VN Ren'Py Lesson in Loyalty [Ch.6] [RWA Studios]

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TribalJOB

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Jun 5, 2020
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Another AVN down the drain.
Well, that’s another AVN I’m dropping.

Since the “studio” change:
  • everyone talks like jarheads straight out of a cheap military flick
  • characters have lost all consistency - just empty shells now
  • I didn’t give a damn about the neighbor, yet the game forces me to fuck her anyway
Another soulless fap game with zero depth..

To be clear: Chapters 1 to 4 (under the "original" (?) dev) had real character development.
Relationships took time. There was buildup. You felt something.
Then Chapter 5 hits and suddenly, the MC just looks at a woman and she drops her panties.
No tension, no progression, no subtlety. Just straight-up porn logic.

And the worst part?
Right at the start of Chapter 5, they insert this “Important Announcement” where the new studio basically trashes the previous dev’s work:

"What you’ve experienced so far didn’t reflect our standards. From now on, you’ll experience the true vision of RWA Studios..."​

They promise smoother transitions, deeper emotional storytelling, richer dialogues.
What do we actually get?
Instead, we get insta-sex scenes, cardboard characters, and a storyline that now feels like it was written by a horny teenager with a rendering engine.

Takes some serious nerve to shit on the original devs when they’re the reason there’s even a Patreon fanbase to begin with.
Without their work, there wouldn’t be a “Chapter 5” to ruin in the first place.

If this is your 'true vision', then it’s a vision I want nothing to do with.
Don’t trash the previous dev’s work only to turn the project into a pornhub-tier garbage.
 

godscoper

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Jul 16, 2023
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Another AVN down the drain.
Well, that’s another AVN I’m dropping.

Since the “studio” change:
  • everyone talks like jarheads straight out of a cheap military flick
  • characters have lost all consistency - just empty shells now
  • I didn’t give a damn about the neighbor, yet the game forces me to fuck her anyway
Another soulless fap game with zero depth..

To be clear: Chapters 1 to 4 (under the "original" (?) dev) had real character development.
Relationships took time. There was buildup. You felt something.
Then Chapter 5 hits and suddenly, the MC just looks at a woman and she drops her panties.
No tension, no progression, no subtlety. Just straight-up porn logic.

And the worst part?
Right at the start of Chapter 5, they insert this “Important Announcement” where the new studio basically trashes the previous dev’s work:

"What you’ve experienced so far didn’t reflect our standards. From now on, you’ll experience the true vision of RWA Studios..."​

They promise smoother transitions, deeper emotional storytelling, richer dialogues.
What do we actually get?
Instead, we get insta-sex scenes, cardboard characters, and a storyline that now feels like it was written by a horny teenager with a rendering engine.

Takes some serious nerve to shit on the original devs when they’re the reason there’s even a Patreon fanbase to begin with.
Without their work, there wouldn’t be a “Chapter 5” to ruin in the first place.

If this is your 'true vision', then it’s a vision I want nothing to do with.
Don’t trash the previous dev’s work only to turn the project into a pornhub-tier garbage.
That perfectly sums up my opinion on Chapter 5/New Studio. It doesn't bother me, I'm planning to put on an ignore list once chapter 6 comes out/ if it continues, go down the drain.
 

orana

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Oct 18, 2017
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Gonna have to disagree with that one :ROFLMAO:

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Could care less about a one or even a few scenes where the faces look awkward. Its all subjective of course, but the bodies of the old build was way nicer which is why I tried the game to begin with. The bodies were much sexier in previous build and when I saw the newer models it was a full turn off compared to the original.
 
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huddlestonkeith33

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Apr 14, 2023
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I thought it was fine you over here trash in the game it's a sex game bro there's bound to be sex you want character development that takes forever to get to the sex stop playing games and go to the real world to do that
 

huddlestonkeith33

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Apr 14, 2023
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Not only that but the game is basically this dude Tudor's kids with moms that are hot horny and have husbands who don't really give them attention what do you think's going to happen you can only develop the character so much eventually girls going to pounce you're only thinking in the mindset of a guy you got to put your mind how woman would think
 

TribalJOB

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Jun 5, 2020
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Not only that but the game is basically this dude Tudor's kids with moms that are hot horny and have husbands who don't really give them attention what do you think's going to happen you can only develop the character so much eventually girls going to pounce you're only thinking in the mindset of a guy you got to put your mind how woman would think
I understand you have your own opinion, and that’s perfectly fine.
I expressed mine, based on what I look for in a story.
You are free to agree or disagree — that’s your right.
No need to argue further: we simply have different expectations, and that’s okay.
 

Dessolos

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Jul 25, 2017
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I thought it was fine you over here trash in the game it's a sex game bro there's bound to be sex you want character development that takes forever to get to the sex stop playing games and go to the real world to do that
Haven't played this update yet but I disagree with this. A game can have good deveolopment and sex , it's only when a dev rushed to sex because "porn game" because fans gets mad they take to long for the sex and decide to speed things along. Which is why I think it's nice to have a mix of slow burn and medium / quick burn character so you get best of both worlds.

Now it's a completely different story when it's meant to be a sex first type of a game.
 

spooge_nugget

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May 7, 2017
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I've just played this for the first time, and this is my critique.


