VN Ren'Py Abandoned Last Age of Magic [v0.12] [Kiobe]

[monroe]

Overview:
This game is a fascinating journey to the world of magic abilities. The vortex of breathtaking events which take place in the Amber city.
You will plunge into the epoch when the elemental magic ruled the universe, when creatures from elves and orcs to humans and ghosts were equal and only magic and knowledge was the only way to best the foes and to become the most powerful one.
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Thread Updated: 2019-02-22
Release Date: 2019-02-04
Developer: Kiobe -

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Version: 0.12
OS: Windows / Linux
Language: English, Russian
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[Ennoch]

I absolutely loove that town background. Its weird how that room has a tiny window, an open door and yet its brighter inside than outside. Its a kind of magic, baby! I miss the titties from the screenies!

EDIT: Douche-warning. Our "hero" is an annoying prick. Background is black&white line-art. Very fine line art i must say but still. Its russian by default, english is.. understandable. The whole storytelling is childish. Has a very nice menu Art is definitely the strong point here. I wonder if the DEV does it or he buys it or spent a ton of time collecting it, but sure is nice.
The whole game has Akabur Princess Trainer vibes. For now, supershort, you get the most "story" when your daily job of packing crates is explained. Go figure.

 

[Retro]

I also love how the town background is very obviously not from the same artist

 

[F9Zoney]

this Looks nice but i´m afraid it is just a Point&click Adventure with many grinds and less porn. i´m sceptic <.<

 

[Voilsh]

If it's a trainer/management it can be good.
If it's just a linear point & click, then yeah, just a VN.

 

[DanMachiFan]

english is.. understandable

Well, you've been... kind. But I already had a bad feeling after seeing Russian as soon as I opened the game...
Anyway, thanks @monroe !

 

[ThunderRob]

got academy livery..tried to visit academy..boot to menu..is that the end of the current build?

 

[Ennoch]

got academy livery..tried to visit academy..boot to menu..is that the end of the current build?

Go home, change into livery, got an "undead" scene and an end-of-content note.

 

[arckport]

Android port:

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[Swagylord1337]

Interesting, nice town background
like music, backgrounds are very important, some creators forget this two elements
I'll give it some time before picking it after a few updates

 

[kehe]

They should hire you to do town screens for the next heroes of might and magic game. If H M&M 6 had town screens like this i might have suffered through it.

 

[Darthjake]

English is understandable, all the elements for a good story are there, hopefully the author will be able to polish his work as he goes along. I'll give this a few updates and then check it again, it's got potential.

 

[vultron]

Gonna wait until at least 0.5 I think probably nothing to do in it right now but the art looks great so I'll come back to this.

 

[Rastafoo]

Sexy cover art, but no real game yet!

 

[Tendou_Kia]

the art looks awesome ./

 

[MilkyDaddy]

Hey, guys, would you please tell me what is wrong with English in my game, so I could change and improve.

I also love how the town background is very obviously not from the same artist

Yes, the background was from the previous artist, who refused to work in the future due to the heavy workload.

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please do not port on android, so as not to spoil the impression of the game. I'm going to make a good portable version of about 0.3

 

[Darthjake]

Hey, guys, would you please tell me what is wrong with English in my game, so I could change and improve.

It's just ...mechanical... not as bad as some machine translations that I've gotten for jap games, but not as polished as say Skaz's game Bad Manners, granted I think he has at least one professional translator working with him I think.

I'll download the game again, and post what you said in a few scenes, and then post how I think would be a better dialogue, don't get me wrong though, you *are* mostly getting your point across it's just breaking immersion in the game in my opinion.

I'll probably post a bit later in the day, Real Life is rearing it's ugly head in an attempt to consume my day of game playing.

 

[MilkyDaddy]

It's just ...mechanical... not as bad as some machine translations that I've gotten for jap games, but not as polished as say Skaz's game Bad Manners, granted I think he has at least one professional translator working with him I think.

I'll download the game again, and post what you said in a few scenes, and then post how I think would be a better dialogue, don't get me wrong though, you *are* mostly getting your point across it's just breaking immersion in the game in my opinion.

I'll probably post a bit later in the day, Real Life is rearing it's ugly head in an attempt to consume my day of game playing.

Thanks, if it's not difficult, please do it in the mail, then I can not see it. - kiobe@mail.ru

 

[Ennoch]

Well now, another Dev joins us, nice! Welcome, @Kiobe . Yes, the city background is wonderful, quite unfortunate the case with the artist. I was especially glad to see that there is a proper nighty version. You do the line art? That has potential too. The graphics are good, very good. Lots of facial impression of the MC shows which is a big plus and the whole UI is just perfect. Home looks wonderfull again.

The language, yes, well its better than most russian games where the Dev bothered to translate (and usually fails miserabely) so as Darthjake said it comes through but basically every single sentence is wrong when it comes to grammar sequence and some words are out of place. An apprentice robe, university uniform isn't called Livery in english. I thought for sure that its actually liver or some food and i didn't understand why the heck we need some food for the university...

Actually the "Livery" doesn't shows when we change into it. The same everyday "commenrclothes" remain despite we get the notification that we changed into it. Still missing the art or that is a bug?

 

[MilkyDaddy]

Well now, another Dev joins us, nice! Welcome, @Kiobe . Yes, the city background is wonderful, quite unfortunate the case with the artist. I was especially glad to see that there is a proper nighty version. You do the line art? That has potential too. The graphics are good, very good. Lots of facial impression of the MC shows which is a big plus and the whole UI is just perfect. Home looks wonderfull again.

The language, yes, well its better than most russian games where the Dev bothered to translate (and usually fails miserabely) so as Darthjake said it comes through but basically every single sentence is wrong when it comes to grammar sequence and some words are out of place. An apprentice robe, university uniform isn't called Livery in english. I thought for sure that its actually liver or some food and i didn't understand why the heck we need some food for the university...

Actually the "Livery" doesn't shows when we change into it. The same everyday "commenrclothes" remain despite we get the notification that we changed into it. Still missing the art or that is a bug?

Yes, when changing, the changes are not shown due to the fact that there is no picture itself , I had to leave it in this version since I couldn’t remove the code so that I could not cause errors. As I wrote on the patreon, I had to remove the game, reading books, a mini game from work, and all this because of a lack of graphics, from the game in this version, but I plan to put it all into the game until 30.11.2018. Thanks to you, the translation will be fixed now and I will post a fix next week. At the expense of the line, I simply did not have enough money to pay for a full-fledged drawing, as I have to work with the artist not in percentage, but drawing - opalata.
Thank you very much for your opinion, it is very important to me since this is my 1 solo project.
sorry for my english, now i use google translator.