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rare black mc moment
but a little racism...
does that guy need to be named tyrone and look like that?
but a little racism...
does that guy need to be named tyrone and look like that?
I'd agree with this sentiment. I think the premise and bones of the story are pretty good. Finding the balance between rushing and grinding is going to be the hard part. Seduction of the women should take a bit of effort instead of immediate payoff.TimJRebel love the game! Love that the MC isn't evil and a total trope too.
My only real criticism is that the Savannah stuff feels rushed... like everything up to that is a slow buildup, then it's just meet Savannah, boom fucking. I think some seduction/slow buildup would be cool - and fit with the game a bit better? Hope this criticism isn't too harsh!
TimJRebel love the game! Love that the MC isn't evil and a total trope too.
My only real criticism is that the Savannah stuff feels rushed... like everything up to that is a slow buildup, then it's just meet Savannah, boom fucking. I think some seduction/slow buildup would be cool - and fit with the game a bit better? Hope this criticism isn't too harsh!
Thanks for your feedback! Indeed, I rushed the Savannah event, too eager to create the first fully playable version. The story explanation is that Adriana 'prepared' her long before and she required just a little push, but I agree that it does not feel earned.I'd agree with this sentiment. I think the premise and bones of the story are pretty good. Finding the balance between rushing and grinding is going to be the hard part. Seduction of the women should take a bit of effort instead of immediate payoff.
Yeah, I get you about the whole Adriana prepping her - it's just the issue is that happens 'off screen' so to speak, you're told about it, but you don't do it!Thanks for your feedback! Indeed, I rushed the Savannah event, too eager to create the first fully playable version. The story explanation is that Adriana 'prepared' her long before and she required just a little push, but I agree that it does not feel earned.
But for the future, I see these "attacks" as complex events involving planning, preparation, and, yes, more seduction or at least communication between MC and target. The next one that I'm working on will involve working undercover, gaining trust, and building a network of sympathizers.
Impregnation would be nicePlease tell be impregnation is planned in the future!
Glad to hear it, looking forward to a replay of the improved version!uniqueusername69 Banger323 I haven't done much in over a month, but now I am motivated to continue. The update's scope will probably be limited as I want to first address the issues with the initial version. I aim to release something by the end of the month.