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Zoey Raven

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Thanks you very much! It might be best to start interacting with the game devs and coordinate your efforts. Just my two cents.
I've been doing that with many of them for a long time now.
 

Zoey Raven

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unrelated but what is the purple text? harem or negative rp?
It's something the dev did when he kindly added the rework to the first 2 chapters of the mod, it's a choice that means nothing.
 

Aweful

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So what was the changes exactly? All I really noticed was the that you changed some of the transitions because that's where my skipping would always pause.

If there were changes to the script they didn't register as something new with the persistent save. Or at least not on my playthrough.

Also, I'm sorry if you thought I came off rude but I'm just telling how I see it. There are things that felt wholly unneeded that probably just ate into your development time (like the jiggles). Also, the transitions between scenes I get, but I don't get them during scenes. That and the unskippable image transitions (like the circling around Alice in the laundry room). It just feels like they stretch out the game in an annoying way. It's honestly one thing to do that when a character is first introduced, or if she's wearing something special, but by this point we've seen Alice in a lot of sexy things and totally naked. We don't need the pan around that just slows down the pace, especially right at the beginning of an update.

These are just things I suggest cutting down on, I'm not trying to get in your face.


I also still disagree with your ending, having a 2 week gap of time is really bad. Especially after a first date with Rose. So what, did he not call her at all during those 2 weeks? Or Leah? If you're just doing this jump to justify the pregnancy decision and giving time for her to actually notice it, then it's a poor decision to be basing the time jump on one single character.
You didn't like the jiggle? :HideThePain:
 
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RoadWulf

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You didn't like the jiggle? :HideThePain:
I don't like it because he wrote "her breasts jiggle" and then switched to two different animations of her boobs and ass jiggling, which took 20 seconds to get through and then you can continue the text.

It's blocky, breaks up the momentum and is unneeded. If was able to be clicked through, it'd be fine. But they're unskippable animations.
 

linkinn

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Ok i finished it let me say a few a things, i have one complain... the time jumps are a bit weird and break the "immersion", but at the same time i understand why they are there and its purpose. There is one way to fix it in my opinion and that is by adding a small summary on what happened on that week, even if it's simplistic "MC trained all week and them [something about some events that happened before that week]". It makes the events before the time jump have a little more weight, it's weird going on a date and then the time skip, it feels like MC just ignored everyone and nothing happened during that week.

Another thing that i didn't like but isn't really a problem for me because i know it's hard to render and code is relationships and i'am not sure what is the dev plans, it's a bit weird that the mc isn't sleeping with Alice in the same bed after a few fucks in my opinion, in my "solo" run with her they seem to be pretty close already, but most events in between the sex are generic, they are made to work with any choice you made so you don't really feel like you are progressing your relationship with the girl, as i said i'am not sure about devs plan and "real" relationship might come in the future.

Overall it's a pretty good game to play with light/fun writing, good friends and some drama that don't overwhelm the story in the middle.
 
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linkinn

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I totally agree with what you've said but I haven't finished the game yet, everything you've mentioned is planned I'm just taking things slowly. And yes, I will show what happened in that time skip, it makes no sense to leave it like that
what can I say... people are impatient
we're working on rewriting Round 1 and 2, the bad dialogue will be fixed in the next update
Thank you so much for your review
I'am sorry if it sounded impatient, it was not my intention and i don't expect you to change anything just because i said it, i just thought i would leave my impressions here as a form of constructive criticism but you are probably tired of hearing about it. Keep it up!
 
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Khao

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Decided to do a walkthrough mod for this one as well. Enjoy!

Edit: Updated to Round 6b (You guys can thank the dev for putting the changes into the mod for Rounds 1 and 2, I was going to wait til next update)

Note: This is a Harem Mod you will need to start a new save if you have not previously used it.

Install: Extract to "game" folder, overwrite when prompted.

You can find this and all my other content here:

Or you can:
Question: what does the purple text mean because there is a choice in here that has green and purple as the colors.
 

Zoey Raven

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Question: what does the purple text mean because there is a choice in here that has green and purple as the colors.
Asked and answered earlier in the thread. The dev redid the first 2 chapters because I was going to wait til next update because it was only 15 renders. So it means the choice means nothing.
 
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hotdog10101

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First time playing this game, thanks for this good game dev it can really help me with this quarantine lockdown. hoping for more rose content.
 

Tony_AG

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Try it and I gotta say, its good,enjoyable experienced the pace kinda fast for me but i'm ok with it. Can I ask how long it takes for a new updates?
 

MayJames

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I really like it so far.
Love the visuals. Story is ok/ solid.
However, at this point I would have complained about the 3 females with similar body types.... and the along came ginger mom.... you teaser !
Cant wait for the update.
I hope that you not only find a way to get ginger mom and daughter into "a relationship" but i dlike them to know about each other and be ok.... true Harem I guess :)
 

Ruslan11

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I saw this game, went to read the description, checked the tags (whether anything not of interest to me, all normal), I downloaded and began, I look introduction and here BAM! Sex bomb fell on me in the form of a beautiful sister... Fuck immediately ran to look for information whether there will be incest in future updates ... Shit... I was disappointed to find out there wouldn't be any... Why the fuck put a beautiful sis in a porn game without any "action" with her.
I originally wasn't expecting it to be an incest game, but man, Amy is the bomb...
 

FaceCrap

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not sure whether this is Zoey's mod or the game itself but the RP points for both Alice and Leah are all over the place... like when going to pick up Alice's new papers, one moment Alice her points are up at 8, as soon as she sits down after talking to the receptionist, they dropped down 3 points ???
Same thing I've seen happening with Leah's RP points... just didn't take note when.

Something is totally messed up... Alice's anal scene is occurring twice in almost identical ways... first time after Jason wins the quarter final, second time after the dance night... both times the dialogue is nearly identical, she even comments about having the butt plug in for the first time the second time around, dialogue reads as if it's the first time both times... and again, Alice's RP points drops 3 points again for no reason.

One other thing that annoyed the heck out of me was that I often had to click a gadzillion times to get it to continue to the next scene..
 
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