VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - League of Ladies [v0.16f] [BB Games]

There is a lot of potential here and the dev seems intent on taking player feedback seriously. The current content is great and I'm looking forward to what's added in the future. I love the artwork in particular. Given the popularity of League, I see this as an opportunity to scratch the metaphorical itch of many, many people.

The only concerns I have at this point are the teased sandbox and the single minigame. Dev, please keep things as a linear story. We have a replay gallery for revisiting scenes; we don't need a (functional) map with locations and events. Showing the map is fine for context, but don't turn this into a "well let me go here and see if there's anything new to do" type of game. And if anything, remove that fishing minigame. It's nothing but a time-sink and it really takes away from everything else you have going on here.

What can i say, its a really nice suprise for me.
The art is good, the scenes are hot, dialogues are fun.
It also has both of my fav waifus from the league, so, yaay again.
I will be following this very closely, best of luck to the dev.
(also dev seems like a really kind person, and shares his work free for all of us, thats really means something)

This rating is for version 0.07b, or the first public release.

So far this game is absolutely amazing. It already has a good amount of content, so it's worth checking out right now.

The story is solid and will allow for a lot of interesting content. So far it's a little vanilla, but I wouldn't call it boring. For those who are familiar with LoL, so far this is based on the old lore.

The art is amazing, though the face of karatina seems a little off right now. There is virtually zero grind right now, everything is story related or porn. It did feel like karatina lost a bit of her personality when you get closer to her.

If I had to give any criticism, I would say make the faces a little less generic and make sure the characters hold on to their personallities. It also doesn't seem to have any sound right now, but I assume that will be fixed. Despite this, I feel absolutely fine with giving this 5 stars right now.