(Pre RWA Studios)

The MC is absolutely pathetic at the start. He doesn't need to be some kind of Super-Chad and there would be nothing wrong with him starting out a little awkward/introverted/lacking in confidence, but it's excessive.

The sex scene with Jackson (famous athlete/Olivia's husband) and a random fangirl comes out of nowhere and is completely unnecessary. The fact that he's a cheat could have been established without the actual sex scene.

WTF. There's a second random and unnecessary sex scene not involving the MC?!?!

And a third sex scene not involving the MC, but at least that one is avoidable.

It's weird how the MC went from struggling to string a simple sentence together to Mr. Confidence in a single leap. There was no real progression/character development.

Scenes jump where they shouldn't. It goes from blowing a load in Olivia's mouth, to walking down the street and heading to Maeve's. Then it goes from Greeting Charlie, back to just after finishing with Olivia. Then from Douchebag Jackson saying "Of course, focus on your work, dude." back to Charlie and the MC thinking "(Better than I expected.)".


(Post RWA Studios)

The attempted "cool speak"/slang really misses the mark.

Why do Oliver and Kelly refer to the MC as "they"? I guess it's not too surprising, given that RWA Studios have made his face more feminine. What is their obsession with making effeminate MC's?! The MC was fine before. His features did not need softening.
 

noobchan51515

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May 6, 2020
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what the heck happened its like this a different mc and why when i did not flirt with the neighbor woman at all why was i forced to cluck her hubby and what is this new job he misses a important meeting told he is not a "rockstar" then he is promoted to i assume her job and why is he saying Charlie is a lost cause he said the last time he was doing great what happened this is like to different people
 

iloveboobsandstuff

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Mar 15, 2018
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Took some balls to put a notice right before the beginning of Chapter 5 to tell a new studio took over and it's going to be way better in every aspect to do the completely opposite and destroy an amazing VN by making it bland garbage. Why on earth would you change the stunning and unique models we haven't seen in other VNs to completely generic cookie cutter models? Totally ruined these 2 gorgeous women. 1746430981571.png
 

Dessolos

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Took some balls to put a notice right before the beginning of Chapter 5 to tell a new studio took over and it's going to be way better in every aspect to do the completely opposite and destroy an amazing VN by making it bland garbage. Why on earth would you change the stunning and unique models we haven't seen in other VNs to completely generic cookie cutter models? Totally ruined these 2 gorgeous women. View attachment 4808556
as long as the redhead and the one with the kid that tutoring or something isn't changed I don't care but I kind like the one with the green hair
 

Miranha157

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Guys, from what I understood, VILKAS was the studio responsible for the 3D of the characters, probably the post-processing in Photoshop as well, RWA is a study that uses generic 3D, it's ridiculous to see the MC looking like his girlfriend or another friend, this game is better abandoned or the responsible dev learns to make a decent 3D, because if it continues like this it's just decadence!
 
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Hey there, Loyalty Crew!
Chapter 5 is out and live, and we’re thrilled to see so many of you enjoying it! ❤

The positive feedback has been energizing—and so has the constructive criticism. We’re here with a quick update to show you where we are, where we’re headed, and how we’re responding to your voices.

✅ Full Steam Ahead: Chapter 6 in Progress
As you’ll see from the new progress bar, we’re already deep into development on Chapter 6. Visuals are being produced, scenes are being written, and we’re continuing to refine our process to make sure every release feels better than the last.

Backward Updates in the Background
Yes—we are updating the earlier chapters.

Yes—it’s a complete overhaul of Chapters 1–4.

No—you won’t see those changes yet.

We’ve decided to wait until all four early chapters are fully revised before pushing them as an update. We don’t want to confuse players or disrupt the flow with half-finished retrofits.

So while you're always getting new content first, just know that the polishing team is working quietly in the background to make the beginning of the game just as strong as the latest chapter.

️ Responding to Your Feedback
We’ve received some valuable feedback from longtime supporters, and we want to take a moment to respond directly:

“Please do something about the writing… it all just screamed ‘I’m trying really REALLY hard to sound hip!’”
We hear you. Some of the tone and language in Chapter 5 didn’t land as naturally as intended. Our goal was to give the game a more modern, relaxed voice—but we understand that it sometimes felt forced. We're reviewing the dialogue style going forward, especially in scenes meant to feel more emotional or character-driven. Authenticity > buzzwords. Point taken.

“Why did you change the MC’s face?”
There was no intentional redesign of the character. However, during the transition to a new rendering system and updates to the Genesis figure base, some facial structure details naturally shifted. The mole was removed, yes—but other subtle differences are the result of technical improvements, not artistic reimagining.

“Please don’t ruin this game with AI-generated writing…”
We addressed this in detail here:


To summarize: We’re not using AI-generated scripts, and we’ve clarified internal workflows to ensure dialogue stays human, grounded, and emotionally resonant. We’re already seeing the difference—and we’ll keep improving.

Language Poll & Patch
Don’t forget, the language patch is on the way!

We’ll be adding full translations soon—and you get to decide which ones come first. If you haven’t already, make sure to vote in the ongoing poll.



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With gratitude,
RWA Studios
 
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