VN Ren'Py Lens Lust [Prologue] [Dreamveil]

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testers123456

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I actually like hs2 avn's so I'm interested in this story but at the same time not sure what to make of the dev due to past reputation. If the game ends up abandoned then so be it.

Regarding content released so far a couple of things spring to mind that could be improved. Firstly, the goth in the park smoking seems to have a decal issue. Even though it turns out to be smoke, it looked like she had dirt or a rash on her face. Smoke is grey from cigarettes not black. Secondly, the cut off point for the games prologue end was bad and wasn't even a good point to use as a supposed cliff hanger. Lastly, this is more of a personal preference but it feels better to include at least one sex scene so that potential supporters can see what they'll be investing in. To give you an example, today I downloaded a sonic and tails parody avn and the sex scenes were really bad that didn't even include a cumshot/creampie just insertion. I doubt people will fork out support for trash like that.
 
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This was really funny, clever, and creative. I think you've really got something here Dreamviel.
Please don't abandon this project.
 
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So this was a solid prologue release. I didn't notice any grammatical errors, it was witty and funny, I liked visuals, the premise is straightforward but good writing can keep it interesting.

My only issue truly, i I've called the dev lazy in the past with other games that got abandoned due to things within those games, and sure enough, I felt it again at the end. With having the experience making games before, you don't need to be told/reminded/recommended to have 'save here' or update end warning, you're not a novice making a first VN and I at the very least expect the game to not abruptly end after a click with NO sort of dialogue at the end. It either laziness or incompetence.

I am intrigued enough to follow this, but I'm not going to have a high belief that this game will be completed given the track record as well as what I stated above. I would like to be proven wrong, but we'll see. Best of luck.
 
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Been waiting for a game like this ever since game systems stories became a thing. Some were released but most were straight up sh1t tbh.
Alrdy got a W form making a harem option, and you better make a harem ending or I will feel deeply betrayed (just a reminder harem ain't being FWB with multiple ppl it is being in a relationship with multiple)
I will be looking out for this one and maybe try in 1 or 2 updates.


GL dev/s






THX
 
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JohnnyR6

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This game definitely has potential. The female characters look good, the overall presentation is good, the story definitely has some funny moments, and the MC is likeable and has a charming/ interesting motivation.

Yes, it did end rather abruptly, which is not a great.

A few have mentioned previously abandoned games - well, let's wait and see. I certainly hope not. One of the previously abandoned games was clearly marked as a "test" though.
Personally, I think it's ok that someone tries and bounces onto something better. These aren't AAA-games; surely it's better to quit if it isn't working than to keep on labouring on something that didn't hit.

That said, this game is off to a good start, and I hope the dev sticks with it. One of the more promising of the HS bunch.

Best of luck to the dev/s.
 
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TheimmortalP said:
This was really funny, clever, and creative. I think you've really got something here Dreamviel.
Please don't abandon this project.
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Creative my ass, the game's plot just a complete copycat from a trash manhwa lol. just like his other game this would get abandoned also in the near future.
 
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Always wanted a pornhwa game system AVN, and this looks very nice as well. HS2 models but models are amazing, very clean, very nice. Dont abandon it man please. I see a great potential, insane potential. Abrupt af ending tho. Atleast put a "Thanks for playing the prologue, Support me here" or something like that lol.
 
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