Just got to the end of the last update... HOLY SHIT that was abrupt...
Meinos Kaen... you built up the tension so much at the end there... perfect cliffhanger... Good Job...
Love the writing... definite university-level reading... had to actually look up a few words to get the full meaning... but very thought-provoking in some area...
Speaking as a veteran... both as a combat medic and an EMT... I get the semblance of Penny newfound plight... I've encountered it myself and in others out in the field... its something that can tear apart the toughest of soldiers and first responder... glad to see the emotion you've put into the characters... cant wait to see them overcome this and how it will make them stronger...
Again Good JOB!!!