VN Others Lending My NTR Girlfriend [v0.13.1] [phonegames]

[ffive]

Probably should have the NTR tag though.

Yeah, it's basically full-on NTR game. The MC isn't actually stupid like people complain -- he realizes what his full of herself girlfriend is doing, but at least on the route where you pick you don't like what's happening he's also pathetically whipped by her and too terrified to seriously confront her about it (something he admits to his best friend) probably because he's scared she'd just dump him if he did. So he'd rather delude himself "this is fine" by clinging to more and more stupid excuses to look the other way, or how what's going on doesn't matter and surely will end any minute now... all while his best friend, his girlfriend and her fling mock him about the girlfriend's affair more and more openly.

Olivia, on the other hand, seems to be a genuine moron:



(or alternatively, far smarter and slyer than she lets on. But i'll go with Occam's Razor here, i think)

 

[KofiCatto]

Why does she look like this girl from Another phone game

 

[Kurotori]

Not trying to throw shade here but I've played this game and my first impression on PC is that it scaled very awkwardly and stretched all around my screen making everything pixelated. The dialogue quality had a lot of spelling and grammatical errors and given that the vast majority of the content for mobile sims is text, it's pretty disappointing.


This snippet has a bit of what I'm talking about.

I am genuinely curious how this game got ~700 patrons. I think the current highest effort game is probably SmGF and it has a chunk less. I'm guessing the reason for this is this game was able to relist itself sooner than others so it benefit from a boost of visibility but there's way too many issues with this game, as per the reviews mention.

And this without mentioning "roleplay phone", the other game.

Well anyway, good luck to the developer. Hopefully they can salvage and make the game playable because it's currently a bit difficult to go through.

 

[meleeshikai]

An interesting premise, but that's all it is in the end. Every character is this game is some form of terrible.
The gf is a cheating whore, the 'friend' is anything but, the best friend is more of a plot device than a person and the mc is spineless and braindead. Any interest I had in this game died with this last update.

Still, best of luck to the dev and those of you that enjoy this type of content.
Just wanted to share my thoughts on the game.

 

[AjaySol]

Any one has 9.1 apk. Please

 

[QuiteQuiet]

An interesting premise, but that's all it is in the end. Every character is this game is some form of terrible.
The gf is a cheating whore, the 'friend' is anything but, the best friend is more of a plot device than a person and the mc is spineless and braindead. Any interest I had in this game died with this last update.

Still, best of luck to the dev and those of you that enjoy this type of content.
Just wanted to share my thoughts on the game.

Same. A few new(er) NTR games coming out lately are just... yeah.

Whatever happened to good, slow build NTR where it took time for the FMC to stop resisting? Instead, we're getting cheating slut GFs/wives, who've probably been cheating on MC long before the game took place.

 

[HisokaGin]

can any1 share 9.1?

 

[roleplaygame]

Not trying to throw shade here but I've played this game and my first impression on PC is that it scaled very awkwardly and stretched all around my screen making everything pixelated. The dialogue quality had a lot of spelling and grammatical errors and given that the vast majority of the content for mobile sims is text, it's pretty disappointing.

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This snippet has a bit of what I'm talking about.

I am genuinely curious how this game got ~700 patrons. I think the current highest effort game is probably SmGF and it has a chunk less. I'm guessing the reason for this is this game was able to relist itself sooner than others so it benefit from a boost of visibility but there's way too many issues with this game, as per the reviews mention.

And this without mentioning "roleplay phone", the other game.

Well anyway, good luck to the developer. Hopefully they can salvage and make the game playable because it's currently a bit difficult to go through.

Hi! Just want to say that I really like your game! Your game was one of the those type of games that I checked before releasing mine, it's an honor to have you here!

And about the grammar, english is not my native language, but some people on Discord has been very willing to help with that, so I hope I won't disappoint next time with those issues.

 

[roleplaygame]

Hi everyone! Dev here.


It took me a while to come back here because it was tough reading through some of the harsher comments, but I'm feeling much better now, thanks to our amazing community on Discord.

I want to let you know that I’ve read all the comments, and I’ll be addressing some of the issues raised in the next release. I won’t be making major changes, but I will be focusing on important ones. So, I’m sorry if I won't meet your expectations.

