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It has potential, but it definitely needs work. For instance, what sane person would make out in front of a murdered person?! That is all shades of creepy right there. 
Thanks for your comment. Didn't think about that. I will change that.It has potential, but it definitely needs work. For instance, what sane person would make out in front of a murdered person?! That is all shades of creepy right there.
If you mean the picture with Fiona (the black hair one) looking back over her shoulder in the woods.... I think I broke the texture in this picture. Will change that asap
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No problem. I would also suggest making Sam faster than Fiona; otherwise, it does not make much sense to have the slower person run back to the car in order to call the police, even if it is that person's vehicle.
There also needs to be some benefit of the doubt from the police as well. They came across as too ignorant and unwilling to actually do their jobs. Maybe have one of them look around the possible crime scene?
seems like the story needs a little more to it before dropping this demo. I didn't see anything that would make me want to come back.
Scene changed:
Thanks again
Nopes, it's part of the story, that Fiona is alone with the corpse
Good tip, will add that
Thanks again
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I wasn't necessarily saying that Fiona should be the one to go back, just that Sam should probably be the faster one. In situations such as the one you presented, it is usually best to send the faster person because it allows for help to arrive more quickly. Sending the slower person would not make much sense unless the faster individual had absolutely no idea where the phone was.
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The detectives should run a train on Sam for lying to them.
I'm just kidding thought, seriously.
I'm just kidding thought, seriously.
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@ShocLite12 @Vycron it depends on the situation with the whole making out in front of a dead person thing, especially cops, people react to stressful situations in different ways, i.e. trying to cling to life (making out with someone) unless it's just a "hey I happen to be horny right now, make out with me" it all depends on how you spin it, I've seen it before, had a buddy who told me after a particularly horrible case he would go home and fuck his wife's brains out
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The dialogue is a bit insane like with the police and everything's divorced from reality. The mcs father was rich and obviously a rich guys daughter is going to study to become a police officer, a highly regarded one at that. I don't like when devs make the characters do crazy facial expressions, whats the reason for that. Am I meant to not take anything seriously?
Why bother accepting a game here with <5mins of content? It's more like a joke test practice than something that's eventually going to be a good game.
Why bother accepting a game here with <5mins of content? It's more like a joke test practice than something that's eventually going to be a good game.
New Version online. Still short, but it will be longer.
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Great potential and I really wanted to give it five stars, as it is one of the very few porn games that may one day become something akin to a real adventure game. Truely hot characters and a potentielly exciting story. Still, at this stage it has very little content and can be barely called a demo. At least already more arousal than Big Brother!
And please, dear developer, please keep the protagonist and her girlfriend gold star lesbians! No male interference please!
And please, dear developer, please keep the protagonist and her girlfriend gold star lesbians! No male interference please!
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