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Yes, it would make sense, from connor's perspective but, unless it's rape, Jessica's mother needs to be on board with fucking connor. I'm saying she doesn't seem to be the type of degenerate that would risk alienating her daughter for some random romp. Especially since she looks like she could have any man she wants.
So, what i'm saying is, give it depth.
- Jun 11, 2020
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But maybe if Jess’s mom finds out from Connor that she’s cheating on him with a guy older than her mother “Mr Parker”. She feels bad for Connor and thinks we’ll Im not gonna waste this chance, and gives into her lust or atleast fantasizes about him banging her. Maybe she “”Sarah” wants to see his dock to see why Jessica would cheat on him or his oral skills aren’t good enough so she has to teach him how to pleasure a woman. Who knows?
- Oct 25, 2020
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I'm more in the idea that Sarah has to become emotionally compromise to fall into Conner's arms. Like feeling very lonely since her husband died added to troubles in her business and been push to do things against her proper behavior.
I wrote a scene describing this and in résumé it said:
Her meeting to settle her business in New Port fell short because her future-partener ask her some "services" and she refuses. But the fact is that she's overwhelmed because the guy told her that she will never be able to do any business in the city because he is a powerful man and, most of all, for a second she thought about doing it. She is so down about even have though about it that her self-esteem is down to the toilet.
She talk about it to Conner and he supports her and comforts her. Leading them to touch each other and little by little feel attracted to each other and finishing in a burning sex scene of course.
This already sounds like a different game, one where some guy name Connor is cucking his wife. Just let sleeping dogs lie, brother. Don't give the dev anymore milking ammo. You don't want the main game delayed by Jessica O'Neil: Sidestories...I'm more in the idea that Sarah has to become emotionally compromise to fall into Conner's arms. Like feeling very lonely since her husband died added to troubles in her business and been push to do things against her proper behavior.
I wrote a scene describing this and in résumé it said:
Her meeting to settle her business in New Port fell short because her future-partener ask her some "services" and she refuses. But the fact is that she's overwhelmed because the guy told her that she will never be able to do any business in the city because he is a powerful man and, most of all, for a second she thought about doing it. She is so down about even have though about it that her self-esteem is down to the toilet.
She talk about it to Conner and he supports her and comforts her. Leading them to touch each other and little by little feel attracted to each other and finishing in a burning sex scene of course.
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- Oct 25, 2020
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Well to be honest stoper told me that he might create this scene as a bonus after the game is finished.
So winterwolf200, don't worry about me, misguiding Stoper toward the wrong path !
He knows what he is doing and just appreciate my short stories for what it is: a fan-fiction.
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- Oct 4, 2020
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I just played the 11 days of version 0.41.
So sorry in advance if I repeat what you have said many times! But I need to share my impressions and my enthusiasm.
It's an awesome job on Stoper's part to deliver a VN of this quality. I was amazed by the enormous care taken in everything. The sets, the ever-increasing number of details in public places (passers-by, people at tables ...) And always this little detail of a stranger who admires Jessica. I come to look for it at every outdoor stage !
A special note for the play of light and shadow. A strong point of Stoper I find. Always a perfectly chosen angle of view and the light which falls between the breasts or which draws a notch. Or the detail of the blinds that highlight a thigh or an arm.
Characters. In sufficient number and perfectly drawn in their character, their physique, their "usefulness" for the story.
What about the progression of the story? A foray into the world of journalism, investigation, politics, power games. Sex is perfectly integrated to punctuate stages in Jessica's life. We go to the essential (in travel, information) but we do not lack anything. An image, a few sentences of narration or dialogues and we know everything, we understand everything. I had the impression that Stoper added a few images as the days went by. At first 6 or 7 pages of dialogue for one image, now 3 or 4. An additional image to indicate a change of position or an expression, change of point of view.
I am going back to something that was said here I think. Why change Rosa? Her physique or her character?
Sorry for my enthusiasm, I had to share what I felt!
So sorry in advance if I repeat what you have said many times! But I need to share my impressions and my enthusiasm.
It's an awesome job on Stoper's part to deliver a VN of this quality. I was amazed by the enormous care taken in everything. The sets, the ever-increasing number of details in public places (passers-by, people at tables ...) And always this little detail of a stranger who admires Jessica. I come to look for it at every outdoor stage !
A special note for the play of light and shadow. A strong point of Stoper I find. Always a perfectly chosen angle of view and the light which falls between the breasts or which draws a notch. Or the detail of the blinds that highlight a thigh or an arm.
Characters. In sufficient number and perfectly drawn in their character, their physique, their "usefulness" for the story.
What about the progression of the story? A foray into the world of journalism, investigation, politics, power games. Sex is perfectly integrated to punctuate stages in Jessica's life. We go to the essential (in travel, information) but we do not lack anything. An image, a few sentences of narration or dialogues and we know everything, we understand everything. I had the impression that Stoper added a few images as the days went by. At first 6 or 7 pages of dialogue for one image, now 3 or 4. An additional image to indicate a change of position or an expression, change of point of view.
I am going back to something that was said here I think. Why change Rosa? Her physique or her character?
Sorry for my enthusiasm, I had to share what I felt
!mate add more ntr content...game is too mich good...yumm
- Feb 7, 2018
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This game is great. I think Stoper should put in a game young boy, as a cousin of Jessica and her mother Sara, and then make some good sex scenes with them, that would be exciting. What do you think about it?
- Jul 17, 2019
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no
there are already too many open routes where nothing has happened yet; inserting other characters would only lengthen the story. imho
- Sep 21, 2017
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damn. there are NO good western shota games here...except the japanese ones, i'm already full from feeding off of it...a western version WOULD BE NICE....hope stoper provides one in a dlc of hard news...
i think mate Jessica need to be fucked. that's all i want
- Apr 4, 2020
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Could someone share the pinups for Sara??
- Nov 17, 2020
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Just finished the current build. Why have I not heard more about this game? Had to dig into one of the recommendation threads to find one poster suggesting this for a female protag corruption game. This is one of the best VN I have played to date, The story, the characters, the attention to detail are all great with some very light humor thrown in the mix. I love playing a female protag with agency, instead of being forced to commit sexual acts or being forced literally. There are far too few like this. One thing I noticed, it seems Laura has some feels for our heroine, see her awake while laying her head in the heroine's lap plus hints from their dialogue together. Wonder if we might be getting an incest tag for upcoming releases? Not usually that big on that kink but I do kinda have a boner for Laura and seeing as I am inhabiting Jessica, kinda wanna taste her. Also looking forward to the "date" with Blake.
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Personally, I will rather see Laura and Conner getting closer. In my route, I took Jessica away from Conner, so he would be more "available" for Laura or Sarah.
For me, Laura and Sarah are there to develop the character of Jessica, to explain who she is through her family circle.
Scarlet 56 will certainly have a similar idea ...