It might be good to reference that in your overview. Not the point of giving away the plot, but so that people know his looks are intentional and not just a wonky model.
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That would be a huge spoiler at this point, don't you think?
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Sorry, not avoidable at all if you want to play the game properly. The only thing avoidable while somewhat keeping the game's integrity is incest.
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TurhaanKoitatte
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Okay. I'll avoid this game then.
The Milfs look good, nice age appropriate models, pretty without being barbie dolls.
No much I can say based on whats there, would have been nice to have more clues about how this game will play out.
Is this a VN or Sandbox?
Is the MC, Assertive or Passive, Perverted or Romantic, Does the player have any control over the MC's nature?
No much I can say based on whats there, would have been nice to have more clues about how this game will play out.
Is this a VN or Sandbox?
Is the MC, Assertive or Passive, Perverted or Romantic, Does the player have any control over the MC's nature?
Well, it's pretty short even for a demo that's about my only possible critiques at this point have to wait and see as development continues. Not really a fan of prostitution myself so depending on how big a part of the plot it is will determine my overall interest or disinterest in the future. I'm not a hard liner like some here but if it becomes the central theme or a long-term part of the plot that will kill it for me. Either way good luck to you dev.
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The Milf model looks good, but the MC's appearance seems like it could be the typical creep shota.
So what's the game about? The overview certainly doesn't say anything, and the dev notes don't explain much either.
Good luck.
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The female characters will mostly be what I call "simple beauty", something like the women we can see in the street at any given day. Nothing "cartoonish" or exagerated, but still have something that catches your eye, except for a few side characters, for plot purposes.
How the game will play out... it will be a series of events one can expect while starting adult life. First job, first real relationships, first money earned, first stuff bought with your first money earned... I really don't want to do a big Spoiler on this... do you really think it's interesting to read the movie script before watching the movie???
I want to make it sandbox, but I'm almost sure that my coding skills won't be enough for that, at least for a first game...who knows...maybe I have some kind of breakthrough in my learning...
About the MC, he's assertive and surely perverted. If you make the wrong choices, the game will be really short for you., which means you can control he's nature, but you'll miss out on most of the content. Not a romantic game, definitely.
Hope I've answered all your questions...
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The Milf model looks good, but the MC's appearance seems like it could be the typical creep shota.
So what's the game about? The overview certainly doesn't say anything, and the dev notes don't explain much either.
Good luck.
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Some details may be slightly exagerated for "dramatic purposes"...
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Can a tag that hasn't been implemented yet also be written on the homepage?
You're trying to sell people on the game here. You don't want to give away everything that happens, but you do want to give potential players a reason to check it out; as it is, 'Jack faces life with all that comes with it' conveys almost no information about the game's story. What is there to catch someone's interest here? Particularly when, at any given moment, there are a dozen or so other games being launched or updated with similar "young man lives life" premises?
For a comparison, imagine reading a synopsis of Star Wars that says "a young man faces life in the galaxy". Would that make you say "I've gotta watch this"? Now you don't want that synopsis to say "Luke learns the evil Darth Vader is really his father and sets out to redeem him and overthrow the Emperor". That really would be spoiling everything. You want something that hints at the interesting bits without spelling out all the details. Like, "a young farm boy learns to wield a power he never imagined as he joins the fight against an evil Empire". That's interesting enough to want to learn more about, without getting specific about important story twists.