VN Ren'Py Lesson in Loyalty [Ch.5] [RWA Studios]

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Saint Blackmoor

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IDontGetWomen said:
I had a scene with Olivia where we did 69 after stretching, it then jumped to me going to the house with the maid and her teasing me on the stairs, and then I'm back with olivia????
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Yeah, not sure what they were thinking with that. I believe there is another one of those "transitions" in the game, but I can't remember where.

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You had a real winner in chapters 1- 4, with a little dialogue polish from an English speaker, this would have been a hit.

EDit:
I see where they are going back and updating 1- 4 to the new content style, so it will eventually be a cohesive game.
I wish RWA Studios success.
 
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I had turned down every opportunity to make any progress with the neighbor (Kelly, I think?), and suddenly in chapter 5 you're forced to play Truth or Dare with her and her husband, then have anal sex with her in front of her passed out husband. So much BS in that kind of direction, I don't even mind spoiling without a warning.

If the game were like this in the first four chapters with the original developer, I never would have gotten to chapter 5. Also, I agree with others that the models don't look better. Just different. Linda looks worse.
 
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Feminine MC's are such a unwelcome detail when starting any avn adult game because that detail only tells you that this dev has created this mc off of their own life happenings or those they know of or been around which is not a good detail considering that this means that liberal ideas of how a man should be came from a liberal boy not man cause liberal men have become quite hard to find since tons have become women or are controlled by women and turned into beta boys for their more of a man woman that runs the ship and wears the pants in their relationships so its easy to see who is what dev and which were not the unlucky if born into this with no say so and if so We see all you who are fighting to break that mold but if we stepped in that would defeat the purpose of all who want to be men and not boys or beta boys like they have been lied to and found out they have another way and do not have to bend over for anyone cause men are the reason why all these different groups can sit and cry and try to ruin everything for others who are innocent of destroying society with so much corruption! Common sense has made it's way back into the light and it is taking over again thankfully!
 
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shamtiiomi said:
i think the rando shit they put is about to put as an statement nothing more,some shit about the old and the new team,...what they cant understand is they put down 2 other games on hold or even abandoment bcs the same grudges,....idiotic ppl
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Wouldn't really surprise me to see this one get set aside and "start fresh" on a new game with the new team. Unless they can fix their AI fuckups in chapter 5 I don't see this one going over well moving forward
 
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Assman_6969 said:
Feminine MC's are such a unwelcome detail when starting any avn adult game because that detail only tells you that this dev has created this mc off of their own life happenings or those they know of or been around which is not a good detail considering that this means that liberal ideas of how a man should be came from a liberal boy not man cause liberal men have become quite hard to find since tons have become women or are controlled by women and turned into beta boys for their more of a man woman that runs the ship and wears the pants in their relationships so its easy to see who is what dev and which were not the unlucky if born into this with no say so and if so We see all you who are fighting to break that mold but if we stepped in that would defeat the purpose of all who want to be men and not boys or beta boys like they have been lied to and found out they have another way and do not have to bend over for anyone cause men are the reason why all these different groups can sit and cry and try to ruin everything for others who are innocent of destroying society with so much corruption! Common sense has made it's way back into the light and it is taking over again thankfully!
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I didn't read it, but I gotta ask. Did you take a breath in between all those words? :ROFLMAO:
221-word paragraph that needs no punctuation. I think that's a world record. ;)
 
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Jericho85 said:
Gonna have to disagree with that one
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One picture taken out of context doesn't make a reasonable argument. I believe she is doing an "eye-roll " like I did to your comment, or she's getting some action. :KEK:
Semak34 said:
Only a bit? You are way too generous...
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Well, you do need to keep the developers' writing style intact, or you need to rewrite the entire script. Chapters 1-4 were okay, maybe a little sluggish in pace and phrasing. Chapter 5 did a 180 with a hip style, which sometimes had me saying, "WTF?"
In RWA Studios' defense, they said they will revamp 1-4 to match later chapters.
 
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Saint Blackmoor said:
One picture taken out of context doesn't make a reasonable argument. I believe she is doing an "eye-roll " like I did to your comment, or she's getting some action. :KEK:

Well, you do need to keep the developers' writing style intact, or you need to rewrite the entire script. Chapters 1-4 were okay, maybe a little sluggish in pace and phrasing. Chapter 5 did a 180 with a hip style, which sometimes had me saying, "WTF?"
In RWA Studios' defense, they said they will revamp 1-4 to match later chapters.
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neither actually. In that scene, MC was hugging her from behind and she was looking up at him. She was legitimately that ugly. Vilkas games had notoriously ugly girls in them. Many had weirdly protruding upper lips. They had to go back many times to rework the girls because they were so ugly.

Long story short, yeah RWA girls are easily better looking than the Vilkas versions.

I think the best difference though was that instead of going back at starting the whole VN from scratch again like Vilkas would have done, RWA instead chose to start their new material where the last team ended. That’s an instant improvement over Vilkas.
 
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