Here are a few of the things I’ll be working on:

• Fixing grammar.
• Fixing Windows scaling issue. I always build from a Mac, so I will build from a Windows next time.
• Improving the NTS route, so you can feel more comfortable knowing that she knows.
• Making it clearer that the MC isn’t dumb, he’s just playing along on purpose to fulfill his desire to see his girlfriend shared.
• Possibly adding more routes. Please don’t expect anything too far off the main story, just different ways to experience the same events.

That’s it for now! I hope the next update helps you love Emily a bit more.

 

[Kurotori]

Hi everyone! Dev here.


It took me a while to come back here because it was tough reading through some of the harsher comments, but I'm feeling much better now, thanks to our amazing community on Discord.

I want to let you know that I’ve read all the comments, and I’ll be addressing some of the issues raised in the next release. I won’t be making major changes, but I will be focusing on important ones. So, I’m sorry if I won't meet your expectations.

Here are a few of the things I’ll be working on:

• Fixing grammar.
• Fixing Windows scaling issue. I always build from a Mac, so I will build from a Windows next time.
• Improving the NTS route, so you can feel more comfortable knowing that she knows.
• Making it clearer that the MC isn’t dumb, he’s just playing along on purpose to fulfill his desire to see his girlfriend shared.
• Possibly adding more routes. Please don’t expect anything too far off the main story, just different ways to experience the same events.

That’s it for now! I hope the next update helps you love Emily a bit more.

Take harsh comments as an opportunity to improve the lacking areas. Not all criticism will be said in a nice way, just filter out the words and tone that you don't need and see if they are trying to say anything that you can use to improve. If not, then you can discard the comment.

This is a very good plan so far. I'll give you some advice to make a few visual elements of your look cleaner.
First of all, you can't use full size images in your chat screen because when you shrink them, they will look really pixelated. I suggest using something like paint.net application or a script to downscale (bilinear sampling) your images to a smaller size so you have 2 types: A smaller one for chat window, one for viewing at full screen or wallpaper etc.

I'm not sure how your font ended up pixelated, are you compressing a very large font? I would fix that too and then your interface should look cleaner. The chat log is always the main priority.

Same with the scaling at full screen. I would just lock that in a window mode.

For story, of course that's up to you but I would suggest figuring out what you want to write the most and listen to some useful feedback. A lot of people will give you recommendations on what they want to see but unless its a very common critique, they're just trying to get you to write what they want to see. Go with your gut on what you think is good. A game doesn't need an NTS route to be a good game. If it fits with the story, it would expand your audience a little but a good game will always be more successful than a game for everyone.

 

[Vampire_Lord]

the game is ntr but you whant to make a nts route ? what for? the hidden netorare or just netorare is what whe need here , even just cheating

 

[Neonviolet]

Hi everyone! Dev here.


It took me a while to come back here because it was tough reading through some of the harsher comments, but I'm feeling much better now, thanks to our amazing community on Discord.

I want to let you know that I’ve read all the comments, and I’ll be addressing some of the issues raised in the next release. I won’t be making major changes, but I will be focusing on important ones. So, I’m sorry if I won't meet your expectations.

Here are a few of the things I’ll be working on:

• Fixing grammar.
• Fixing Windows scaling issue. I always build from a Mac, so I will build from a Windows next time.
• Improving the NTS route, so you can feel more comfortable knowing that she knows.
• Making it clearer that the MC isn’t dumb, he’s just playing along on purpose to fulfill his desire to see his girlfriend shared.
• Possibly adding more routes. Please don’t expect anything too far off the main story, just different ways to experience the same events.

That’s it for now! I hope the next update helps you love Emily a bit more.

Like i said i love a good ntr but this feels a bit wierd if you are aiming for nts if she knows at least show a hint like how she learned about it an fmc pov of that moment the best friend telling her or something like that cause this feels to me no disrespect to anyone intended like the worst kind of whore fmc i have ever seen hell even in the most fucked up ntr something starts the chain of events like fmc getting blackmailed doing it to save the mc being forced or starts because of the mc wanting it so bad it turned to ntr. In her case I'm sorry but i just saw a lying whore .
Again this is just my opinion and no disrespect to anyone intended , i played a lot of nts ntr games both jp and west also watched a lot of ntr hentai by playing this i didn't feel anything in any of this story to why she is now cheating and enjoying it while borderline lying to mc give us something to work here that shows either she is really doing it for the mc like a secret chat between the best friend and her just shown to us not the mc if it really exists cause right now in my eyes she is the worst kinda cheating slut i have ever seen. But pls don't take any of this to heart it's just my opinion and I'm sharing it with you no disrespect to your vision or any of it just want to see the game improve but if it wants to show some new kind of ntr who the fmc is a whore who enjoys toying with the heart of her bf and then break him leaving him after all it's hitting a nail nobody ever did an ntr like this it feels like a breah of fresh air in nearly all of the ntrs i have seen the fmc is forced somehow or entered it unwilling but an fmc who is a whore with an unstoppable libbido thats new and feels good if it's the road you are aiming for and i look forward to see how bad she can get moving forward. Also wish you the best of luck because i know every project takes time to make and you are doing this with love

