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TimJRebel love the game! Love that the MC isn't evil and a total trope too.

My only real criticism is that the Savannah stuff feels rushed... like everything up to that is a slow buildup, then it's just meet Savannah, boom fucking. I think some seduction/slow buildup would be cool - and fit with the game a bit better? Hope this criticism isn't too harsh!
 

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TimJRebel love the game! Love that the MC isn't evil and a total trope too.

My only real criticism is that the Savannah stuff feels rushed... like everything up to that is a slow buildup, then it's just meet Savannah, boom fucking. I think some seduction/slow buildup would be cool - and fit with the game a bit better? Hope this criticism isn't too harsh!
I'd agree with this sentiment. I think the premise and bones of the story are pretty good. Finding the balance between rushing and grinding is going to be the hard part. Seduction of the women should take a bit of effort instead of immediate payoff.
 

TimJRebel

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TimJRebel love the game! Love that the MC isn't evil and a total trope too.

My only real criticism is that the Savannah stuff feels rushed... like everything up to that is a slow buildup, then it's just meet Savannah, boom fucking. I think some seduction/slow buildup would be cool - and fit with the game a bit better? Hope this criticism isn't too harsh!
I'd agree with this sentiment. I think the premise and bones of the story are pretty good. Finding the balance between rushing and grinding is going to be the hard part. Seduction of the women should take a bit of effort instead of immediate payoff.
Thanks for your feedback! Indeed, I rushed the Savannah event, too eager to create the first fully playable version. The story explanation is that Adriana 'prepared' her long before and she required just a little push, but I agree that it does not feel earned.
But for the future, I see these "attacks" as complex events involving planning, preparation, and, yes, more seduction or at least communication between MC and target. The next one that I'm working on will involve working undercover, gaining trust, and building a network of sympathizers.
 
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Thanks for your feedback! Indeed, I rushed the Savannah event, too eager to create the first fully playable version. The story explanation is that Adriana 'prepared' her long before and she required just a little push, but I agree that it does not feel earned.
But for the future, I see these "attacks" as complex events involving planning, preparation, and, yes, more seduction or at least communication between MC and target. The next one that I'm working on will involve working undercover, gaining trust, and building a network of sympathizers.
Yeah, I get you about the whole Adriana prepping her - it's just the issue is that happens 'off screen' so to speak, you're told about it, but you don't do it!
 
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I see lot potencial here, hope the dev devotes real time and effort to this because can become one the best html games so far made, since is so rare to find good interracial games..
 

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Hi all,
I've updated the OP with the new version of the game. Hope there will be less of a shitstorm in the thread! Seriously though, please let me know what you think and share issues/bugs/ideas.
In this update, I followed your feedback and changed how the interaction with Savannah works. To be honest, this should have been in the initial release. And with Ella, there is a whole thread of events with a possible ending if you choose that.
Saves aren't compatible since a lot has been changed.
And yes, there is a patreon now: . The game will always be free, but any support is appreciated.
Have fun!
 
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