VN Ren'Py Kingdom's Bane [v0.1] [Desire & Lust]

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Ali ibn Hassan

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" After your father died "

Another one bites the dust.....................

Thnks fr shrng
 

xorihe3734

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Do people actually give money to devs that put out a 5 minute demo with no content like this? Seems risky when so many games get abandoned very quickly.

It doesn't seem promising to me when someone puts in such a minimal amount of work as a first release in hopes of getting support. What are your updates even going to look like if you're not willing to put in the work necessary to build a larger, more suitable first release that shows what you are offering and might actually get you some support?
 

SplashCC

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It doesn't seem promising to me when someone puts in such a minimal amount of work as a first release in hopes of getting support.
On one hand it feels you're right. On the other it seems you have no idea what it takes to just get five of those characters looking like that. If you don't instantly feel you've seen those female models in countless other games. It took effort.

I apologize if I'm wrong, but you acted with such disregard that I immediately assumed clueless.
 

Overlord070

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LIs look good, and the premise could be interesting, but let's see if it has legs to stand on, there are a couple red flags.

In any case, good luck to the dev.
 
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Khaelindra

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The concept is nice, but the VIS vibe will need more content and better English, one or two mistakes can happen but two dozen is too much. I hope it improves over time, but some seeds for interesting events have been planted (daughter, sister, queen, ...?).

And what others said: go to SubscribeStar instead of Patreon as SS allows incest games, Patreon doesn't.
 

xorihe3734

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On one hand it feels you're right. On the other it seems you have no idea what it takes to just get five of those characters looking like that. If you don't instantly feel you've seen those female models in countless other games. It took effort.

I apologize if I'm wrong, but you acted with such disregard that I immediately assumed clueless.
You're right, I worded it poorly. I always think of it like that scene in the show Parks and Recreation where the character Ben is making a claymation film which he worked slavishly for days on. He shows his work to someone and it all comes out to like 5 seconds of film.

The dev obviously put in some work to get it to this state, but, I don't think you can ask for backing based solely on a 5 minute teaser. If the dev had waited and kept working on it to show that they can deliver ACTUAL content, it would have drawn more attention and convinced more people to back them. That hurry to get something out even without content is what I think is worrying.
 
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Requah

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The renders are looking really nice and clean but the bad engrish can be off-putting. If the incest content is going to be with Ingrid then I would suggest putting the classic "roommate" place holder when defining who she is to the MC.
 
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