 

[kemmotar]

Hi everyone! Dev here.


It took me a while to come back here because it was tough reading through some of the harsher comments, but I'm feeling much better now, thanks to our amazing community on Discord.

I want to let you know that I’ve read all the comments, and I’ll be addressing some of the issues raised in the next release. I won’t be making major changes, but I will be focusing on important ones. So, I’m sorry if I won't meet your expectations.

Here are a few of the things I’ll be working on:

• Fixing grammar.
• Fixing Windows scaling issue. I always build from a Mac, so I will build from a Windows next time.
• Improving the NTS route, so you can feel more comfortable knowing that she knows.
• Making it clearer that the MC isn’t dumb, he’s just playing along on purpose to fulfill his desire to see his girlfriend shared.
• Possibly adding more routes. Please don’t expect anything too far off the main story, just different ways to experience the same events.

That’s it for now! I hope the next update helps you love Emily a bit more.

Hey there

Don't take the harsh comments to heart, you have a good game with great potential, but along potential it has issues, keep the good work where is good and try to fix the small issues you already pointed out.

Accepting criticism isn't easy, every child is beautiful in the eye of the parents, same happens with projects and I commend you on reading through the whole of the criticism and come up with what to improve, my personal criticism is on the narrative side, on Android there are not many errors (good job there) e cept the need to reset chapter because it doesn't show the responses sometimes.

You could use Sabrina more as a therapy friend, showing him and guiding him to accept his kink, and less as the "Haha, your girlfriend fucked Michael, you stupid cuck" kind of character she is in the last update, she and MC talking about his kink and how he enjoys being cheated without his girlfriend knowing he knows would give us a better picture of what you want and would make him look like a guy who is teared between revealing his kink and risk losing his girl, and less like a guy who has the mental ability of a rock

 

[AdventureTales]

No one ever makes Reverse NTR where the girls try to get you to cheat on your girlfriend. It's always the MC getting cucked

 

[DressedToThrill]

Hi everyone! Dev here.


It took me a while to come back here because it was tough reading through some of the harsher comments, but I'm feeling much better now, thanks to our amazing community on Discord.

I want to let you know that I’ve read all the comments, and I’ll be addressing some of the issues raised in the next release. I won’t be making major changes, but I will be focusing on important ones. So, I’m sorry if I won't meet your expectations.

Here are a few of the things I’ll be working on:

• Fixing grammar.
• Fixing Windows scaling issue. I always build from a Mac, so I will build from a Windows next time.
• Improving the NTS route, so you can feel more comfortable knowing that she knows.
• Making it clearer that the MC isn’t dumb, he’s just playing along on purpose to fulfill his desire to see his girlfriend shared.
• Possibly adding more routes. Please don’t expect anything too far off the main story, just different ways to experience the same events.

That’s it for now! I hope the next update helps you love Emily a bit more.

This is awesome news! I've been following this game because of the very enticing title, but understood that the story itself appeals more to the NTR-crowd. As and avid sharing-enthusiast, I'm glad to read that you will improve this route to make it more comfortable. But I will give you the following advice/suggestion:

Keep making the story you want to make. If that story is more geared towards NTR, then do that as your primary focus, and then make adjustments towards the NTS-route. Don't make a whole new story for the NTS-crowd, or for me. I think that will help you remain a focused writer and game developer for this game and story, not wasting time that would upset your paying and initial customers, but also give you a comfortable framework within to improve and try different things with minimum effort.

I might be rambling. Someone please help me be clear. I just want the NTRistas to remain happy, and be thankful for any NTS the dev is willing to offer.

