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hello friends, im a writer. not published just yet but i am quite good at it, i want to bring light to what teary has been doing. teary has good ideas, creative worlds etc. however, his ability to actually write an interesting story isnt great... he uses a technique that many "good writers" use, it makes you look genius despite actually only having good ideas. this technique makes use of suggestive writing, aka adding stuff that suggests interesting additions to the plot, but only if the fans link those things together. for example, we have reason to believe that the niht are linked with vhidna in some idiosyncratic way, this link made by her wine found in the mines. this Suggests, that she knows more than she leads on, however this may be the case. teary isnt skilled enough to actually link the 2 in a proper way. the fans come up with interesting ideas that are coherent from a narrative perspective, but teary's actual idea is much less interesting. he keeps things vague so that people will make their ideal story within the vagueness, when it actually gets revealed it usually disappointing. based on what ive seen in this thread, im assuming the new update is disappointing from a story perspective.
SINCE NOBODY HAS SAID IT i think u have a point. there's so many loose ends and hints at 100 different things that it makes us think of so many different ideas and shit, but until we see them get wrapped up we won't know whether teary truly is the shakespeare of femdom games or not
 

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Judging the way you actually write and structure your sentences, without adding any paragraphs, you are without a doubt the biggest clown in this thread. Also, ever heard of larger letters, Mr. Writer?
dawg if i was writing an actual essay instead of rambling i would have structured it. also, u didnt even try to refute any of my points, its a commonly used technique that many "genius writers" do.
 
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SINCE NOBODY HAS SAID IT i think u have a point. there's so many loose ends and hints at 100 different things that it makes us think of so many different ideas and shit, but until we see them get wrapped up we won't know whether teary truly is the shakespeare of femdom games or not
exactly, all things are linked in small vague ways, the fans make their own connections that they prefer and they see him as a really good writer. hes good at making ideas, hes good at pacing the story. he just needs to actually SHOW us where the ideas are going, rather than leaving it up to the audience to figure out. its like fnaf writing atp
 

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exactly, all things are linked in small vague ways, the fans make their own connections that they prefer and they see him as a really good writer. hes good at making ideas, hes good at pacing the story. he just needs to actually SHOW us where the ideas are going, rather than leaving it up to the audience to figure out. its like fnaf writing atp
Yea, it's basically the difference between ideas VS actual story, he might be good at coming up with ideas, but bad at tying them together in a satisfying way.

Btw pro tip, you can reply to multiple people in one singular comment by doing Multi-quotes (press "quote" on each message you wish to reply to, even from other threads, then pressing "instert quote" (and ordering the messages in whichever order you want them replied in).
 

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Seems it didn't get updated but it's useful anyway, some guy posted it before me I think but anyways.

Here's the steps for the gallery:
  1. Press L
  2. Choose "The KittyBox"
  3. Choose "Redeem Code"
  4. Input 35975
  5. Choose "Penthouse"
  6. Enjoy
does this wrok only fopr the latest update? bc on 0.97.6 its says "not found".
 
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people who went far with ayleen, after you borrow a book from her library, how do you interact with it? no option to do so in the library, or at the computer in my room
 

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By the way as far as i can see we dont even have new scenes with dominic...it truly is the end of the world..see you guys in 2030...:cry::cry::cry:
Maybe I'm biased but I feel like most fans would be mad as hell if Teary dedicated an update to Dominic.
I know there's a number of people that like him, especially in this thread, but I question how people would react to an update that took 6 months to a year (or even longer, who knows with Teary nowadays) that was focused entirely on gay content.
 
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Maybe I'm biased but I feel like most fans would be mad as hell if Teary dedicated an update to Dominic.
I know there's a number of people that like him, especially in this thread, but I question how people would react to an update that took 6 months to a year (or even longer, who knows with Teary nowadays) that was focused entirely on gay content.
Oh well i dind't mean an entire update dedicated on him, i meant like 2 or 3 scenes nothing more, i totally understand gay content is not everyone cup of tea, and well youre right everyone would be mad, just like on that one mostly gay update(well more like 5% but you got my point) on daily lives of my country side that created a war...

After all people waited 6+ month so its understandable.
 

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By the way as far as i can see we dont even have new scenes with dominic...it truly is the end of the world..see you guys in 2030...:cry::cry::cry:
I haven't played the new update yet but I'm just waiting for the update to kick his teeth in for being a manipulative snake and call him out for the diary.
 
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