RPGM Ren'Py Laura: Lustful Secrets [Ch.2 v0.3] [Dark Anu]

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Fat Brit 56

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cleanfeel said:
I played a few minutes. Here's my thoughts.

Pros:
1. Isometric graphics of the map is refreshing
2. Amount of locations on map shows ability to create a believable world (at least physically)

Cons:
1. Writing is poor - (more later)
2. Proportions of women is off - Kim Kardashian's ass is not a good indicator of a good hot body. Go look at the Olympics athletes in Tokyo if you want to see what perfect female asses should look like. Kim's ass is all fat and plastic surgery, which is gross. It's not natural. Go to reddit /r/gonewild if you still can't figure out. There's no excuse for not knowing what a shapely ass should look like)

Writing is the core of any narrative driven game experiences, such as the ones here in h-games. There's a lot of issues with the writing in this game, I will list them in order of pressing matter.

1. Lack of characterization for wife, daughter, and husband - Who are they? What does wife do? What does daughter do? Where are they living? What kind of neighborhood is it? What does wife want in her life? Is she a homemaker (unemployed leecher)? Is daughter a student? Does she have a job? Does she have a boyfriend? What is wife scared of? What makes her happy? etc. etc. Learn how to do it:
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2. Lack of real meaningful dialog between characters - Biggest examples being the conversation that the MC had with his wife when he told her "Hey babe, without asking you, I am going to have some stranger live in our house". You need more life experiences or watch more TV if you think the way you portrayed that conversation is how real people talk. It's completely bogus
3. Too many side characters - I don't give a shit about the neighbor when you can't even get the 4 characters you have correct: MC, wife, daughter, and Marketing Consultant. Too many characters don't make your game better, well developed characters do.

Overall the writing in this game is just poor. It sounds like someone with no life experiences trying to emulate real life. The first thing that jumped out to me was when the Boss chewing MC out in the office. It's 100% not believable and not how real corporate BS meetings go down (at least here in America where I work).
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Agree, it's no comparison to Deliverance, I'm not a fan of top down movement, wide hims, narrow waists and huge breast, yes Sarah has a big butt and Andrea big breasts in Deliverance but there's a lot of variety that's more realistic.
 
S.A.M studios

S.A.M studios

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the66 said:
per request, here is my unofficial android port of Laura: Lustful Secrets v1.6a.
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minimum system requirements: Android 8.0

you can import save files by the dev when starting a new game and no others are present.

have fun and please report problems (you can reach me
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updated: 27.04.2023 (v1.6a)
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lubering

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dawgue said:
Maybe in this update, Samuel will find out--she's already done a threesome, 4-some, girl/girl..what else is there?
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A bachelor party is a complete failure, I would agree to believe it at least a little if the girls were dressed in full body suits and full head mask with cutouts for the mouth and at the same time were silent, otherwise how retarded is it to not recognize your wife?
 
NewTricks

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lubering said:
A bachelor party is a complete failure, I would agree to believe it at least a little if the girls were dressed in full body suits and full head mask with cutouts for the mouth and at the same time were silent, otherwise how retarded is it to not recognize your wife?
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These scenarios in VNs are always based on that one episode of the Flintstones and even Fred and Barney managed to recognize their wives despite the masks.
 
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3.90 star(s) 55 Votes