 

[kedewess]

What an AWFUL girlfriend !! Forget the romance path, at this point I'm just hoping for a path where you can dump the fucking bitch

 

[Kurotori]

What an AWFUL girlfriend !! Forget the romance path, at this point I'm just hoping for a path where you can dump the fucking bitch

Dump path incoming haha

 

[Celestial86]

Hi everyone! Dev here.


It took me a while to come back here because it was tough reading through some of the harsher comments, but I'm feeling much better now, thanks to our amazing community on Discord.

I want to let you know that I’ve read all the comments, and I’ll be addressing some of the issues raised in the next release. I won’t be making major changes, but I will be focusing on important ones. So, I’m sorry if I won't meet your expectations.

Here are a few of the things I’ll be working on:

• Fixing grammar.
• Fixing Windows scaling issue. I always build from a Mac, so I will build from a Windows next time.
• Improving the NTS route, so you can feel more comfortable knowing that she knows.
• Making it clearer that the MC isn’t dumb, he’s just playing along on purpose to fulfill his desire to see his girlfriend shared.
• Possibly adding more routes. Please don’t expect anything too far off the main story, just different ways to experience the same events.

That’s it for now! I hope the next update helps you love Emily a bit more.

Hi dev,

Like some wrote in the comments before, it's just criticism, don't take it badly. Every criticism is good, it helps you grow and see what the community wants and needs. Good or bad criticism, it helps make your game more enjoyable.

I think you've a great thing to start with, the AI art looks nice it's just the story that gets cracked along the lines. In your game, the MC is visually confronted that his girlfriend is cheating on him as hard as possible, if he would not know, this could make the game more plausible but the fact that everyone knows and make just fun of him is just unpleasant. The MC has a kink of sharing, he's not honest with his feelings but being toyed with like that, everyone with a sane mind would have made an appraoch already or at least confront the girlfriend. The girl friend of the MC knows his kink, but in the last chapter, when she sended all the pictures, it just seems like she's humiliating him, friends should support each other and not bring you down and dig your grave down further.

If you want to go full NTR, be my guest, but maybe at that point (knowing the boyfriend is into NTS) adding an NTS route would make a lot of sense in your game. Which you'll apparently do, which will make others and myself included very happy.

At the end, do what you want to do, feel free to explore what you like. But a good reminder to reach out maybe a higher group of people isn't automatically a bad thing.

Keep going, I'm looking forward to the next update and hopefully I won't rage as much watching the MC getting toyed with by everyone. XD

 

[O1duvai]

Dump path incoming haha

According to the canons of the old Far Cry? Well, ending in five minutes.
Considering the genre and why we are all here, I think this is a fair option.

 

[ffive]

• Improving the NTS route, so you can feel more comfortable knowing that she knows.
• Making it clearer that the MC isn’t dumb, he’s just playing along on purpose to fulfill his desire to see his girlfriend shared.

If this is what is happening, then i'm afraid the game is really failing to get this across -- the girlfriend doesn't provide any real indication that she is aware of MC's inclination and her lying straight to MC's face that there's nothing happening, and aggressively shutting down any of his attempts to question her and gaslighting him about the whole thing make her act completely contradictory to this idea. The MC similarly doesn't give any real indication that he is going along for the sake of enjoying his kink; his reactions to receiving more and more pictures are shock and denial far more than indicating he wants more of it.

(in fact, the game even gives the player option to state outright he's not enjoying this at all and wants it to stop. If this choice is going to end up ignored then it's better to not provide it at all; having a predefined MC can be annoying, but still less than the game pretending you have any say in this matter but then just doing its own thing that's opposite of what the player picked)

The biggest issue with this setup is that if the girlfriend knows the MC wants to share her, and if MC also wants to share her and see it, then it's completely nonsensical that neither of them tells it to the other person:

* "Hey, i know you wanted me to fuck other guys. Sorry for not asking beforehand, but do you like it when it's happening (or would you rather me stop)?"
* "Hey, i know you're fucking Michael. That's actually something that i wanted to see so you know, you don't really need to lie to me about it or try to hide it."

Like seriously, why is neither of them doing something this simple and obvious? Because the only way it makes sense is if MC actually has a kink of having his gf cheat on him behind his back, not the kink of consensually sharing her with other guys. Otherwise, they're both idiots (but especially the gf) for apparently confusing one of these things for the other and then acting like it's the same thing.