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I think I'm getting a better idea of what you're suggesting as an alternative for the pick one/see all dilemma and it could probably work. I'd want to spread them out some though if I did that, I think some of the story beats would feel off otherwise.Again you got to separate the MC from the player.
The player plays the game.
The players sees Izzy & Zoe before MC even knows who they are.
The player, the audience, needs to see the sims so the girls appear well developed & not just hollow porn characters.
Not the MC.
Like the idea I suggested, we follow the girls in their sims & maybe the MC remarks which one he was watching as well...
For example: We follow the girls & see both sims during the 1st opportunity, then we see mc log in & he sees only a part of of the sim he chose.
Then during the 2nd opportunity, after mc watches 1 full sim(upgrade from last time, more time in the sim), we follow Qai as she goes into the other 2 sims to work on the bridge.
Then, for the last sim we see the sims in sequence (mom->sara->nat) & mc only watches the nat sim (makes most sense in the sequence of events of that night).
Removes a player choice, but it was negatively affecting the game anyway.
That way mc has limited info like you intened to convey, which we know because we have more info than him.
(Basically Nat Mol Sara get the Ness Stella Izzy treatment & get the sims to develop their character independent of the MC's knowledge or presence, just like the izzy+zoe scene or the izzy+stella scene, etc.)
I have never said the idea you had was wrong. Only the execution:
>Making players choose between girls gives them a certain impression of the game which may not be correct.
>By withholding 5-6 out of 8 sims from the audience, you are removing significant character development from the main girls & their journey from who they were at the start of the arc to the end of it, making the characters somewhat flimsy.
Neither conflict with what you wanted to express in regards to the MC as both are issues about presentation of the game, not it's story.
Just let the players see all the sims but mc can see only 2-3.
(I'm not pushing for you to change the game now btw. Just discussing the issue.)
The game was pretty fast paced anyway. The mc was pretty reserved actually. Many (including myself) were probably wishing he'd accept the depravity & his role as bull much more easily. But seeing him squirm was fun too
There's not much issue in this regard I feel.
No cest. The moment they are related to the mc, it becomes incest kink, not sisters kink or twins kink.
By sisters kink I meant 2 sisters involved with/serving the MC, not MC's relatives.
It's be hot if Nat brings her sister(s?) into her kink, since they're are also the same breeding stock genetically as her.
(No pressure but I think Nat's sister would win any poll verses Sara/Mol's long lost friend. Just saying)
Hmm, here's how my list would go:
Nat as top Queen obviously. She seems to have the most grasp of this role & how she handled Sara while returning the camera was hot af.
Sara next. She'd be the 'pest' as you put it, someone Nat has to keep in line & remind that they serve the MC & not her.
Ness for me would be the hidden submissive, the brat. Gives a tough impression but melts in the hands of the MC just like during the Ness sex scene. Likes to get competitive & secretly enjoys losing & being put into place by the person she loves(MC). Her rough exterior hides a fragile girl with a romantic heart, was my impression from the emerald scene in the office bathroom (great scene btw). So going a little further, her manliness & competitiveness hides a desire to be seen in a traditional female role & be put into that place.
So while she's the strongest outside the bedroom, she capitulates to Nat easily inside the bedroom cause she secretly aspires to what Nat preaches.
As for Ness-Sara, I'd think they'd have an healthy rivalry going on, both expressing their dominant/competitive side with each other since they have to submit to Nat & the MC.
So basically it'd be a back & forth with neither giving in, both enjoying the struggle, until Nat/MC enters the scene when they both become obedient to them.
Anyway, that'd be my dream scenario in regards to the Nat-Sara-Ness dilemma. Nat's already won the role with the initiative she's taken, with Sara, with Kate, with the underwear etc. (and her sister ofc
And Ness I really liked her softer side in the office scene, so it'd be great if she continued that tsundere duality, where the more strong, bossy & competitive she is in public, the more of a submissive romantic she is to her bull in private. Someone who constantly fights everyone, but likes to lose only to her chosen one & be put into her place & taken.
And Sara I think I see as a switch, into everything & wishing that the MC would be the Sara to her Kelli, wishing to take/dominate everyone & but be taken/dominated by the MC. Someone who likes being in charge but doesn't resist being put into place by the MC, or Nat using his name, too much.
As these 2 both feel like duality/switch based characters, it'd be an interesting dynamic to see them kind of be in a never-ending struggle with each other, both enjoying each other as an outlet to their dominant & competitive side while the MC satisfies their submissive side.
Wow rambled a bit lol. Was hot to imagine tho
As far as limiting the player, yeah, but that's a bit of a given. Every time I present the player a choice, and more so every time I don't, I am, in a way telling them what the MC's boundaries are. Obviously, I don't want to spend the whole game dangling sex in front of the player but having the MC decline, but I can't tell a story of the MC (potentially) getting corrupted if he starts off full-pervert.
By twincest I meant that obviously, the twin characters would end up getting sexy together. That would be a cruel tease if I included twins (identical or not) but didn't let the player at least get a threesome with them.
Nat is (I think) the most popular girl with the general audience. Kelli/Claudette seem to be the most popular with my supporters (at least they were, I've gained a handful more since the last poll I ran). But yeah, story wise it probably works best with Nat. I could always do the surprise Aunt visit, but it would feel less earned. I'd have to pull her into Nat's (or whoever this new character is related to) kink but put a little bit of a twist on it. Like maybe her sister is more interested in the BDSM portion of things than the breeding.
Nat as queen bee is a pretty clear choice, especially if you're into the breeding harem thing, but she's also the most willing of the three to accept a lower position. She doesn't really care who's above who as long as MC is on top and everyone else ends up with a baby in their belly. Sara will definitely play into the "He dominates me, I dominate everyone else". I don't think Ness will ever end up full on submissive, outside of the epilogue stuff, so much as she's just not really a dom. She enjoys topping other women, and she has that competitive streak, but she isn't a switch the same way that Izzi or Zoe are. That being said there will probably be some scenes where she gets a little dominant (particularly in one of the sim scenes I've got planned) and there will probably be some scenes where she ends up a little more submissive (coincidentally, also in that same sim scene). The details might end up shifting for a lot of this though. Nat's characterization, the whole assertively-submissive angle, didn't come to be until I was really fleshing out the writing for the last update.
