I'm sure someone would have already mentioned this (although I'm not combing through 82 pages of comments to find it and I can't imagine what I'd need to search for), but why does Loura tell you that a mage of the Order of the Crimson Vengeance killed her father when previously she'd told you that her father was a worthless hateful drunk who sold her into slavery in a workhouse for 10 coins when she was 5 years old and she never saw him again? Is she just a compulsive liar who got her various sob stories mixed up, or has the author made a boo-boo?
For that matter, it also strikes me as odd that Elain is initially resistant to telling you her name because Elves believe a name is a holy protection and knowing it gives you power over them- but then casually drops the name of the Elven queen Santifel only a couple of scenes later. That might need some clarification.
Oh, and does anyone else have a bug where after you get the necklace from Elain's mother, you can't go into her room any more? I click on 'Enter' and nothing happens, as if I'd chosen not to enter the room after all.