First, to get my inner critic off my back- Draken tried this in the actual comics (electronic brainwasher), only to be foiled by Kim's younger brothers. And he was in a much better hidden hideout. If Kim missed over 20 days of school, Bonnie wouldn't care about her anymore- she'ld be off the cheer squad, and basically forgotten. If I can get in and out of Kim's room, and she's not tied up, why doesn't she overpower me and escape? What are they gonna do, lock her up again? Why does a successful professional wife trainer need a book on how to influence people? And What Happened to my $5000?????
Okay, going back to suspension of disbelief-
You should really have 2 day actions and 1 night, instead of 1 day and 1 night. It was fairly frustrating trying to earn Shego's money, when I had to spend 1 out every 2 days talking to Draken. Shego even says the beach trip is 2 hours long... I can especially see this getting annoying when I can finally interact with Bonnie, Monique, etc.
If you don't want to put the stats on every screen (Money, World Peace, Kim Slut), at least put them on the main choice screens (Choose between visit kim, visit draken, visit shego, go out side screen for example). Going outside the lab every 30 seconds to see my scores was also annoying
Perhaps I made the wrong choices, but I could only get 1 of the supposed 2 insult scenes, and 5 of the 4 kissing scenes (yep, 1 extra).
the second pussy scene- it should really have come AFTER the first nude scene.(based on the dialogue in that nude scene)
You should have a "show tits" scene with EACH of the tops (black, green, bra)- and they should have the current pants. Don't always re-use the the same scene with the green top and cargo pants.
Do I need to mention the same thing applies to her removing pants?
As a suggestion, World Peace should be able to go negative, and negative 5 or 10 should trigger a bad end (Draken fires you because he's now world ruler, Kim is rescued, something)
I don't see how you are going to manage visiting Monique at her place with Kim, before end game when Kim is fully trained. (Unless fully trained Kim is mid-game, and YOU are double crossing DeeDee for revenge?) Bonnie, I can see you having Kim send some text messages to start those rumours at school, but taking Kim out of the lab without some control is asking for it.
PS- Deniz- Kim has always been a fairly flat (15 year?) high school student, having her be a flat 18+ girl is no stretch (just google some ballet dancers, for examples). Shego and Kim's mom both have quite large breasts, and he does have Shego out front to draw in the lookie-loos. If you had given a reference image from the actual comic (kim in her cheer leader outfit, for example) to demonstrate that her boobs were bigger than drawn, rather than how other people chose to interpret her growth spurt, I would take it more seriously.
Edit-
Okay, I broke down and read the scripts. Second insult is at kim_sluttiness > 50, there is no 5th naked scene, its the 2nd or 3rd one you missed (one scene requires 25 kim_sluttiness exactly, among other varaibles) Bonny shortchanges you on her payment ($50, not the $100 you negotiated) (choose "work" on kim's page during day), and Kim does obediently leave lab and return