HTML Just One More Chance [v0.73] [Lotrum]

[Zirenaz]

what are the other 25%?

Actual porn without weird made-up family constellations where everyone is step to everyone else.
Because how do get a step-mom, a step-dad, and a step-sis, with all of them also being step to each other?

 

[Modify8066]

This is one of my favourite games in recent memory. It deserves much more love than it currently gets.

 

[VixxTheLover]

Will the web version of the newest update be released anytime soon?

 

[Lotrum]

Will the web version of the newest update be released anytime soon?

It's up since the day of release:

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If you mean the one on another site like mopoga/gamcore etc... it's not up to me to update those, unfortunately.
You can try commenting and asking for an update.

 

[PaullT]

I'll third the error that having sex with Julie does not trigger the achievement.

 

[Lotrum]

I'll third the error that having sex with Julie does not trigger the achievement.

Yes , it's confirmed, it gives the achievement, then because of a bug, the achievements disappears and you cannot get it again.

Il will be fixed in the next update (will also retroactively fix the save).

Thanks for the reports

 

[Traitus]

Personally don't like that the lab has achievements chained to it.
The achievements were some kind of "messing with the code" by doing certain actions or devs putting bars with rewards attached to them as incentive, having one extra day in the simulation because one nurse sucked you doesn't make sense to me.

 

[Lotrum]

Personally don't like that the lab has achievements chained to it.
The achievements were some kind of "messing with the code" by doing certain actions or devs putting bars with rewards attached to them as incentive, having one extra day in the simulation because one nurse sucked you doesn't make sense to me.

I understand why you would think something like this, and it makes sense, but...

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[JamesD3617]

I understand why you would think something like this, and it makes sense, but...

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I actually love the idea of going in the real world. It's cool seeing our character actually change in the real world because it opens all new opportunities. If I could compare the game to monster hunter the low rank would be the simulation; high rank would be the lab since that is tied to achievements; and based on the plot divulged we will likely get something comparable to master rank once work our character through the lab. Regardless I'm excited where it goes because the update basically creates a bunch of scenarios to play off of.

 

[Traitus]

I understand why you would think something like this, and it makes sense, but...

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Cannot judge in what the future might bring just what's there.

 

[flyingnimbus]

I think something that would make the game more enjoyable is if there was more variability between runs. That might be due to random events occurring or going into a run with different sets of challenge options. Replaying to finish off achievements starts to feel monotonous by run 4 or so. I find that introducing greater variance keeps other roguelites fresh.

 

[idabetez]

My only complaint is the choice of models. To contradict this...it does give more realistic vibes. But over half of the girls are 6/10 at best lol. But again...does play into the realism I guess.

If my opinion on new characters matters at all can I suggest some of the populars. (Madison Ivy, Kendra Lust, Abella Danger, Mia Malkova, Peta Jenson, just to name a few with wide ranges of scene opportunities)

 

[pasagirr]

<<if $sceneselector is 3>>
<<if $zoexmas isnot 1>>
<<if $janzoeach gt 1 or $xiazoethreeach>>

You can unlock Zoe's Christmas sex scene (250 exp):


forgot about threesome with Francine and Zoe

 

[LuvFlatChests]

My only complaint is the choice of models. To contradict this...it does give more realistic vibes. But over half of the girls are 6/10 at best lol. But again...does play into the realism I guess.

If my opinion on new characters matters at all can I suggest some of the populars. (Madison Ivy, Kendra Lust, Abella Danger, Mia Malkova, Peta Jenson, just to name a few with wide ranges of scene opportunities)

I agree with the developers of this game. Popularity is not the only criteria for choice of models. Availability and costs always
comes first, but after that find material that is best compatible in this game by performance. Imao Kirsten Scott gave the
best lesibian acting video. Wow can she act. Yes, some people like Riley Reid can be both popular and act, but access to her materials may be $1 million per pop. Yes, you can find cheaper or free stuff with the Ukranians or Russians, but run the risk of them being under 18. Same holds true for some of the Thai and Fillipina.

 

[0lskyblackl0]

cheat?

 

[UnwrappedGodiva]

Hi! It's been a while since I had time for some proofreading... I noticed a few typos:

