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Maybe the dev of this game came up with the unique idea of theirs without playing any other female protagonist VNs out there. Imagine them pondering over the setting and coming up with this in its all uniqueness!The story is about a girl who has moved to a new city?? Haven't heard that before.
Wow, it must have taken you thousands of tortuous hours to come up with a plot that original and totally unique.
Hobo "Where are you fat, are you crazy?"
Jen "Stomach and butt fat"
Hobo "Show me where she's fat."
Jen "I'll just take my skirt off now"
(Aaaand thats basicly where the sex starts....)
That's why the developer called themselves 'AbsentStudios', I wonder why.So we got:
- Clickbait in the Title Banner (Winged Girl that hasn't got any wings in the actual game)
- A generic "new in town" story
- The english is...clearly not the best, here is an example:
Hobo "Where are you fat, are you crazy?"
Jen "Stomach and butt fat"
Hobo "Show me where she's fat."
Jen "I'll just take my skirt off now"
(Aaaand thats basicly where the sex starts....)
- The current "scenes" consist auf:
1. Getting ger butt groped by a young bully
2. Getting her butt oogled by a fat bastard
3. Getting doggystyled by an old homeless guy (with one animation loop and a bit of generic moaning)
TldR: Very disappointing so far.
PS: The guy got a Patreon with 4 different Tiers already set up. The highest one 22$/month...after generating a "game" out of 83 images.
There is also some leftover russian one the page, probably just copy pasted from somewhere.
Edit: Yep. Seems like the "fat bastard" is always the boss. And the ruglish is horrid... (basing that on the other comments)Fat bastard character + blackmail + single girl in the city corruption game. Pretty sure I've seen this similar VN multiple times now, but good luck.
The project has potential. The heroine is pretty and her outfits are well chosen.1) Criticism and suggestions is certainly good, but then again this is only the beginning of the road and my first experience in this setting there is still a lot to learn
2) Since this is my first experience with the project I needed to see if I could do a full-blown sex scene, that's why sex happened so quickly
3) In the future I expect to create a gradual development of relationships with the characters