elf's appearance plays a big role here, of course. So everything is fine with that. The only thing is that although the socks look good on her, doing all the scenes with them is still too much, after all, it's part of the clothes and not part of the body... And it would be strange if they were never removed, especially during sex when all the clothes are removed (well, except for them in this case, for some reason...). Otherwise, as for the gameplay, this game only allowed me to choose the protagonist's name... Well, I know that such games are called visual comics rather than games, which in itself is not a very good decision by the developer. There is no involvement in the game...
 

Leviashen

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May 26, 2025
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Good renders, sex scenes are pretty good too. Story is a bit absent so far but fair enough for such an early version.

But you should consider cutting down the internal dialogue, there's so much of it that I just started button mashing through anything in brackets. I think the longest section of gameplay without internal dialogue was during the John Wick parody reference.

Also sex scenes are not the place for exposition and lore dumps, it really ruined the scenes and I started losing interest in the game as a whole when you did that.
 

Leviashen

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May 26, 2025
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Well, despite the plot taken out of thin air, literally. The scenes look quite good, and the elf's appearance plays a big role here, of course. So everything is fine with that. The only thing is that although the socks look good on her, doing all the scenes with them is still too much, after all, it's part of the clothes and not part of the body... And it would be strange if they were never removed, especially during sex when all the clothes are removed (well, except for them in this case, for some reason...). Otherwise, as for the gameplay, this game only allowed me to choose the protagonist's name... Well, I know that such games are called visual comics rather than games, which in itself is not a very good decision by the developer. There is no involvement in the game...
Cold feet are a thing but otherwise I agree with this argument in other games when the girls get naked but they for some reason are still wearing shoes.
 
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