• Many dialogues are missing a full stop at the end.
• In the passage "melaniescene", there is a stray "c" at the beginning of: "c How about I give you a kiss?"
• In the passage "rosfra", Francine says: "Seriously! I love that it's you! You're so sweet and gourgeous, I couldn't have hoped for anyone better" -> sweet and gorgeous
• Also in "rosfra", a few lines below: "Both your lovers then put themself on the couch with their asses up in the air for you, so that you can fuck them from behind." -> put themselves on the couch
• In the passage "xianggaming", a few lines before the end of the scene: "So You keep fucking her until your orgasm is inevitable, and you pull out just in time to spurt your jizz on her stomach." -> So you keep (lowercase)
• In the passage "xiangsex", 1/3 down the page: "It's clear that you nowhere close to coming after you fuck her in the same position for a few more minutes." -> It's clear that you are nowhere
• In the passage "susangaming", halfway down the page: "You realize all this waiting must have made her pretty horny, she starts moaning right away and rubbing her clit, as you intesify your rhythm." -> you intensify your rhythm.
• Same page, a few lines below: "She envelopes your full length inside of her, and you can feel her cunt sliding all over it, this feels amazing." -> She envelops your
• Same page, a few lines below: "Susan is truly great at riding you, so you let her continue doing that, but just for the sake of variety, you have her turn her around." -> you have her turn around.
• In the passage "daniellemall", after buy her a new outfit, near the end of the scene: "You're not sure if she's still thanking you for the gift of for your cum, but either is fine." -> for the gift or for your cum
• In the passage "francineapa", anal scene: "You ask her to get on all four." -> on all fours.
• Same page. two lines below: "You feel that she's finally start to adapt to your cock." -> finally starting to adapt
• In the passage "rosxia", halfway down the page: "You take off everyhing, including your shoes while looking at the scene, then you just hop on the bed" -> take off everything
• Same page, a few lines below: "At some point Rose want's to eat some pussy as well, and as you instinctively position yourself behind her she just says:" -> Rose wants to eat
• In the passage "graceroom", blowjob scene, third paragraph: "It's going to be hard to concentrate with an hard dick" -> with a hard dick.
• In the passage "frazoe", second line of the page: "Just outside her house you find Zoe, she's nervously pacing back and forth on the side of the house that shields her from the passing cars sight." -> the passing cars' sight (or "from the sight of the passing cars" may be even better)
• In the passage "xiazoe": "she then starts to get her mouth close, but hesitates." -> She then starts (capitalization)
• Same page, a few lines below: "Zoe moans and keeps repeating." It would be better to end this with a colon (":") because this is followed by what Zoe says. And the next line starting with "While" could be in lowercase if this is supposed to be the continuation of the same sentence. Or maybe "...while" but I don't know if this is better or not.
• In the passage "cardangra", halfway down the page: "You want to give an orgasm to her as well." -> to give her an orgasm as well.

I'm still missing the scenes with Hanna, but that will be for later...

 

[UnwrappedGodiva]

Here is a bit more feedback...

• In the passage "xmas" with Francine, I guess that you did not want to create full characters for Luana and Kate, but it is weird to read the text ""Oh, really?" answers Luana." or "Kate agrees, by moaning a "yes"" instead of having the usual speech boxes. If you are worried about wasting the limited number of placeholders that you have reserved for future characters, then you could use two of them for temporary characters that you could recycle in other scenes. Let's say that you call them "girl1" and "girl2" (or "temporary1" or "tempgirl1" or anything else). You would have temporary Sugarcube variables for their names and images. You could even define two macros for setting these variables in the passage that uses them. So you could have for example <<setgirl1 "Luana" "path/to/her/image">> that would set the variables _girl1_name and _girl1_image. These variables would be used in the macro <<girl1>> to let Luana say something. In another passage, you could reuse the same macros for another temporary character by calling <<setgirl1 "Your Mom" "path/to/her/image">> followed by several calls to <<girl1>>.
• In the passage "xmas" with Carol and Natasha: "You resume to fuck her in missionary as Carol is just above her, (...)" -> You resume fucking her
• Same scene, last line: "Definitely a wonderful exprience that you won't easily forget." -> a wonderful experience
• In the passage "reallifestatus" with Mara: "You spend a few minute contemplating the drawing; it's handmade, but not crudely drawn, she probably even used a ruler to make it." -> spend a few minutes (plural)
• Same page, five lines below: "Good, you made it, I was starting to think you coouldn't get it..." -> you couldn't
• In the passage "hannahmeet", about two thirds down the page: "Hannah nods, reassured, and keep touching herself for a bit longer, you can see that she's slowly getting closer to an orgasm." -> and keeps touching herself
• Same page, a few lines below: "She keeps stroking you, as hear moans intensify, she occasionally (...)" -> as her moans
• Same page, near the end of the page: "She tries her best to act like nothing happened, and a couple minutes later she just out-ight says it:" -> just outright says it:
• In the passage "hannahroom", footjob scene, there is a stray quote in the middle of this sentence: "Not only does she let you do that", but she starts sucking on it as well."
• In the passage "hannahroom", sex scene: "She then removes her clothes and positions herself on all four, ready for you to take her." -> on all fours
• Same page, a few lines below, it would be better to split this in two sentences or to have a comma or a semicolon after "didn't": "But she didn't she just turns around, without even letting your cock out of her."

 

[DonkeyPuncher82]

Personally don't like that the lab has achievements chained to it.
The achievements were some kind of "messing with the code" by doing certain actions or devs putting bars with rewards attached to them as incentive, having one extra day in the simulation because one nurse sucked you doesn't make sense to me.

Skipping what Lotrum said about there being a reason for the future, I find achievements from the real-life interludes to be entirely consistent. Yes, the idea was "the simulation is getting better", but the MC's real life experience will make HIM better as well, which will inevitably transfer to his.. "avatar"? being better as well.

Aside from that, Lotrum; I love this game. I do a fresh run every update or two.
I do, however, feel like the Rose path takes an inordinate amount of time. 70 minutes to eat supper when lunch or breakfast is half that? Followed by like time to wait for her to finish the shift (okay, that part's fair) and then more time to do whatever you planned on doing with her... pretty big time sink, I usually edit the times down to about half to make it not take an entire evening to get a kiss and cuddle. Just my two cents.

 

[ElatusWindfarer]

don't know if this has already been mentioned but it would appear the first day where Melanie gives the tour is getting skipped.

Edit: this is only happening on the first run in a save, on second runs it works fine

 

[Dole]

0.70 bugs (played further with my save from 0.69)

Have sex with Julie (post-game) to unlock this. (+expmult)
Get a blowjob from Mara (post-game) to unlock this. (+extraFFincome)

You can have sex with Julie it doesn`t unlocked the Achievement.
Mara the money don`t count so you have all time 0 from 1000.