The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is Demo...
I'm not sure what country this visual novel/game takes place in, but most western style boarding schools are for pre-adults and children, not for adults over the age of 18... So in that vain I feel a bit confused, as my sense of immersion was thrown out the gate, seems a bit turned on it's head...
The visuals of the characters are fairly good, and the backdrops seem unique and creative... The few animations I saw were alright but short... I think there was kissing animations maybe? but they seemed to bug out, because the game would pause but nothing played out till finally some more text would appear as though something had occurred but didn't show on the screen... Not sure if that is a bug, or what it was...
The script is pretty good, as I only ran into some occasional spelling/grammar errors... The plot (what little there is for the moment) revolves around a male protagonist who is 20 years old and is attending a boarding school which only requires one class per day for 2 hours... When I read that, red bells went off, as again the immersion took a hit... What person in their right mind spends the absorbent amounts of money it costs to go to a private live on campus school just to take a two hour class each day?
Dismissing the plot holes I already mentioned... The rest of the story involves the protagonist meeting a woman while dropping off his belongings two weeks before classes start... And depending on choices, they hit it off, but she is too shy to have sex with him... When the school year begins, after meeting a few other women, including the woman who is also his bunk mate (go figure), he meets his teacher and a class bully... Eventually in the end the protagonist gets with the woman he met before, and they have sex... And although it may have been a bit rushed, that their relationship moved that quickly, I could deal with it, since it's not unheard of... The content ends very shortly after that...
Now here is where a couple more hits to the immersion come along... First, the teacher is dressed like she is ready to seduce every man who comes within eye shot, with a very open dress showing her cleavage and no bra... Come on, no teacher/professor/etc wears clothes like that in any normal school I'm aware of... Staffing usually has dress codes just like students, to look more professional... Then we have the class bully, who acts more like an immature high school teenager then a young adult... And at the end of the current content, she sexually attacks another Adult student (can you say jail time?), in front of many witnesses...
Overall, trying to dismiss all the plot holes and even the premise of the school itself, as well as the over the top things that occur, I just felt disappointed... The story telling in and of itself was decent, but some of the stuff going on was just immersion breaking... There has to be some sense of believability in a story to be immersive and not require a huge suspension of disbelief... I tried to put the boarding school non-sense out of my mind, because it was just a slight stretch... But then add in all the other non-sense mixed in with what I thought might be a romance/love story, with some lust thrown in, just left me feeling disappointed... Not majorly, but disappointed enough to be unsure about revisiting this one as it continues development... Have to wait and see...