Comics Journey [RyanRude]

[RyanRude]

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Alexandra is a loving 42 year old wife and mother married to her 43 year old husband who would rather work than be intimate and mother to her shy 18 year old son finishing his final year of high school. She has never even thought about cheating until her son has an unusual issue he needs advice on.​

Updated: 2024-10-17
Artist: RyanRude
Censorship: No
Language: English
Resolution: 1920x1080
Pages: 110 pictures
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[RyanRude]

This is my first comic, I'd love any feedback, I know my writing's not the greatest, I used Chat GPT for the first few pictures to reword it. The rest were conversations that I tried to make sound natural.

I tried to go for realism here, except for the monster cock, of course, I forgot halfway through the scaling for it and decided to just keep it as is, since people seem to enjoy that anyway.

 

[VanADoorBoy]

OHHHHH，That is good

 

[Momo Nishimiya]

This is my first comic, I'd love any feedback, I know my writing's not the greatest, I used Chat GPT for the first few pictures to reword it. The rest were conversations that I tried to make sound natural.

I tried to go for realism here, except for the monster cock, of course, I forgot halfway through the scaling for it and decided to just keep it as is, since people seem to enjoy that anyway.

Hi Ryan, thank you so much for sharing your comic! I got free time this weekend and I'll be reading it! Thank you again

 

[gwalc]

This is my first comic, I'd love any feedback, I know my writing's not the greatest, I used Chat GPT for the first few pictures to reword it. The rest were conversations that I tried to make sound natural.

I tried to go for realism here, except for the monster cock, of course, I forgot halfway through the scaling for it and decided to just keep it as is, since people seem to enjoy that anyway.

Hey, Ryan.
Thanks for sharing your work. Here's my feedback. I tried to be as honest as possible. I liked it, but...

I've downloaded it from Mediafire and the order is messed up and makes it hard to follow the story you want to tell. I don't know if you uploaded a different zip to other servers.
Other than that, the comic looks nice. I like the mother's model.
I would use bubbles instead of text at the bottom, though; it will give your work a more comic look, and the reader can focus more on the pictures instead of looking up and down.
You should check for clipping before publishing: Josh's jeans (10) and t-shirt (53), father's tie in almost every picture he's wearing it (51, 68, 70...), etc. It gives an unpolished and lazy look to the comic.
In some pictures, the cock looks weirdly attached to Josh's body (37, is the worst example).
Most people use FullHD screens nowadays, so I think 1920x1080 is the minimum resolution to publish a comic. It takes more rendering time, but your readers will be happier.

Keep up the good work. I think that with some polishing, especially publishing it in the correct order and correcting the clipping, you are on the right path.

 

[RyanRude]

Hey, Ryan.
Thanks for sharing your work. Here's my feedback. I tried to be as honest as possible. I liked it, but...

I've downloaded it from Mediafire and the order is messed up and makes it hard to follow the story you want to tell. I don't know if you uploaded a different zip to other servers.

Thank you for all of your feedback, especially this one, I renamed the files before uploading and you're right, it's messed up. I've updated the download links.

 

[TheFinalMaster]

good luck on creating your series of comics

 

[omegatours]

Congrats for your first.

I won't repeat what gwalc said but he is correct.
The story sounds nice and hope there is more.
The faces sometimes look a little bit weird .

 

[gwalc]

Thank you for all of your feedback, especially this one, I renamed the files before uploading and you're right, it's messed up. I've updated the download links.

Thanks for correcting the files. It's a lot more enjoyable now.
Are you planning on expanding Alexandra and Josh's story or is it a one-shot comic?

 

[RyanRude]

There will be more chapters, currently I'm re-rendering everything in full HD and I'm going to see about making speech bubbles for a real comic look.

 

[vs2011xyz]

When is next part

 

[RyanRude]

I've got a few ideas, but currently I'm re-rendering everything, it's taking some time, because I don't have a GPU with enough VRAM for this, so it's all CPU based.

 

[RSAbaev]

You did great job. I'll be pleased to see the next chapters!

 

[RyanRude]

I've finished rendering and added speech and thought bubbles.
I've changed a few pictures here and there, I'll start work on the next chapters soon and with the knowledge that it'll be a proper comic.
Since this wasn't originally a comic, I know the speech bubbles, etc, might not be as easy to follow as you'd expect, but continuing on from here they will be.

Original download links have been updated.

 

[sympaticus]

I like the comic with the speech bubbles. Much better than the first version.
I'm already looking forward to part 2

 

[John Mtfcka Wick]

Great job, Dev! Keep up the good work!