Hi
Sieglinnde !
Finally had the time to play the next update, turns out it is actually two versions now.
First the Good: The vanilla/romance route shows real promise into which directions it can go in the future. Besides the characters can be really cute. Fun playing it.
I am not a fan of NTR, so I speeded through these paths, but for the NTR crowd the various characters show enough assholishness and emotional distress to be pleasing to them. I am sure the NTR fans will be ok going onwards.
Now for the "Sharing" path we already had so much discussion about. I have to give it to you and lift my virtual hat, it is a rare occurance that I get more annoyed and pissed off by a game than I was with the older version! I did not even reach the end of the update, I quit well before. There comes a situation where the MC and Arianna are at the gym. When I saw this, my first(!) thought was paraphrased:"The MC is depicted like a snivelling dishrag, because it is the only way Sieglinne could halfway enact the unbelievable forgiveness Arianna got. I sincerely hope that he/she resists making the MC lose to her, but I think it will happen."
It got even "better"! The MC goes down like a potato sack from a hit even a baby would not have felt much. I quit LTNI right there! A wimp has more spine than this MC!
Now I read in one of
Griev posts that even on the "Sharing"(in name only) path, the MC is good at fighting? WTF? The whole "sharing" path you went out of your way to depict the MC as a gelded, limpdicked doormat, having problems standing up to an earthworm in the garden, but he can fight to make an army instructor proud? That is absurd!
I know/estimate that you painted the MC here like a pegged beta dishrag to make his unbelievble forgiveness towards Arianna swallowable. I think deep down you know you went totally overboard with the NTR Arianna did at the start of this path, it is too much and the betrayals too great to be forgiven. There are deeds that can be forgiven, even really big fuckups can be forgiven under specific circumstances, but you depicted the Arianna of the "sharing" path with few redeemable qualities, it is worse in that she knew how hurt the MC was by what happened with Queen.
I wrote several times in earlier posts that Arianna goes way too far, to tone down what she does to stay believable. There is a difference between one or two "oops" in the heat of the moment (should not happen, but we are all human and it can be forgiven) and what you made Arianna do, including many players estimating Arianna was on the fast lane to become Tyrone´s girlfriend.
For a MC to forgive Arianna in the path you depicted here, you need to tone and cut down her transgressions! One can forgive Arianna if the scope of her deeds is just "bad", but as you depicted it here she went far too far!
As for the girls coming in if the MC does not forgive Arianna, that should be Mallory (who seems to care and developing a crush) or Queen (the MC and her relationship was a comedy of errors and wellmeant, but ultimately bad advice, might have a second chance)
Still I wish you luck and success with LTNI! (But I am not sure I will return to play it, sorry )