uniqueusername69
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TimJRebel love the game! Love that the MC isn't evil and a total trope too.
My only real criticism is that the Savannah stuff feels rushed... like everything up to that is a slow buildup, then it's just meet Savannah, boom fucking. I think some seduction/slow buildup would be cool - and fit with the game a bit better? Hope this criticism isn't too harsh!
My only real criticism is that the Savannah stuff feels rushed... like everything up to that is a slow buildup, then it's just meet Savannah, boom fucking. I think some seduction/slow buildup would be cool - and fit with the game a bit better? Hope this criticism isn't too harsh!